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In my feedback, one of the things that was noted down was
that there was not enough blue to pink ratio and also in
order to add more blue, use a header type rectangle to also
make the text where the social media details are. One thing
that I noticed myself after making the contents page is that
there was too much text at the top with the social media
details. Therefore I decided to add images of the logos and
icons in order to reduce the amount of writing I had used. I
also compared this to other magazines where there was
images instead of writing. Therefore I added in different
icons and cropped the background of most of them and put
them in. This also gives a more modern type of look to the
magazine as they are easily recognisable logos.
Another piece of feedback I got
was that they liked the amount of
images I had used and the ratio
from writing to images was good.
I also added more blue into the
front cover to balance out the
colours.
• Another piece of feedback I got was that they liked the
amount of images I had used and the ratio from writing to
images was good. I also added more blue into the front cover
to balance out the colours.
I added the blue circle
which was originally
going to be pink and also
added blue writing to
break the text up more.
Furthermore I also added
the blue behind the small
image on the cover to
break the colours up and
to make them stand out.

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  • 2. In my feedback, one of the things that was noted down was that there was not enough blue to pink ratio and also in order to add more blue, use a header type rectangle to also make the text where the social media details are. One thing that I noticed myself after making the contents page is that there was too much text at the top with the social media details. Therefore I decided to add images of the logos and icons in order to reduce the amount of writing I had used. I also compared this to other magazines where there was images instead of writing. Therefore I added in different icons and cropped the background of most of them and put them in. This also gives a more modern type of look to the magazine as they are easily recognisable logos. Another piece of feedback I got was that they liked the amount of images I had used and the ratio from writing to images was good. I also added more blue into the front cover to balance out the colours.
  • 3. • Another piece of feedback I got was that they liked the amount of images I had used and the ratio from writing to images was good. I also added more blue into the front cover to balance out the colours. I added the blue circle which was originally going to be pink and also added blue writing to break the text up more. Furthermore I also added the blue behind the small image on the cover to break the colours up and to make them stand out.