2. Print advert
After reading through all my audience feed
back I have learnt that; the image I have
chosen has paid off. It is very striking and
catches the audiences attention. However the
text at the bottom isn’t clear enough to the
audience and could benefit from a colour
change. Also I have learnt that the background
colour could also benefit from being a brighter
colour.
3. Radio trailer
From analyzing the audience feed
back I received on my radio trailer, I
have learnt that; something went
wrong at the end of the trailer
whilst editing.
However some good points that I have learnt are that; the documentary
is actually very interesting and intriguing to the audience. Most
importantly it shows clearly that the topic is hair.
4. Documentary
From audience feed back I have learnt that
at the end of the documentary the music
goes on for too long. Also that the music
doesn’t have any direct link with the topic
of hair.
Good points I have learnt from audience
feedback are; that the topic and
documentary overall are very
interesting and the content such as
voice over and cut always clearly show
the topic of the documentary.
5. Overall I think my documentary pleased a
lot of people, but not everyone obviously.
If it was to be broadcasted I would most
defiantly make these changes.
