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Part J

Enigma; A question that is not immediately
answered and thus draws an audience into a
text.



Ways To Create Enigma;
 Appropriate Mise-en-scene:
   Sound (non-diegetic and diegetic)
   Lightening- diming when tension or
mystery needs to be created
   Camera shots that don’t give away to
much information. Just focus shots on what
we want our audience to question.
 Time Manipulation:
  Flashbacks
  Dream sequences
  Repetition
  Different characters' POV
5 Bullet Points Overview Of Open
Part K
                                                 Sequence
         •   Nia comes (Main Character) from the bathroom (looking sick) goes downstairs
             into the kitchen on the laptop to research about symptoms of abortion.

         •   Nia (Main character) is completing a scrapbook about the baby she aborted
             same time she gets mail so she picks it up. she opens it and its has pictures of
             aborted babies with the meanings of revenge& abortion. couple of minutes later
             the door Knocks

         •   Nia (Main character) opens the door and finds a doll outside thinking it’s a prank
             she puts the doll in the bin where she sees her neighbour Kylie (Other Character)
             and her kids (extras) they have a brief conversation.

         •   Nia (Main character) goes back in the house looks in the mirror depressed &
             confused on what going on.

         •   Nia then looks to the left an sees the doll standing on the table

         Scene ENDS
The Opening Scene
                                                                         Part K


5 Bullet
 Points    • Teenage Girl Working On Her Laptop In The House
             Alone, When An Envelope is sent through her letter
             box, she goes to pick it up and brings back to the table
             she was working on.
           • When She Opens The Envelope little bits of different
             colour paper spills out spelling the phrase “Knock
             Knock”.
           • She then receives a loud knock at the front door, she
             approaches the magic hole to see no one there. She
             Opens The Door To See no one there and as she looks
             down there is a doll placed by the step of the door.
           • She takes the doll inside and places it on the chair next
             to her and stairs at it Confused.
           • She Then Looks Away from the doll to look at the door
             again to find the doll is missing.
Part K                     5 Bullet Points Of The Whole Film
  •   Nia (Main Character) walks outside for some fresh air. She sees her Kylie (Good Friend/neighbour) they
      have a brief conversation. Nia picks up a letter she opens it and it has letters cut up she puts the words
      together and gets the word “KNOCK KNOCK” then in couple of minutes the door Knocks.

  •   Nia opens the door and there's no-one there she closes the door and when she looks a doll appears on the
      table. Nia is puzzled but walks past the table with the doll on it As she walks past the doll disappears and
      the scene is finished (Open Sequence)

  •   Nia notices the doll has gone missing and has no memory of moving it she panics and starts to run to the
      door but the door is locked she then hears a young girl preferably whispering (Child murderer) she turns
      around and finds the doll in the corridor who then repeats again.

  •   Nia passed out when she awakes she finds her self trapped to a table with a lot of medical equipment
      around her. The doll explains who the real identity is of the doll is which is the main characters unborn
      child that the main character had an abortion when she was 17 so the spirit of the unborn child lives and
      plans to live inside her mothers body.

  •   Towards the end the doll kills the Nia and the doll transforms the spirit into Nia’s body
Part L
                   Storyboard 1
   1     2    3     4




   5     6    7            8




   9     10   11          12
Part L             Storyboard 2

   12    13   14      15




  16     17   18      19




  20
         21   22      23
Part M
         Script
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  • 1. Part J Enigma; A question that is not immediately answered and thus draws an audience into a text. Ways To Create Enigma;  Appropriate Mise-en-scene:  Sound (non-diegetic and diegetic)  Lightening- diming when tension or mystery needs to be created  Camera shots that don’t give away to much information. Just focus shots on what we want our audience to question.  Time Manipulation: Flashbacks Dream sequences Repetition Different characters' POV
  • 2. 5 Bullet Points Overview Of Open Part K Sequence • Nia comes (Main Character) from the bathroom (looking sick) goes downstairs into the kitchen on the laptop to research about symptoms of abortion. • Nia (Main character) is completing a scrapbook about the baby she aborted same time she gets mail so she picks it up. she opens it and its has pictures of aborted babies with the meanings of revenge& abortion. couple of minutes later the door Knocks • Nia (Main character) opens the door and finds a doll outside thinking it’s a prank she puts the doll in the bin where she sees her neighbour Kylie (Other Character) and her kids (extras) they have a brief conversation. • Nia (Main character) goes back in the house looks in the mirror depressed & confused on what going on. • Nia then looks to the left an sees the doll standing on the table Scene ENDS
  • 3. The Opening Scene Part K 5 Bullet Points • Teenage Girl Working On Her Laptop In The House Alone, When An Envelope is sent through her letter box, she goes to pick it up and brings back to the table she was working on. • When She Opens The Envelope little bits of different colour paper spills out spelling the phrase “Knock Knock”. • She then receives a loud knock at the front door, she approaches the magic hole to see no one there. She Opens The Door To See no one there and as she looks down there is a doll placed by the step of the door. • She takes the doll inside and places it on the chair next to her and stairs at it Confused. • She Then Looks Away from the doll to look at the door again to find the doll is missing.
  • 4. Part K 5 Bullet Points Of The Whole Film • Nia (Main Character) walks outside for some fresh air. She sees her Kylie (Good Friend/neighbour) they have a brief conversation. Nia picks up a letter she opens it and it has letters cut up she puts the words together and gets the word “KNOCK KNOCK” then in couple of minutes the door Knocks. • Nia opens the door and there's no-one there she closes the door and when she looks a doll appears on the table. Nia is puzzled but walks past the table with the doll on it As she walks past the doll disappears and the scene is finished (Open Sequence) • Nia notices the doll has gone missing and has no memory of moving it she panics and starts to run to the door but the door is locked she then hears a young girl preferably whispering (Child murderer) she turns around and finds the doll in the corridor who then repeats again. • Nia passed out when she awakes she finds her self trapped to a table with a lot of medical equipment around her. The doll explains who the real identity is of the doll is which is the main characters unborn child that the main character had an abortion when she was 17 so the spirit of the unborn child lives and plans to live inside her mothers body. • Towards the end the doll kills the Nia and the doll transforms the spirit into Nia’s body
  • 5. Part L Storyboard 1 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
  • 6. Part L Storyboard 2 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23
  • 7. Part M Script