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College Writing Exam Error Analysis

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Elizabeth Nesius
Elizabeth Nesius

Passaic County Community College requires students to pass an exit exam--College Writing Exam--in order to graduate. This presentation shows the results of a study of failing essays to see where students are falling short of passing.

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