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Treatment 2
I wantthis filmtobe a Drama
WorkingTitle- JustFriends - I am not quite sure onwhat myfilmshouldbe calledbutIwant the
word“Friend”to be includedinthe title.
Length- The lengthof myfilmwill be between10-15minutes, asI need enoughtime toshow
character developmentsothe creepinessof the whole filmwillbe more effectivetothe audience,
and if anythingeverhappenstothese people ithitsharder.
Tagline- I am not sure onwhat the tagline isgoingtobe.
Introduction ofthe key characters:
The main character inmy filmwill be the stalker he will seemcharismatic,kindand lovingtoother
maincharacter, he is madlyin-lovewiththispersoninhiseyesshe coulddoabsolutelynothing
wrong,thisisthe problemif the othermaincharactertreats herwrongor she getstooclose to
somebodyelse he will getridof themsome wayor another.He will have abrilliantJob withlotsof
moneyand it showsinhispersonality slightly arrogant,italsoshowswiththe clothesthathe wears,
expensive brandsandexternalitems.He isa verycreepyguywatchesthisgirl inhisspare time it’s
the onlythinghe reallycaresabout,he believesthathe issome sortof guardianangel but isactually
a creepyguy ruiningherlife.
The Female will be the one whoeveryone seemstofall inlove with,beautiful andanice flowery
personality.She isstartingtonotice thatsomethingweirdisgoingonandeveryone isgoingaway
fromher one by one slowlyandshe onlyhasone close friend,whoshe isstartingtobelieve isthe
problem.
Anothermaincharacterwill be the victimof the stalker,we meethimwhentalkingtothe other
maincharacter ina café,the people obviouslyhave aconnectionandthe stalkerisvisiblyupsetand
disturbed.He looks welldressed,casual andisgeniallyjustanice persontobe aroundit seemedlike
anywayfromthe short time we meether.
Synopsis
Act 1 –Duringact one I wantthe perspective tobe fromthe stalker.We openupthe scene following
the stalkingfrombehindwalkingtowardsacafé,the camera thenswitchestothisface whichis
visiblyupsetandangry,itthenswitchestoa shotfromoutside the café inseeingthe othertwomain
characters chattingand flirting,we seethemexchangingnumbershuggingand the anothermain
male character leaves.The Stalkerstormsintothe café andstartsaskingthe womenmultiple
questionsabouthim- whohe was,whatwere youdoing,whywere youtalkingtohim.Thisiswhen
the man starts to try and manipulatinghertotry and getherto not talkto her, seeingthatthis
didn’tworkhe thinkstohimself andhe obviouslyneedstodosomethingmore drastictogethim
away fromher.So he follower’sherhome fromadistance justwatchingandmakingsure that
nobody doesanythingtoheras she needstobe the onlyone inher life. Aftermakingsure she gets
home he watchesherthroughthe window forawhile,he thentracksdownherboyfriendshe met
earlierandharasseshim,he justignoreshimandagainrealiseshe needstobe more drasticand
proceedstokill him.

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Act 2 – Duringact twothe perspectiveisgoingtobe fromthe woman.We open upin the café we
see hertalkingtothe interestedmanandwe see inthe backgroundsthe stalkerinthe window
starringat her throughthe window.We thensee herjustwalkhome and we can see hervisibly
worried,Iwantthe camerato be spinningaroundherandwhenitislookingather face we see the
stalkerinthe backgroundsay hidingbehindtree’sandotherstuff.She getshome andstarts
watchingTV while watchingthe camerapansoverto the leftand a dark figure isseenwatchingher
fromoutside lookingin.Afterwatchingabitof TV she callsthe guyshe meetearlierafterfeelinga
little creepedoutasshe is hearingnoisesoutside ,she becomesconcernedafterhe neverpicksup
aftermany calls. Iwouldlike hertothennotice somethinginherhouse maybe the doorknob
turninginshock she runsto the bathroomand locksherself in.
Act 3 – Duringact 3 I wouldstill likeittobe fromthe perspective of the stalkerandthe women,I
wouldlike ittoopenfromthe stalkerperspectivehe islookingatthe corpse of the man, he notices
hisphone ringingInthe room of the room afterhe throw itin confusionof the fightthatjust
happened, he realisesthatitisthe womencallinghim, he isangryinseeingherinfusedwithhim.
Afterthe fighthisclothesare all rippedandruffedup,he triestosort himself outandpicksupa coat
and goesto women’shouse.We thencuttothe woman’shouse andsee herterrifiedcrouched
downinthe cornerof the room shakingandcrying.She thenhears the “stalker”call out hername,
afterfeelingstupidshe getsupunlocksthe doorandgoesout to findhim.She confrontsthe man
and askswhyhe isthere,he repliesthathe wasjustcheckingupon herand makingsure she was
okayafter seeingthatothermanas he thoughthe gave himcreepyvibes,she agreesashe hasnot
pickeduphercallsand talkedsince,she suddenlystopsdeadinhistracksand stares at himnoticing
the coat, he asks what’swrong,she quickly grabsherphone andruns to the bathroomagainlocking
the door and callsthe police,she tellsthemtocheckthe crusheshouse,meanwhile the stalkerIs
bangingonthe doorand tryingto explain, andshoutingthathe lovesherandhe woulddoanthing
,the bangingturnsintokickingandsmacking,she seesthe doorslowlybreakingdown,she yellsfor
the police tocome immediately,she grabssomethinghardandwaitsforthe doorto breakdownand
smackshim overthe headrepeatedlyuntil he isstill onthe floorandstopsto move justquiet
flinching.The policearrive andshe explainseverything,the police domore diggingintothe stalkers
life andhome andit turnsout that he has got ridand scared manyof the othercrushesandpeople
away fromher.
Target Audience
The targetaudience formyfilmwill be youngadultsmainlydirectedtowardsyoungadults,Ido
believethatthe conceptsof thisfilm will be easilyunderstandabletoall the audience.The people
whoare goingto watch thisfilmare going to be people whoare intodrama.I couldreach the
audience byputtingouta traileronYouTube and oversocial mediatogetpeople attractedandbuild
up attention,Icouldalsomake postersandagainput clipsupon social again to buildupattention
for the film.
Form and Style
The form and style Iwantto follow isMartinScorsese’sashe useseverythingtohisadvantage
especiallythe silence inhismovies,ashe usesitto furtherthe tensioninthisfilmswhichiswhatI
wantto do. I wantbrightnessof the filmwheninthe perspective of the stalkertobe dark,dull and
depressing,andwheninthe perspective of the womanIwantit to be bright.Alsowheneverthe
stalkerismessagedIwouldlike the brightnesstobe slowlyloweredandturndarkto conveythe
hiddenmessage of whathe trulyisbefore she knows.

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Market Place
I believeif filmedcorrectlyandthe scriptisgoodenoughthatit coulddo quite well infilmfestivals
as it isa basic conceptand if I do itwell itcoulddoverywell withaudiences.The dramagenre
althoughhasbeendone ithas notbeendone properly. The actual marketforthiswill be done for
YouTube and uploadedtothere,thisisnotforpersonal gainthisisjustso people canview myfilm
and enjoyit.
Story Board
Example Script:
ScriptDuring act three
Stalker- Helloanyone here??Justcheckingintosee if youare okay?
--hearsthe doorunlockand footstepscome forwardtowardsthe man—
Women- Whyare youhear?
Stalker- Ifeltbadabout earlierIsnappedIshouldn’thave beensohardtothat guy earlierIjustdon’t
knowhim,if youlike him…date him(knowinghe isdead)

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Women- Well he hasn’tpickedupanyof my callsany---
--She stopsdeadinhertracks noticingthe coat the stalkeriswearing- it’sthe crushes-
Women- Ugh whathave you done!!
--Runsintobathroomwithphone andlocksthe door—
Stalker- Letme inI can explain…Iamsorry I justcan’t letyoube withanyone else theydon’tdeserve
you..I..Ilove you.
--KicksandBangson the door---
Women- Whyhave youdone this…you were myfriend…justmyfriend..”shoutstothe police to
come quicklyandfast” – she picksup somethingbigandhardand waitsfor the door to break
--The stalkerfinallybreaksin andthenshe smackshimwithituntil he stopsmovingandis only
twitchingina bloodymess--