1. LO3
Treatment Idea One
The want my filmtobe a Dark Humour
Workingtitle- Outcasts-Thiswouldbe because the maincharacterin myfilmwill have made friends
witha serial killer.
Length of the film- The lengthof my filmwill mostlikelybe aroundthe tentotwelve minute areaof
that I can tell the storyproperly,andso there isenoughtime toshow character developmentof the
people inthe filmsopeople are attached andif anythingeverhappens tothese peopleithitsthe
audience harder.
Tagline- I am not quite sure yet.
Key Characters- I will have three maincharactersinmyfilms-
Ollie Magorwhichwill be inthe film,he will have the mostscreentime of all the characters,the
protagonistof the film.He will be lonelyanddepressedwhichwill be seenatthe beginningof the
filmandthisleaveshimcravingafriendinthe formof the nextmaincharacter whowill be playing
the friend the lonelyguywillbe ascruffyand lonelylookingperson,hisclothingstyle will be loose
and whateverfits,doesn’tcare aboutstyle orfashion
Felix Occisor- He will be seeninmyfilmasaverycharismatic,go gettingperson,acool and just
generallynice guy,he howeverisactuallyapsychopathandenjoyskillingpeople,Wasplanningto
kill the maincharacterbut endsup actuallylikelythe guyandhe becomeshisonlyfriend.
The third maincharacter will be the victimof the friend- he isdeadnotmuchdetail needstogointo
howhe looks.
The lowkey characters will be the familymembersof the lonelyguy,theywill have littlescreentime
inthe film.
Synopsis.
Act 1- Inact one we will see onlyone of the maincharactersand all of the low keycharacters- Thisis
where we will meetthe lonelyguy.There will be manyscenesshowingfromthe beginningof the
filmshowinghowboredandalone thisguyisfeeling,perhapsthereisamontage of himtryingto do
workat hisdesk,hisphone outonthe table withhimconstantlycheckingbutneveranynotifications
showingup,we see himslowlylosinghissaintlyandgetmore andmore bored.We thensee him
bringingitupto his family,forhisneedforafriendandhiscripplinglonelinesswhere hisfamilyjust
ignore anddon’tlistentohim,hislittle brother offerssome badadvice whichhe thencompletely
ignores.He thenmeetsthisnewpersonthroughsomethingIamnot quite sure how yetbutthey
become close friendsoverashort amountof time.
Act 2-In act twoit will showthe twofriendsbecomingactual friendsandclose friendsatthat there
will be overthe topmontagesof the two doingdifferentactivity’s –there will be littleactual dialog
duringthe act as itis montage of thembecomingfriends.Iwantthe montage to be a constantshot
panningfrom lefttoright andthento blackand thento a new activityandsoon, so on.Act twowill
endwiththe lonelyguylookingonhisphone andona map seeingthathisfriendisnearby,sohe
goesoverto findhim- whenwalkingover- the cameraisfollowinghisfeetwhile doingthisisit
switchingbetweentwomenfightingandstrugglingwhilethe cameraslowingclimbinguptoreveal
whois struggling,stillswitchingbetweenthe two.Whenthe lonelypersonarrivestohisfriendwe
see hisfriendstandingover adeadperson.
2. LO3
Act 3- Duringact three we see the lonelyguyata crossroads tryingfacinga problem, whetherhe
shouldturnhimoverto the police whichisthe optionthathe shoulddefiantlydo,orhelpfindthe
body.We see himas he isso lonelyhe justdecidestohelphimfindthe body, thisiswhere there a
comical conversationaboutwhyhe wouldkill someoneandhe just responds withsomethingstupid
whichwill make nosense toanyone else buthim. Forthe restof act three we see the twotryingto
hide thisbodyinbizarre waysand the struggle of carryingthisbodyeverywhere.Iwanta shotfrom
the endof the corridorof the two carryingthe victimone on the arms and one withthe legspastthe
corridor.It endswiththe twobeing caughtand the friendbeingkilled,perhapsIamnot quite sure
howI want the filmtoendyetas I donot know whatwill be mosteffective
Target Audience.
The target audience formyfilmwithbe 15 + howeverIdo notbelieve thatthe youngeraudience will
be able to understandall of the jokesproperlyasitcouldbe too dark or justtoo oddand strange
behaviour.The mainaudience wouldbe 16-andabove,peoplewhoare intoocomedyand other
things.Icouldreach my targetaudience byputtinga traileronYouTube tryingto gainattentionfor
the film.Icouldalsocreate postersandtake clipsfromthe filmandpostthemon social media’sto
gainmore attention,thiswouldhitmytargetaudience astheyyouthandyoungadultstypicallyuse
social mediathe most.
Form and Style
The form and style thatI wantto followwouldbe the directorstyle andeditingstyleof EdgarWright
as I love all of hiswork andhow he has done stuff.Iwantquickshotsfast and interesting,new ways
to shotthingsrather thanoldand boringways.I wantto include alot of panningshotsfor the
montages.Iwill be usingspecial lensestogetthe effectthatIwant andam intendedtodofor the
filmtoget the mostviewacross,dark and dull until he meetsthe friendwhere he changestobe
happyfor a while,andsoitwill geta qualitypicture.
Marketplace
I believeif filmedcorrectlyandthe scriptisgoodenoughthatit coulddo quite well infilmfestivals
as it isa newconceptand I do not believe thatdarkhumourhasbeenproperlyutilisedyetandthere
isa lotof areato work withanda lotaudienceswantingitasitis a populargenre.The actual market
for thiswill be done forYouTube anduploadedtothere,thisisnotfor personal gainthisisjustso
people canviewmyfilmand enjoyit.If thisfirstfilmgoescorrectlythere isachance fora sequel if
the two successfullyhide the bodyandgetawaywithit.
