How To Write Response Essay

In WR 121 this term the teacher teaches many things such as summary articles, evaluation, and
response essays or articles, but the most challenging is writing a response essay. I realize that the
writing process is similar playing tennis process. In research essays, students are required to do a lot
of research papers to find important, credible and important sources that could be responsive to my
topic. Students researched many subjects, and I felt interesting to respond to other author's ideas.
Before students answered the ideas of the authors, they spend the time to research many articles, and
then they chose credible and important information to put it in my essay. It was my problems because
I didn't do well about connecting information together, and...show more content...
After teacher gave a low pass for that essay, I attempted to improve my weakness for writing every
day. I learn to develop a better arrangement and write essays with strong ideas, so my writing
become well than the beginning of this term. I realize that writing a response essay such as
practicing tennis. If people want to become good players, they should learn from others and the
internet. I learn tennis techniques such as how to serve, volley, smash, backhand, forehand on the
internet and other players. I usually look for videos on YouTube. I found out many video sources
on YouTube, and choose videos that people usually watch and popularize in the world. The Internet
contains a large helpful sources, but applying them into practice are rough. I must experience
hardships, exercised to improve my techniques, so my tennis skills increase as in the writing
process. Every time playing tennis, I always think about my writing. If I desire to improve writing
and tennis, I need to practice, and research resources on the Internet, and then use it in writing essays
and practicing
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Reflection Paper On Ted Talk
For this assignment, I chose to watch a Ted Talk that focused on the importance of understanding
differences. It is entitled Love No Matter What and is the culmination of years of research done
by Andrew Solomon. I chose this Ted Talk because I thought it would be interesting to hear about
different lived experiences that people have endured. One of the huge ideas I have learned
throughout this leadership course and all our topics and conversation is that we all have different
lived experiences. It is our lived experiences that make us special and individual. Love No Matter
What focused on this essential idea and how important differences are. The topic of this Ted Talk
completely reflects what has been said in our leadership class as well as what I think a student
leader at Western Oregon University should be. Solomon's talk is centered around the
relationship of parents and children and accepting and loving children, but the ideas expressed in
his talk can be applied to any human relationship. I believe Western is a university that deeply
prides itself in its student diversity and acceptedness of said diversity. The Western that I know,
and love, understands the true necessity of diversity and wishes to be accepting of diversity in all
of its forms. To me, listening to this Ted Talk was very emotional and personal. I have been
incredible blessed with parents in my life that love and accept me the way I am. However, I have not,
or at least not much, challenged them in

Crisis Management Response Plan Essay
An effective crisis management response plan outlines specific procedures for administrator,
teachers, and students during evacuation emergencies. Administrators work with teachers, students,
parents, law enforcement officers, business and community members, to develop an effective
emergency and crises plan. The administrator provides leadership in developing and monitoring the
school safety plan and also establishes procedures for emergency evacuation and crisis management
at different stages of the plan. However, an effective leader develops a comprehensive prevention
education plan, and regularly reviews the code of conduct manual for revisions and current laws.
The emergency and crisis plan identifies the designated people to contact...show more content...
The mission of the Substance Abuse Unit (SAU) School and Safety Committee is to ensure the plan
is simple and can be coordinated in response to appropriate circumstances and conditions during a
crisis. In review of the Substance Abuse Unit (SAU) Campus Emergency and Crisis Management
Plan the School Administrator established a School Safety Committees to provide teachers and staff
training on the components of the Campus Crisis Management Plan. The School and Safety
Committee primary duties were to review the effectiveness of the plans; safety, security practices and
procedures for a possible emergency and crisis evacuation process, review safety and security best
practices and provide a comprehensive safety school plan for the campus, submit findings,
recommendations, implementation strategies, timeline, and fiscal budget, and corrective plan of
action to the superintendent , instructional manager, Dallas County facility manager, and school
administrator.
The effectiveness of any response to a crisis is strongly linked to the extent and appropriateness of
the planning and preparation process. The Substance Abuse Unit (SAU) School Safety and School
Committee compiled a Needs Assessment Survey that is structured to address a variety of threats
that might affect the school community. The purpose of

How to Write a Reading Response Essay
How to Write a Reading Response Essay
What is a Reading Response Essay?
A Reading Response essay: * Summarizes what you read. * Gives your reaction to the text.
Your reaction will be one or more of the following: * Agreement/disagreement with the ideas in the
text. * Reaction to how the ideas in the text relate to your own experience. * Reaction to how ideas
in the text relate to other things you've read. * Your analysis of the author and audience. * Your
evaluation of how this text tries to convince the reader and whether it is effective.
Bottom of Form
Reading Response Introduction and Conclusion Ideas Introduction| Conclusion| frame story: start a
story (personal or in reading)| Finish the story|...show more content...
Or you could open with a dilemma or problem and then close with the solution. A different version
of that is to re–tell the same story in the conclusion with a different (usually better) ending.
Examples: * On an essay about cell phone use in cars, you could open with a scenario showing a
person getting a call while driving and thinking about what to do. In the conclusion, you could have
the end of the scenario–maybe the driver pulls over to take the call, or decides to let voicemail take
it. * On an essay about dealing with a family member with Alzheimer's, you could open with a
conversation between family members trying to figure out what to do. You can conclude with a
conversation between the same people after they have decided to place that person in a nursing
home. * On an essay about oil drilling in the Gulf, you could open by describing vividly the
oil–soaked coastline and the dying wildlife. You could conclude with what that coastline looks like
now. * On any topic which you have personal experience, you can open with part of your story, and
then conclude with the ending of your story.
Transition and Thesis
Paragraph 2: Transition by explaining what the author of the article you have written has to say
about this topic. Briefly explain the main points of the article that you want to talk about. Then you
will give your thesis.

Emotional Response Essay
WEEK TWO I had not considered emotional history to a great extent before the seminar, instead
focusing on the 'everyday' aspect of infant mortality (IM). Dyhouse and Newton's articles presented
questions, including why concern over IM grew, and why males were stoic rather than expressing
emotion; something I had not acknowledged as part of Victorian mannerism, attributing it to the
patriarchies of the postmodern world. Questioning whether the sources used by Newton portrayed
true emotions or were merely presentations of such expanded my understanding, and presented
further questions. Can we truly understand past emotions when all we have is a representation and
cannot experience them the same way? I suggested that we can merely interpret the presentation of
emotion, not the true emotions of the past, however, I now acknowledge that there is something of a
perpetual emotional response (PER) to the death of infants, and that we are able to interpret the
past's emotions through this understanding....show more content...
The ruling classes had to maintain the empire, and as such, technocrats were forced to act to stop
the population decreasing. The rise of working class consciousness (WCC) was a reason behind
social reforms, as the elite wished to control their subordinates to a greater extent. I considered my
own perception of IM after the seminar. With no experience of it myself, I was unable to determine
whether a PER was entirely accurate, although I turned to examples I knew of. This brought my
attention back to AriГЁs' 'attitudes to death' and the changes in death's perception between the
Victorian period and

Creative Response Essay
Creative Response – Hunger Games Questions Quick note: I am not writing with my own person as
a character in this. I found inspiration, rolled with it. Sorry. – [ 7 ]– " The train ride is smooth, and
all the way there, I am left thinking of the event that will soon follow. I can't remember what
hunger games I'm participating in. The number doesn't matter anymore, it's a sure fact I'm going to
die, so I haven't held that much attention to it. It may be the 73rd. I don't know. All I can think of
is home. Home life wasn't bad, even considering the expansive hours I spent in the forest, chopping
down trees. I have a small amount of brawn, enough to be held as a proper competitor, I guess. My
mother told me that district twelve are always the weakest,...show more content...
"I'm Leon Pyresmith, and I'm going to be your stylist." – [7] – Fast forward an hour or two, and I
feel like something mystical, because I was dressed like something mystical. My face turns pink
with a light brush as I look into the mirror, if you were to look at me now, you would see a tree
spirit, a dryad. Not the sad boy who wanted to save a young life. It brought tears to my eyes, like
many of the events that have happened today. My skin was shimmering, intricate designs painted
on my face and over my arms and legs, the dark, robes that looked like leaves fell flatteringly over
my body, not revealing, but flattering. It was so perfect, it didn't feel real. There's no way that the
outfit could have been made to fit so well, to accommodate... everything different. Unless. I push the
thought out of my mind – it's not important anyway. What's important, is that I feel incredible, I feel
unstoppable, I feel like I could even possibly stand a chance in the games, and I... I feel like myself,
for the first time in my life, and I'm not even dressed like something I can ever

Personal Experience During an Interview Essay
When I think of the word interview I think of it as a series of questions asked from one person to
another to seek information. In my previous assessment we were asked to interview a fellow peer,
on their personal experience of QIBT so far this year. We were not given any question, but made to
think of our own. As we were interviewing our peer another peer was marking us on our overall
ability to interview. This piece of reflective writing will be an explanation of what I thought my
personal strengths and weaknesses were throughout my interview.
Through reflecting on my previous interview I was able to pull apart both positives and negatives
aspects of my interview allowing myself time to look into the effects that the negative...show more
content...
Whilst the open ended questions allowed deeper responses as spoken about above it was also
evident that these questions allowed Mary Doe to feel comfortable throughout the interview as she
was allowed to express her own open thought rather than having a written script of multiple smaller
closed ended questions. REF
The safe environment was carried through the whole interview. I concluded the interview by asking
Mary Doe if she had any concerns or further questions she would like to talk about. This continues
the safe environment feel, which I created throughout the whole interview.
Once finishing the interview I recall thinking that I had forgotten one major factor within the
interview, which was taking notes. This would have to be my only major weakness that I found I
had whilst interviewing Mary Doe. At the time I was so focused on eye contact, so it was really
easy for myself to just ask the questions and get lost in the answer whilst trying to figure out what
question to ask next. The lack of note taking in response to Mary Doe's answers left me forgetting
to listen one hundred percent as I was switching focus to what came next. When researching how I
can improve this skill there was a lot of positive feedback on how to strengthen this skill. One that I
shall be focusing on for future interviewing opportunities is to continually jot down small phrases as
spoken, any specific information that is useful

How To Write A Rhetorical Response
I agree with Danielle, that the writers audience is toward the people who are ruing the island by
logging. I think this because in the essay he tries to say that he has nothing against logging, logger,
or the logging industry, but he tries to say why can't we, while having a chance stop this. Also, the
author continuously throughout the essay talks about his love for the island and all its beauty and
wanting to protect it. The author's organizational strategies. While reading the essay, I picked up on
a few organizational strategies that the author used, those being: Problem–solution– Bill Reid
proposes that the problem occurring is the logging of an island he loves, Windy Bay. He later on
says that we could stop while we have a chance

How To Write A Reflective Reading Response
Reflective Reading Response In the chapter, "Equal Sharing Problems and Children's Strategies for
Solving them" the authors recommend fractions be introduced to students through equal sharing
problems that use countable quantities because they can be shared by people or other groupings. In
other words, quantities can be split, cut, or divided. Additionally, equal sharing problems assist
children to create "rich mental models "for fractions (p.10). Prior to reading the chapter, I had no
idea that the strategies students use to solve fractions had names. Such strategies include: additive
coordination, ratio, repeating halves, etc.. I always referred to other strategies as inventive strategies
or the common "other way" to get the solution.

How To Write A Response Speech
Today I will be typing a response essay to a political speech. The political speech that I chose was
when Former President Barack Obama gave his last speech to the United Nations which happened
near the end of last year. Barack Obama stated in his speech that "Indeed, our International order
has been so successful that we take it as a given that great powers no longer fight world wars; that
the end of the Cold War lifted the shadow of nuclear Armageddon; that the battlefields of Europe
have been replaced by Peaceful union; that China and India stay on a path of remarkable growth." I
chose this quote because it shows examples of great things that have happened around the world. A
couple of things that should be pointed out is when Barack Obama was speaking in the YouTube
video it showed faces of other world Leaders and representatives from other country's it seemed
like they had mixed emotions about the speech some showed a facial expression of acceptance
some seemed in deep thought and others showed faces of concern. Also, the reasoning on why this
speech was given is because he was trying to convince fellow world leaders to work together and
to criticize those who seek a simple rejection of global integration. When the speech was over effect
started to take place where some country's...show more content...
Also that Barack Obama gave his last speech to the UN late last year this is a large problem and
he tried to convince other world leaders to form an alliance or some form of agreeable contract or
something with other countries to prevent large problems like huge wars that could spread and
become much worse than before. I told my readers what took place after the speech and what is
taking place as you read this essay. Finally, let's just hope stronger agreements are made for specific
countries to prevent any large war in the

Poetry Response Essay
For the rewrite assignment, you noted that the poem is very circular, as there is not any evident
logical flow in my writing. After re–reading the poem, I agree. You instructed me to, "write this
poem as something that keeps moving forward in its philosophical exploration... Then, rewrite the
poem to about one and a half times its current length, moving it continually forward." I re–evaluated
the poem and removed some lines that I thought where unnecessary. I also increased the length from
twelve to eighteen lines. Further, I wrote philosophical progression into the revised poem; instead of
being random ramblings (which, ironically, might be the fate of this solipsist after he discovers what
he believes to be the truth), the poem now flows with...show more content...
However, the questions I ask about her double standards are worth examining (at least, worth it
enough to include it in the poem). Her infidelity in the face of claiming monogamy was one thing
that stood out to me during the relationship, so I included it in the poem. The primary critique
comes with the lines, "Sure, blame it on your friend Price cause she was "pressuring" you/But she
be cuffed with someone too? What kind of feminist are you?//She claims she's for monogamy
question it, that's misogyny/But how many real feminists use the booze as an apology?/I'm trying
to be constant but she is acting like it's different/If a man do it, he trippen', but a woman, she
indifferent." She initially blames her infidelity on peer pressure from her friend Price, who was also
cheating with some random guy at Bowdoin College, but this seems contrary to the empowering and
independent message of feminism. Should not one be able to make her own choices without being
controlled by others? Further, when her friends tried to justify her actions by mentioning the
possibility of alcohol involved, I could not help but consider the rejection of alcohol as an excuse
for men by feminists in similar

Reflection On My English 101 Experience
Reflecting on My English 101 Experience I used to consider writing as tumble words from your
mind, write, read it through, fix minor mistakes, and done. However, you rarely get successful. The
truth is many students, including myself, struggle with starting to write a word, or getting stuck in
the middle without knowing the main point of the writing. After completing English 101, I can
explain the writing process, evaluate the strengths of my essay, and identify my weaknesses.
Throughout English 101, I learned that the following the writing process was imperative. Before
taking this class, I use to always skip the pre–writing step considering that it is just an easy and
unnecessary step. Consequently, I struggled to figure how to start writing, and most importantly I
struggled to figure out the main point while writing the draft. And then I finish the first draft close to
the deadline that I do not have time to read it not to mention revising. It was after I started this class
that learned that pre–writing is vital, and requires time and attention as it holds the base of the
whole writing. My professor used different analogies such as blueprint for building and map for
navigation to explain the importance. It really speeded up my writing after I started to utilize it. I
have learned outlining before, but part of the pre–writing that I was fortunate enough to learning in
English 101 is the writing triangle. Even before outlining, the topic, purpose, and audience of the

Reader Response: the Lottery
Reader Response #2: The Lottery "The Lottery" is a short story written by Shirley Jackson and
published in 1948. The title of the story initially leads readers to believe the story is going to be
about someone winning some kind of prize. Even the opening of the story seems to protest any foul
play or cruel behavior. What the reader is introduced to is a seemingly friendly gathering of a small
village community, members all gathered around anxiously awaiting their drawing for the lottery.
The village members all chatter amongst one another in a tone that kind neighbors would take with
one another. To the surprise of the reader, the story provides a shocking twist. The story is not about
someone winning a prize. Instead the story reveals...show more content...
She certainly succeeded in shocking her audiences with the unforeseeable twist that arose at the
end of the story. I did not expect the ending that I read. Even when I realized that the woman of
the family who drew the winning ticket was arguing against the winnings, I had not ever thought
that perhaps someone would die as a result. The fact that children were also allowed to participate
in the drawing is what really made my stomach churn. Jackson certainly provided a detailed
enough picture in such a few short pages to pull a physical reaction from me. I cannot rightfully
say that the story was a good one, but it definitely was brilliant. It still amazes me that an author
can write so descriptively and so intelligently that he or she can pull physical, mental, and
emotional reactions from the person reading the story. In this case, I had several reactions to the
story. Not only did I feel disgusted at how the community members were so eager to stone the
woman to death, I also felt a mind–numbing sensation at the fact that such violence and cruelty
closely mirrors our own modern society without the archaic practices. As a modern society, we cut
down the individual members of society in new ways. While we may not string them up to hang
them, we do string them up publicly for the purpose of cruelty and humiliation. Just look at
cyberbullying or mass

How to Resolve Conflict Essay
Conflict is in inevitable part of our everyday lives. Since no two people view things in the exact
same manner, disagreement will most certainly arise at some point in time. Conflict is simply a
difference of opinion and is considered to be a normal part of our everyday lives. There are several
different forms of conflict and not all of them are considered to be bad. This paper will discuss the
causes of conflict, the different types of conflict, and barriers to conflict. According to
Communication Research Associates, conflict is a condition of imbalance within an individual
(Communication Research Associates, 2005, p. 178). Keep in mind that just as there are
disadvantages to conflict, there are also several advantages.
In order to...show more content...
For example, if you are at work and walk by someone's desk and accidently knock their pen on the
floor. All of sudden, the person lashes out and starts to curse at you. Knowing that this is not the
norm for your coworker, it would safe to assume that they are under some form of stress or have
other things on their mind. By knowing this, it becomes easier to respond in a more responsible,
tempered, and appropriate, manner. Sometimes ego can become a cause for conflict as well. There
may come a time when someone is wrong about something or they may have made a mistake but
they refuse to admit it. Because they have such a high ego, they may become self–protective of their
situation, therefore causing conflict because they refuse to admit they were wrong. Instead they may
choose to become persistent in standing their ground, whether they are right or wrong.
During communication, if the intended goals are not clearly identified, there is a greater
possibility for error and it could further aggravate a situation, causing conflict. Because each
individual is different there are bound to be clashes within certain personality types. For example,
if someone prefers to discuss everything in detail and I prefer to get straight to the point then we
could have a personality clash because we are not seeing things eye–to–eye. They may view me as
being incompetent or irresponsible while I would

How to Write 3 Paragraph Essay Responses
How to write 3 paragraph essay responses Before you read: Take note of the title, the author's name
and look to see if there is any biographical information on the author. Have you heard of this author
before? You might want to Google him/her. Go on the internet to look over the periodical
(publication) that the article came from. What do you already know about the subject, the
publication or the website it came from? I recommend that you print out a hard copy of the reading.
That way, you can write on the document if you have comments about the material, questions or just
want to make sure that you "get" what the author is saying. While you read: Put question marks by
anything you don't understand or want clarified....show more content...
This is what Garamond looks like. This is what Arial looks like. (If your paper font doesn't look like
these three styles, it is not formatted correctly.) Use the same font and size consistently throughout
your paper– no big fonts for titles, no bold words for emphasis (or titles) and no fancy fonts for
fun or to be cute. Underlines should only be used for titles of certain works, like books and movie
titles. (Quotation marks should be used for titles of smaller works, such as articles, poems, song
titles, and short stories.) The rules may vary depending on the work in question, so consult your
instructor for any other concerns. Last name (2) Double space everything. Margins should be
one inch all the way around the paper (go to "File" then "Page Setup"). Keep in mind not to add
extra lines before or after a title or between paragraphs. In addition, remember to set a header,
which is your last name and the page number on the top right hand corner of each and every page.
There are plenty of other aspects to MLA format (such as use of numbers, quotes and citations)
which we will discuss in the coming weeks. Please note: titles of smaller works like magazine
/newspaper articles, songs, poems, etc are in "quotation marks". Longer works, like a book,
newspaper, magazine or CD are underlined or italicized, but not both. Choose one and stick with

Examples Of Reader Response Theory
Reader Response Theory Reader–response theory identifies the reader as an affective agent who
imparts real exist–ence and life to the work, completing its meaning through interpretation. Reader–
response criti–cism argues that literature should be viewed as art in which each reader creates his or
her own–most likely unique, text–related performance. I am using Wolfgang Iser and Stanley Fish's
takes on Reader Response for my study. Iser's Theory of Reception and Transactional Reader
Response Theory According to Iser, any literary text which is a product of the Writer's intentional
acts part–ly controls the response of a reader; however, this includes an abundance of gaps. In order
to comprehend more clearly, the reader must take action in active participation in attempting to
cre–atively fill these gaps with the given information of the test put before him; Thereby allowing
the Reader and the text to undergo a transactional process. Iser speaks of the Actual reader in
distinction to the Implied reader who is formed within a text and expected to react and respond in
specific ways to the response inducing structure of the text. The actual reader, however, is an
individual with its own personal experiences accumu–lated as baggage wherein responses actually
are continuously and inevitably changed...show more content...
What lies behind Fish's thinking is a strong view of the social construction of reality; as he firmly
believes that knowledge is not objective but always socially conditioned. All that one thinks and
knows is an interpretation that is only made possible by the social context in which one lives. For
Fish the very thought one thinks are made possible by presuppositions of the community in which
one lives and furthermore the socially conditioned individual, which all individuals are, cannot think
beyond the limits made possible by the culture. This culture is referred to by Fish as an interpre–tive

How to write an extended response – Section IV of HSC Exam Question: Outline the marketing
process and explain the importance of each element of the marketing plan.|
Criteria:
In your answer you will be assessed on how well you: * demonstrate knowledge and understanding
relevant to the question * apply relevant business case study/studies and contemporary business
issues * communicate using relevant business terminology and concepts * present a sustained,
logical and cohesive response
Remember an extended response is a structured essay not a business report with an executive
summary and dot points throughout. Suggested word limit: 800 words.
Before you start: break down the question
* outline = sketch...show more content...
A situational analysis is important as it provides a clear and precise understanding of the business's
current position and where it is heading. For example, prior to Aldi entering the Australian grocery
market it conducted an analysis of its strengths, weaknesses, opportunities and threats (SWOT
analysis) and saw an opportunity to expand its operations to Australia selling low cost grocery
items. For a situational analysis to be reliable it must always be based on meaningful market research.
Paragraph (repeat for each paragraph) * Topic sentence * Expand/explain * Evidence/examples *
Link (ii) Market research
The next step in the marketing plan is market research. Market research is....
Conclusion
* Summarise main points * Do not add any new information * Leave the reader with something to
think about
Conclusion
In conclusion, this essay has outlined the six key elements of the marketing process: (i) situational
analysis; (ii) market research; (iii) establishing marketing objectives; (iv) identifying target markets;
(v) developing marketing strategies; and (vi) implementation,

Poem Response Essay
In just one paper, I am going to go from two inspirational poems, to a more depressing one. The
inspirational poem I will be responding to is "The Tyger", written by William Blake. This piece is
by far one of my favorite poems read. I read it often just to remind me not to wimp around with my
lifting and my getting bigger, just like the song by Survivor, "Eye of the Tiger", does for me. It keeps
in mind what it's going to take to do this. The second piece of inspiration I like is, "I will put Chaos
into fourteen lines", by Edna St. VincentMillay. On a depressing side of things, I am then moving
on to a more disheartening type of poem. This poem is "Facing It", by Yusef Komunyakaa.
In "The Tyger", by Blake, I...show more content...
The second poem that I found inspirational to me was "I will put Chaos into fourteen lines", by
Millay. The author tries to describe how to attempt to hold chaos back. Through this poem, she
describes chaos as a male type of thing by constantly referring to chaos using he, his, and him. She
shows chaos's many features, such as its "adroit designs", amorphous shapes, and it's arrogance. I
don't like how the author tries to contain chaos, because really it could never happen. Chaos is
something that once released or started, is a very hard thing to get put down or stopped. I know that
this is under the title of the poem, that she is putting chaos into the fourteen lines, but I still don't like
how it's written. I think the poem should be more uncontrolled, and having the chaos breaking out of
the poem in the end. Saying that she maybe thought she could contain it, but then realized she
couldn't.
I like the line of "Past are the hours, the years, or our duress" for the fact it's talking about how
chaos takes so long to take care of. When I enter the weight room, I want to go in with the mindset
of complete chaos, and that I'm going to cause chaos and treat the weights in a way that if they
would happen to be human, they wouldn't want to
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be treated. Along with "The Tyger", these both contain things that I like to go in to lift with the
mindset of to cause fear and

Literary Response And Analysis
The revised LRA or Literary Response and Analysis is an example of mastery of Writing
Standard 5 that is about listening to peers and adults and making edits and revisions. To begin
with, one major revision made was improving and reworking the analysis to be more effective. On
the original LRA response, it states, " If it wasn't for Beorn, the dwarves, Gandalf, and Bilbo
probably wouldn't know what to do. Also, the crew would be starving and tired as well if Gandalf
didn't know who Beorn is." After receiving constructive criticism from my teacher, edits from the
analysis were made and now it states, " Therefore, if Bilbo and the dwarves did not encounter
Beorn, they would not know how to stay safe or where to go. Furthermore, Beorn supplied...show
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In particular, I wrote and rewrote a few rough drafts and also read through several peer review
sheets or comments left on the Google Doc itself. The peer edit sheets were extremely useful for
helping and correcting any mistakes because the other person could have different opinions on
how to improve the essay as well as being able to discover mistakes I probably accidentally read
over and did not notice it. Just as important were the self–assessment since that was most of the
revision part and leads to the final product. For example, before the first self–assessment, my essay
states, "However, the original novel already planned out the best beginning character personalities,
therefore changing the initial plan of the book is useless because it can backfire." After reviewing
the essay, I later wrote, "Changing the initial plan is useless because Tolkein already spent
countless hours thinking and trying to perfect the quest of Bilbo and the dwarves." The transition
aspect of the rubric improved my writing because it presented the expectation for how well the
essay is supposed to "flow" together and be more smooth to read. After the first assessment, I made
two more important changes after the peer review sheets. A major revision made was, "However, in
the movie The Hobbit directed by Peter Jackson, he had made

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