Our lady alliance academy final draft script: With Revisions
1. Our Lady Alliance Academy
Written By
Tom Adams
Based on an original Short Story by Tom Adams
PRODUCTION DRAFT
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FADE IN
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EXT. TRAIN STATION PLATFORM - DAY
A cold chill runs through the air, as thirty young students
await the arrival of their train.
MICHAEL
Do you know why we are here?
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ALLEGRA
No idea, did you get a letter from
the government saying you were
selected to be here?
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MICHAEL
Yes I guess its important then.
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ALLEGRA
I would guess so. Do you have any
idea what this is about?
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MICHAEL
Your guess is as good as mine.
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CUT TO: SPEAKER
ANNOUNCEMENT SYSTEM
(Over Speaker)
Train one to OLAC is about to
arrive, all students waiting are to
board this train.
CUT TO: GEOFF
MICHAEL
(Puzzled)
I guess this train is for us
then...
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ALLEGRA
It looks like it.
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The students are seen boarding the train.
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INT. TRAIN CARRIAGE - DAY
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Julia is seen looking at the letter she received from the
government.
ALLEGRA
You would of thought there would be
some kind of explanation to where
we are going. There is nothing
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substantial on the letter and there
are so many people.
MICHAEL
Yeah, why are there no adults? I'll
try and ask someone.
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A member of the trains crew is seen passing through the
carriage.
MICHAEL
(Puzzled)
Excuse me? Where are we going.
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(JOHN)CREW MEMBER
I can't disclose that information
I'm sorry.
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MICHAEL
Do you work for the government?
This whole thing seems a bit shady.
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(JOHN)CREW MEMBER
(Secretive)
Alright. What I can tell you is you
have been especially selected to go
where you are going. The rest you
will discover.
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ALLEGRA
Fair enough. Thanks for your help,
how long is the trip?
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(JOHN)CREW MEMBER
(Reassuring)
A few hours, you're best to get
some rest now.
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John moves out of the scene.
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MICHAEL
Ugh, I'm still a bit confused about
the whole thing.
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ALLEGRA
As am I Michael. But we've been
told all we can hear so we are best
to quit worrying and get some rest.
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MICHAEL
You're right.
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ALLEGRA
Exactly. We will talk about this
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more when we arrive.
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Michael and Allegra are seen going to sleep as the train
travels through a patch of country side and over a long tall
bridge.
FADE TO:
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FADE TO BLACK.
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EXT. TRAIN PASSING OVER BRIDGE - DAY
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How are we going to simulate a train carriage.
Tom Adams Nov 15, 2013 1:33 PM
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You're instead of your
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