Alien Contact Changes Everything

REAL COMIC Untitled (Angel Wing)-2
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Chapter 1
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Chapter 1
Created: 5 February 2014, 11:18
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Synopsis
Introduce Main Character as Narrator, mention alien pressence that has
appeared. Have main character reveal her normal life slowly begin to
introduce the mascot to her. She treats it well not knowing it was looking for
someone to represent earth. Eventually she goes to work begins to think
deeply about whether these aliens are a threat or not. She decides to take a
break and go to the bathroom after a incident happens at work (maybe
something bad) as she sits in the toilet. She gathers herself. But what she
doesn't know is that the little mascot from before had followed her there and
the minute she steps out the bathroom she sees the creature as it glows a
bright gold, blinding Alicia. As it enwraps her in a light and takes her to the
spaceship. At first Alicia panics and she doesn't know what's happening.
Other people see it as well but people don't know her. As they come to a
clearing they fly into the sky, add moments where police try to trap them,

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but they escape and when they fly upward planes almost crash into them.
But they get higher they become faster, as Alicia looks as the earth
disappears beneath her. She tries to escape, she believes she's going to die.
And she faints only to see earth below, almost as if it was ball. She has a
dream of her mother as a creature in some dark form, as she awakens she
finds herself in a bed, where a mascot and alien council member meets her.
He speaks to her briefly about her current location and about himself, she
meets Alien Council Member Kerushuu.

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Page 1
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Alicia stands before a gorilla like beast who's breaths mists the scene. As she
stands before him, her eyes fearing him. She begins to wonder if she had
made the right decision. If she could really change. She speaks of change,
and if people could change like a tree We could could possibly… shift
colors…
The monsters runs forward about to strike her down...
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Panel 1 Alicia stands before a gorilla looking Seralon
(Taint), it's breath mists the air. As his shadow
overcomes her. Her small frame standing in his
greatness.
Caption Fwoo (taint taking a deep breath)
ALICIA

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I can't do this.....
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 2 As she stands there before him, her eyes small and
trembling. WE see his rom reflected in her eyes.
Caption Devu (Tremble of eyes, figure shown in eyes
towering her)
ALICIA
I thought I could change? I thought I was
different... But I don't feel different. I
feel the same... I feel like the same weak
person from before.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 3 His arm twitches
Caption *za/hiku/koki/guki/gokin*
*crack/gurchh/twitch/* (Make into smaller
panel)
Panel 4 Lower angle, and the seralon takes off to charge
at her. We see his feet and arms thrusting dirt
and rocks into the air.
Caption *zazaza/urya/dododo* *rumble/brum/brrm*
ALICIA
Are we all doomed to never change.... to
always be the same people we hate
ourselves for being.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 5 The taint get's ready to strike her, it's arm
raised over it's head. Show action lines showing
the direction of its swing.
Caption *bun* *Swoosh, whoosh*
ALICIA
To lose everything, we wish to protect to
things we can't even fight against. Unable
to save ourselves....
(Inner Monologue)
KASERNAGE
Aliiiiciiaaa!!!!!

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(Spikey Ballon, urgent message
or yell)
Page 2 (Inside Cover)
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Show Alicia at her house putting on shoes in her doorway, light beautiful
colors. In school uniform. Pinks, blues, browns, warm colors for this
drawing. (Research modern home designs).
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We see a view of earth from spacecraft (try to make the room look dark and
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into the background. Draw someone standing leaning against a glass pane,
looking over earth. As another being approaches. The approaching being
tells him that the council seeks word of him. But the being avoids the
answer, he talks about earth, insulting the humans for their lack of focus and
power. The other being says that the council has word that one of the
ancestrial beings has locked on to a target. The other one mutters so him
saying, a insult about earth once more before a cackling.
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Page 3 Alien Ship
Panel 1 Earth lays beneath (collage it in) has faint tiles lining the
bottom of the picture. Show the darkness of the room some
but make it all seem transparent.
Caption *jiii/hmmm* sound of silence
Panel 2
We zoom in on figure that is walking across the floor. All we see is
his feet nothing more. We see another distant figure
beyond the feet though blurred (Stanger #1)
Caption *toko/tmptmp* *tap* walking. (Stranger #2)
Panel 3
The shadow stops short, we get a peek of them through the glass,
though the one who was was walking before the face is
hidden under hood. And we can only see the chin of the
one who is leaning against the glass.
Caption *bita/pita* *click/tap* Stranger #2 footsteps
stopping.
STRANGER #1
What news do you bring to me now? Have
they found one yet, or this is planet too
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STRANGER #2
It the ancestral beast has locked on to
someone. 2And is bringing her up as of
now.
Panel 4
As the first figure slowly turns around we now see his sharp teeth
and blood eyes piercing through the darkness upon his
shoulder is another set of scary eyes. They are wide
with small pupils, silver. His hands pressing into the
glass that is facing earth.
Caption *gari/giri/schkrrrk* the sound of his
metallic hand scratching the glass.
STRANGER #1
Her... Hahaha. Well, well. Then let's go
and... Great her, shall we?
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Header says a few hours earlier that same day... And we finally come back
to earth where we introdue the main character finally. We are shown a peek
into her life, and her room. As she speaks about herself. Alicia's mother calls
for her but she doesn't wakes up at first she ignores and rolls over in bed.
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Stanger #1 turns into the villain look for name later in Kerushuu's character form.
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Stranger #2 follower of the Villian (cause he also lost his planet, last of his kind)
But he turns good later on.

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Text
Page 4 Alicia's Home
Panel 1 Header says, a few hours earlier that same day.
And we finally come back to earth where we
introduce the main character once more. We are
shown a peek into her life, and her room. The room
is filled with light colors, decorated by her
mother, pinks, browns, blues, whites and other
cutesy colors. Manga books, regular reading books,
tablet (Bacom), papers and binders around the edge
of the bed on the floor.
Caption A few hours later that same day...
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Alicia speaks more of her life and mentions her mother. Sweet things, we get
a feel for Alicia and her likes and dislikes. Her cellphone rings and Alicia's
mother calls her. Alicia turns it off.
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Page 5
Panel 1 Alicia's mother calls up to her to wake up. The
small bump moves a bit and we hear a groan.
Caption *ugh/uh* groaning in protest.
MARY
Alicia!!! Time to wake up!
Panel 2 We get a peek of her room, her cellphone that sits
upon her dresser ringing acting as a alarm for her
to wake up.
Caption *pipi/beep* alarm.
ALICIA
Morning always has a way of waking me up.
Between my mother, this alarm and the
dreams that practically scream at me to
wake up. I always find myself...
(Inner Monologue)
MARY
Alicia!
Panel 3 Alicia reaches over for her phone.
Caption *Pipi/beep* cellphone still ringing (might
not add). *Gishi/rustle/shhhck,squeak* bed
moving.
Panel 4 Alicia taps the phone.
Caption *tap/ton* tapping cellphone.
ALICIA
Shut up.
(Spoken in a soft mutter.)
Finding a way... A reason to open my eyes
to the same day.
(Inner Monologue)
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Alicia turns it off and we get a full page view of Alicia sitting up in bed and
how she looks. She rises from the bed undos her scarf. And walks out her
room, her cellphone still on the bed with a picture of an alien on it.
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Page 6 Alicia....
Panel 1 Alicia holds cellphone, her hair is wrapped up. We
get a peek of her for the first time. As she gazes
at it.
Caption *pachi/sigh* Eyes are droopy but open,
showing she has woken up.
ALICIA
Or I believed would be the same day.
Panel 2 Alicia rises from her bed, undoing her scarf
letting her hair fall out at the same time.
Caption *za/shhh* the sound of her scarf coming
undone.
ALICIA
Maybe I'm trying to hard to find something
different.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 3 She opens the door. Her cellphone sits back on the
bed. And a picture of a cartoon alien in on her
screen showing she was looking at a article.
Caption *pisha/open/click* door opens.

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ALICIA
Maybe I should be happy with how things
are.
(Inner Monologue)
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We continue in the story with her eating breakfast, she busily discusses her
mother and her life with her. She speaks of her mother's work and their
daily life together under the same roof.
In the panels she eats the rest of her oatmeal. She kisses her mother for
goodbye.
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Page 7 Eating breakfast
Panel 1 Alicia blows a spoonful of oatmeal.
Caption *fua/blow/huuu/fuuh* blowing on food.
Panel 2 We are introduced to Alicia for the first time,
show Alicia eat her spoon still lifted and with
her hair done and her body shape.
Caption *eating/chk/mogu* eating food.
ALICIA

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My name is Alicia Ebele, I'm 16 years old
and as of now I'm a sophomore in high
school. I'm not exactly the pick of the
litter, the rose of the garden or the
sharpest needle in the haystack. In fact
most would consider me a bit of a
introvert, a shy person..a loner.
Panel 3 Show a part of the kitchen layout, basic brown,
white, light beige/sandy color walls and silver
stove and fridge. Show mother leaning, a laptop
before her, a cup of coffee in her hands.
Cigarette bud sitting in a cigarette tray not to
far. Her mother is wearing normal clothes though
she is wearing a animation convention shirt.
Caption no sound effects, just show steam of
cigarette, cups and bowls.
MARY
You better hurry Alicia. Or you're going
to be late catching the bus to school.
ALICIA
Hai!!!
Panel 4 Introduce Mary, her mother for the very first time
and begin to go into her relationship.
Caption *zuzu, siiip* sipping coffee.
ALICIA
This is my mother, Mary as her co-workers
would call her and mama or mom for me. Is
a bit of a ditz at times. Though a hard-
working one at that. She unlike me is a
confident person.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 5 Talk about Mary's job as a writer for a cartoon
show. Show the bump on Mary's Hand
Caption Have a small background pic of her mother
dressing in various of cosplay costumes and
uniforms.
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You see that bump on her ring finger? It's
a writer's bump, meaning she writes a
Lot!! She's a writer for a cartooning
company. Where she does a various range of
shows ranging from romantic parodies to
straight horror. And often times she is
stuck between writing stories for a novel
or tv show and shopping for various
cosplay uniforms and dresses to display at
the annual anime convention or everyday
use like going to store or going out with
friends. But today she's normal.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 6 Talk about the normalcy of the day. Show her
rising to her feet.
Caption *kachan/Clatter* chair moving as Alicia gets
up.
ALICIA
And like any other day, we do normal
things. Though you would think the various
amounts of costumes and clothes would make
every day new for me and creepy for when I
come home. I have gotten quite used to it.
I mean as long as she doesn't dress me.
Panel 7 Alicia goes up and kisses her mother one the
cheek. Her mother blushes faintly and smiles.
Caption *uki uki* Brighters colors and warm, showing
family love. Make picture bigger
ALICIA
Bye, bye Mama!
(Dialogue)
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Synopsis
Alicia quickly puts on her shoes and bag and runs out the house. Show her
walking and the high sun above her, and a shadow or transparent form of a
ship above her.
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Page 8 Leaving Home
Panel 1 Alicia puts on shoes, and she begins to hint at
strange happenings.
Caption *supo/swip/slip* slipping on shoes.
ALICIA
And like most days, I precariously accept
these situations and little personas. Just
as much as I accept my own personal flaws.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 2 Alicia slips on book bag.
Caption *Slip/supo* Slipping on straps.
Panel 3 Open door to the outside world, skip entry way and
such and have her walking down the block.
Caption *jiri jiri/shinning* Instead show the
brightness of the sun.
ALICIA
And though sometimes I wish to break
normalcy, to create a new me. A better me.
A braver me. Sometimes its hard to know
that life is filled with predictable
endings and openings. With generic and
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Especially since everything around me
seems to be changing....(inner monologue)
Panel 4 Alicia walks out and we see the alien ship above
faintly in the sky but vast enough for us to know
that's not supposed to be there.
Caption *Devu,zumomomo/zumo* Show shadow of the
spaceship in the sky and the sun refracting
around the edges.
ALICIA
So fast. And I'm... Not.
(Inner Monologue)
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She arrives at the school and skip forward to her arriving in her class, this
begins the mention of the aliens above the planet. She speaks of the noise
that increased around school.
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Page 9 School
Panel 1 Alicia arrives at school a few seconds before the
bell and she lays her head upon the desk sighing
softly.

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Caption *fu* Alicia sighs, as she rests her head upon
the desk. Her classmates walking and sitting
around speaking to one another.
Panel 2 Peek of classroom during pre-period and some of
her classmates.
Caption *Gya-gya/chatter chatter* Show students
chattering and running to each other's desk.
CLASSMATE #1
Hey did you hear about?
(Faint talking)
CLASSMATE #2
Why do you think they're here? Do you
think that maybe they want to do us harm?
CLASSMATE #3
I hear they have a 10 legs and arms! And
their eyes are huge!
CLASSMATE #4
Ewwww stop!
ALICIA
Since the ship appeared above, normalcy
for the world broke. At first it was
debate, end of the world prophecies
and scary stories of alien appearances.
People disappearing, weird happenings and
sudden appearances of strange beast in
other cities and towns across the country.
(Inner Monologue)
Panel 3 One of the girls bump into her chair, show her
walking into Alicia.
Caption *Battari/bump* Sound of butt bumping into
Alicia's head.
ALICIA
And even though the year just started off
and the space ship just hovering over the
earth....
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Panel 4 The girl doesn't even notice she bumped into her
and continues the conversation with the group.
Seeing to be squealing, the group laughs at her.
Though Alicia is gloomy and lonely.
Panel 5 Show Alicia's loneliness.
Caption *Dyon/depressed* Color a black shower(aura)
around Alicia and brightness around her
classmates who are all grouped up.
ALICIA
I still have yet to make any friends!
(Inner Monologue)
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Alicia talks about her lonliness and how everybody has changed somewhat.
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Page 10 Lonely
Panel 1 Alicia grips her head and she sinks into
depression. (Funny moment)
Caption *Doon/depressed/gloom* Show funny chibi
moment of Alicia turning into liquid. Show
brief moments of loneliness, moments where
she should be with friends but is not.
ALICIA
Normally at school I would be lonely
meaning I would have no friends for the

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entire year. An entire year of no partner
for field trips, science projects or lunch
time meals.
Panel 2 Small panel of her seeing the ship and her face
sinking or utter hopelessness.
Caption Show her sitting before the tv and the her
melting.
ALICIA
When the apparent doom machine appeared
above, I thought I would die lonely, with
no hope of ever having a girl conversation
with a dramatic and lonely friend who made
up of lies about past boyfriends.
Panel 4 Show her coming into class room and seeing her
classmates busily talking and active. And her eyes
glittering with hope.
Caption *Pa/light/shine* Eyes's shinning.
ALICIA
Till I came to school on the first day and
found loads of people talking to each
other. Pretty girls, jocks, nerds, geeks,
nobodies, rebels, idiots, fattys,
foreigners, loners. Everyone! This was my
chance! My chance to show through, to
become more than what I have been making
myself for these last couple of years.
Panel 5 Regular Panel. But show Alicia turned to stone and
her classmates happily talking along.
Caption *Shun/rock bottom,fwoomp* Alicia's skin
turning to rock.
ALICIA
But that didn't happen. It was as if I
missed the last chord of the apocalypse!
And everyone died and went to heaven and I
was left to walk the earth alone. (like
the man in Twilight, "Time Enough At
Last".)

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Get view of a someone's drawing of a ship hovering over the planet, reflect
on the moment of how Alicia doesn't know what this means for her. The
class begins and outside the window we happen of the mascot running
around in the area but happens to stop at the school. Its eyes stare at the
school seeming to have found its target.
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Page 11 Alien ships and Alicia
Panel 1 A small panel showing the chalkboard and a picture
of a space ship hovering a planet. Alicia reflects
on how the world seemed to have drastically
reverted to normal after the alienship. Even how
the kids in her class once grouping up changed
back to their normal.
Caption Nothing here but brighten drawing on the
chalkboard.
ALICIA
But even with all the alien talk around
school. It's normal. It's as if it faded
into the pool of celebrity gossip, fashion
trends and whispers of war amongst the
enemies. It became the everyday talk of
normalcy. People slowly began to accept
the spaceship for what it was... A hunk of
junk in the sky.

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Panel 2 Who now sits gazing out the window, her chin
leaning against her hand. We get a better view of
her.
Caption *eee* or just show light and wind blowing in.
ALICIA
What does this mean for me? Should I
accept it as normalcy and go about life as
I always have. Or should I....
Panel 3 Outside the window, we see Alicia gazing out the
window but this time we see Alicia's mascot
(Carina) looking down at Alicia from the opposite
building. Show Carina as a bit menacing.
Caption Nothing here really.
ALICIA
See it as an opportunity to become
something more than just me.
Panel 4 Full view of Carina (Mascot) who is staring down
at her herione. But Carina looks a bit scary look
at Madoka Puella Magical mascot and somehow copy
eyes.
Caption *gugu/stare* Carina (mascot) staring at
Alicia.
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Its eyes stare at the school seeming to have found its target.

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Text
Page 12 Mascot
Panel 1 Full view of Carina (Mascot who is staring down at
the heroine. But Carina looks a bit scary looking,
like the mascot from Madoka Puella Magica (Copy
eyes)
Caption *gugu/stare* Carina (mascot) staring at
Alicia
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Alicia is now at gym and people are playing dodgeball, to scared to step
forth she hides in the back.
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Page 13 Gym
Panel 1 Show ball getting thrown, showing it's gym time.
Caption *bishi/shu/whoosh* ball being thrown.
Panel 2 Show people playing dodgeball, funny pic where
other kids dodge and one kid getting hit in the
face and flying back.
Caption *gokiiaa/Bam!* ball hitting someone rough.

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ALICIA
Dodgeball....
Panel 3 Kids looking like demons holding the ball, and
dark aura around them. The kid from before
twitching from swollen face and bruises, and other
kids horrified of the damage.
Caption *nyari/grin/evil grin/demonic aura* the
opposing team.
ALICIA
I hate dodgeball!!
Panel 4 Alicia trembling behind her classmates, her
teacher pointing to her to get into fray. But
Alicia shaking her head no.
Caption *bishi/points* teacher pointing Alicia out.
GYM TEACHER
Alicia get in there! Your team needs you!
(Shouting/accusatory)
ALICIA
Never!!
(Shouting/defensive)
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Till a ball comes flying towards one of the students. Alicia takes the charge
and steps in front of the ball.
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Page 14 Taking Action
Panel 1 Alicia leaning over sighing.
Caption *Fui/sigh* Alicia sighing.
ALICIA
I'm not a person with much stamina and
most of the time, I usually like to feign
sickness or tiredness in order to get out
of these things. But this week teach ain't
having it.
Panel 2 Show small panel/moment of the gym teacher chewing
her out or turning into a demon.
Panel 3 Show ball flying from boys hand.
Caption *potosu/hurl/throw* boy is tall, slightly
muscular and has blonde hair.
ALICIA
I mean its not like they recognize me most
of the time anyway. I'm basically an
invisible player for the team.
Panel 4 Show ball going towards one of the girls sitting
on the ground behind the game. And a group of her
friends fearful and quivering.
Caption *shuu/woosh* ball flying through the air.
ALICIA
I mean it doesn't matter if I'm in or out.
(Inner Monologue)
CLASSMATE #2
Watch out!!
Panel 5 Show smaller panel of Alicia's feet running.
Caption *zazaza/run run run/tmp tmp* sound of
Alicia's feet running swiftly.
Panel 6 Show Alicia's hand reaching out in order to
protect.

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Caption *Hyoi/pop/reach* show hand reaching
desperately.
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Alicia Stands before the girl as mascot watches.
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Page 15 Alicia Protects
Panel 1 Carina Mascot witnesses the scene.
Caption *gikuu/surpise/shock* Mascot witnessing the
scene from shadows.
ALICIA
I mean....
Panel 2 Alicia standing in front of girl, bravery.
Caption No Sound.
ALICIA
It isn't like my existence is important to
anyone.
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Of course getting hit by it. Alicia coments on how the bal wasn't going to hit
the girl anyway. People go to the aid of the girl, while Alicia is asked if she's
okay. The mascot witnesses the scene (not being the first time it had
watched Alicia do a good deed.)
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Page 16 Funny Moments of Epic Proportions
Panel 1 Small Panel of Alicia getting hit by ball.
Caption *Gotsu/bam/pow/thud* Alicia getting hit in
the gut while defending the girl. Show shock
lines or crowd being astonished.
Panel 2 Small panel of Alicia quivering while holding
stomach as ball bounces away.
Caption *domu domu/bounce bounce*
CLASSMATE #4
Ahh are you okay?
Panel 3 Alicia turns around and smiles are her classmate
(make regular pic).
Caption *niko/smile* soft air around face.
Panel 4 Go back to chibi mood and have teacher pat
Alicia's shoulder saying she's out.
Caption *Pon/pat* on shoulder from teacher.

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TEACHER
Your out.
CLASSMATES
I don't think that's the real issue
here....
(Thoughts)
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We skip towards lunch and Alicia is eating her lunch outside by herself,
mention how even with all the news of aliens she is still lonely she sighs and
shifts causing her juice container to roll away.
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Page 17 Lunch Time
Panel 1 Alicia is eating lunch which consists of a wrap,
fruit and two juices, and a usual side of cookies.
Drinks from a juice cup. Upward angle show her
looking up to the sun above.
Caption *kupu/slip/suck/siiip* Alicia drinking juice
from container. *Bzz* dragonflies fluttering
about.
ALICIA
Well at least I can still eat, it would've
been troublesome if I couldn't hold down
my food. Though in all honesty...

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Panel 2 Alicia looks down at her stomach (downward angle)
and sadly looks upon the ripples that appear
there. Show in panel also some other people who
are chubbier than Alicia (putting not true
underneath)
Caption *bosho/sad* as she gazes upon herself.
ALICIA
Then again... I am a little chubby. I mean
I am nearly one of the biggest people in
my class.
Panel 2 Alicia smiles as she gazes at her cookies ogling
their goodiness.
Caption *Shi/shimmer* Eyes gazing upon cookies.
ALICIA
But I mean I can't change that right... I
mean losing weight would mean giving up
these babies and who would want to do
that!
Panel 3 Chibi mood: Alicia places cookies against cheek as
she shakes her head as if she was hugging them.
Alicia giggles as she blushes.
Caption *Gyuu/hug* Hugging sounds. *Baku/waku*
excitement. *Hehehe/gera gera* giggling.
ALICIA
Oh my sweets, my precious you will soon be
mines. I don't care if your filled with
chubby goodness, I would rather eat you
now and forget my worries than to put down
a cookie!!
Panel 4 Show Alicia with Super rape face!!! And her hands
clutching the cookies trembling with excitement.
Caption *waku waku/trembled* evil aura around Alicia
and make eyes scary and funny looking. *poto*
in the corner of picture.
ALICIA
Soon you will be eaten and swallowed to
become one with my body! Muwahahaha!

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(Hahaha!) To a source of happiness for the
depressing and normal life I live!!!!
Panel 5 Alicia looks up and we see one of her juice
containers rolling away into bushes.
Caption *poto**drops and rolls* the sound of the
container rolling away.
ALICIA
You got to be kidding me.
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Sighing she rises and goes after it only to find it sitting before the mascot
who is trying to chew into it. The mascot and her meet eyes, something
rather interesting happens. Seeing the mascot taking her drink, she reaches
out first. The mascot trembles slightly, growling at her. She pauses briefly
before giving it over to the creature, after opening it wider. The bell rings
and Alicia hurries back to class. The mascot watches as she runs off, and
decides to follow her. She mentions throughout this experience what a
strange creature it was and yet how familiar it looked, as if she had met it
before.
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Page 18 Meeting the mascot for the First time
Panel 1 Small panel of Alicia rising up to get it. And we
see a shadow of a small beast (mascot).
Caption *Kasa, rustle* bushes rustling from mascot
twitching.
Panel 2 A hand reaches down before the mascot and light
enters in as the mascot is seen for the first
time. A cute little griffin with dragon fly wings.
Caption *zawa/rustle/shine* from the light hitting
the griffin's shiny artificial coat.
Panel 3 Show large shot of Jannie before the mascot.
Caption *gaze/ahh* Jannie seeing the pet for the
first time.
ALICIA
A.... owl.....
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She mentions throughout this experience what a strange creature it was and
yet how familiar it looked, as if she had met it before. We skip to the job,
Alicia is busy at work. She works at McCornel ( McDonald's) where she
works as a janitor for the most part. She works hard, mopping the floors. She
speaks of why she is working here and such, event to the point of enjoyment.
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Panel 1 We skip to her at work and mopping the floors. She
is wearing a fast food costume. For the first time
we see her outside of the school setting.
Caption *Squish* mop being used.
ALICIA
What was that?
Panel 2 Small panel of the mascot jumping to attack her
and her getting scared. But on the other side of
the panel what really happened. Alicia running
away from the mascot when it steps out. While
Alicia is reminded of that horror before, her face
becomes drastically fearful.
Caption *OOOOO/roar/howl* of mascot. *Da/dash/run*
Alicia running away. *Kyaaaa/scream/ahhhh*
Alicia screaming.
ALICIA
Some weird mixture of a owl, cat and bug.
It looked like some mutated kitten. Maybe
it escaped from test facility, if so I
should really listen to those emails that
talk about those medical and make-up
facilities where they test on animal
subjects.
Panel 3 Alicia boss calls for her to come over. Show
Alicia in distance and her bosses hand waving her
over. Alicia jumping from coming out of her state
of shock
Caption *come over* hand waving her over. *Pachi!*
from her snapping out of it.
MANAGER
Hey Alicia come here for a second!
Panel 4 We see Alicia's hands and sheets of paper being
placed into her hands.

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Caption *pera/thump/thud/dosa* paper being placed
into hands.
MANAGER
I need you to hand out these pamphlets
today. For our new item on the board and
the sales we're having for this weekend.
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The manager tells her he wants her to handout pamphlets to which she
dislikes. Though she wishes to tell him this she goes anyway.
Text
Page 20 Alicia hands out pamphlets
Panel 1 As Alicia clutches the papers she gazes upon the
papers with utter dread. Upward angle of Alicia
clutching papers and shadows of demons in the
background as she cowers in fear of the fragile
demons.
Caption *puru puru/shake shake/quiver*
ALICIA
Pamphlets.... But I hate handing out
Pamphlets. These demonic word filled paper
mache that have caused wars, established
meaning for children existence and covered
the internet with mountains of junk.

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Panel 2 Alicia stands out in the open as she stands
practically in the middle of traffic(people
walking on sidewalk) as she trembles in the crowd
of people walking past. Alicia screaming silently
out loud.
Caption *doon/doom* Showing utter depression or
making known of utter depression or doom.
ALICIA
Worst of all I hate handing them out to
people!
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Alicia tries her best to hand them out but to no avail. She tries but people
can't hear her because of her stuttering and shyness. And eventually she gets
pushed away and the papers fall out of her hand.
Text
Page 21 Handing out Pamphlets
Panel 1 Alicia tries to hand them out to people do side
view make shadows of people in front of her to
show she's in a crowd but make her clear. And show
Alicia trembling to hand them out to people.
Caption *suta suta/walk straight pass/tap tap tap*
crowd walking past.

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ALICIA
Would you......? We're
having......next...?
.....take....pamphlet......
(Soft Spoken Voice)
I hate feeling uncertain. I hate this
feeling of being lost, or being possibly
being pointed out.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 2 Smaller Panel of Alicia going up to a woman in one
corner, then a group of boy students in another
corner and trying to give them a pamphlet.
Caption *puru puru/no* for the woman. *Buru
buru/refuse/shake/no* for the boys.
ALICIA
Of my thoughts clouding my reality. Of
seeing the hatred in everyone of knowing
that people are bound to society where
people like me is the bottom denominator.
And how its never going to change.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 3 Alicia gets pushed away and her papers fly out of
her hand. As a man rushes and past and calls her
annoying.
Caption *ba/push/slam/bam/thud* Man shoulder hitting
Alicia. *Gocha
gocha/confusion/flutter/mess/rustle* paper
sounds.
STRANGER #1
Get out of my way if you have nothing to
say!
(Angry Voice)
ALICIA
Ahhh!!
Panel 4 Show Alicia's Papers scattered over the ground,
some people standing others walking on it. Dark
scene show only pants legs, shoes, legs and
papers.

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Caption *zaka zaka/tap/tmp* footsteps walking around
and on the papers. *Pasa/rustle* paper on
ground. *Gusha/crush* Paper being crushed
under foot.
ALICIA
How it's okay to walk over people like me.
(Inner Monologue)
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As she goes to pick them up she looks up and begins to see people's faces.
Somehow talk, some in shock others laugh. Eventually unable to take it just
before someone reachs to help her up. She pushes them away and runs inside
her manager tries to should to her. But she locks herself up in the bathroom.
Text
Page 22 The Breaking Point of Alicia
Panel 1 Alicia bends down and reaches for the papers and
begins to gather them up. But as she does she
looks up at the crowd now around her. (Downward
horizontal angle seeing her from the crowd view)
People begin to look tall and big, slightly
menacing.
Caption *gogogo/menaching atmosphere. Only draw
picture of shoes everything else is dark of
course for the ray of light around Alicia and
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not paint shoes white, instead paint as black
and the shoes on them as black. Only shoes
around Alicia (mostly the tips of shoes) are
lighted.
ALICIA
Stop looking at me like that... Stop
looking at me!
(Inner Monologue 1)
Someone help! Please help!
(Inner Monologue 2)
I can't take it anymore...
(Inner monologue 3)
Panel 2 Small Panel show young teenage girl from another
school. And a cellphone in her hand.
ALICIA
Stop it!
Panel 3 Another Small this time of a business man looking
slightly angry or disgusted.
ALICIA
I know you don't like me...
Panel 4 A third small panel spanning the middle of the
page in a row along with panels 2 and 3. This time
of a boy and another one who seem to be smiling or
cackling at the situation.
ALICIA
So stop laughing at me, stop walking away!
Stop! Stop!
Panel 5 A hand reaches down to help her and Alicia pushes
the hand away as she runs inside. Show Alicia's
hands backs and the door opening, as she runs
inside. With the crowd looking on as she runs and
the young man who was offering to help watching
her run away with his hand still out to help her.
Caption *zazaza/run run run* Alicia running inside.
*Kara/open* door opening up.
ALICIA
STOP!!!

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Panel 6 Alicia runs past counter, where her Managers calls
out to her.
Caption *Zaza/tmp/tap* Alicia's tapping shoes as she
runs.
MANAGER
What's a matter?! Alicia?!
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Sitting there she sighs softly as she feels stuck, tears well up in her eyes as
she thinks of how useless she is to everyone. She voices her desire to
change, but how its impossible to change cause we bound to always be the
same person.
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Page 23 Alicia Desires to Change
Panel 1 Small Panel show little girls sign on door and
soft hiccuping sounds within.
Caption *Hiiku/hiku/hic/hiccup* sounds of Alicia
crying.
Panel 2 Upward angle of Alicia crying, tears and snot
smearing her face. As she cries and hiccups, she
tries to wipe the tears from her face but its too
much. She is sitting on stall.

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Caption *Hiiku/hiku/hic/hikku/hiccup* sounds of
Alicia crying (hiccups).
ALICIA
I hate this..... I hate myself. I hate
being like this. I hate being looked at
like that, of being ignored, of being
laughed at, of being worthless. I hate
being me!
Panel 3 Having a slightly nude picture of Alicia drifting
into the darkness and a small light within her
shining brightly and her clutching furiously to
it.
Caption *jiwa/tearing up* *zu/sink* Alicia sinking
into darkness that reaches and clutches for
her.
ALICIA
I don't want to be like this anymore! I
don't want to stay like this! I want to be
something. I want to be something more! I
want to change.
Panel 4 Near the bottom of the stall we see a shadow like
someone's there and a soft knock. Catching
Alicia's attention. We can't see Alicia clearly
but we see a shadow for sure.
Caption *kon/knock* a soft knock.
ALICIA
Someone's by the door!
(Inner Monologue)
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As she opens the door she happens to look down. There near her feet is the
mascot, we look up at her to see the tears in her eyes. "A…(insert animal)".
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Page 24 Do you wish to change?
Panel 1 This time we can see outside of the door and we
see someone saying "Do you truly wish to change?"
Caption Nothing really here just make bubble soft
looking.
CARINA
Do you truly wish to change?
Panel 2 Small panel of Alicia's eyes twitching.
Caption *piku/flinch/twitch* Alicia's eyes twitching
or blinking.
ALICIA
If I could only become more, a little
braver.
(Inner monologue)
Panel 3 Small panel of Alicia grubbing the handle of the
stall. In a row across like the last and the one
after this one. And she jerks the door open.
Caption *gu/grip/pull/jerk* the door open.
ALICIA
A little happier, a little prettier, a
little smaller. Then maybe... Maybe
then... I could
(Inner monologue)
Panel 4 For the first time we see the mascot in all of her
glory. Carina and Alicia comes face to face one
more time. Alicia stares down. Side view and we
can't really see the bathroom but we have hints
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Caption *dodo-n/ahhhh/reveal/tada* Mascot is revealed
once more. And this time their meeting is
fatal (complete)
ALICIA
Change, maybe then could I be the me I
dreamed of being. That I have always
wished to be.
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But she quickly tries to wipe them away, kneeling down she goes to touch
the creature. Saying how she remembers this little creature, she ask if it's
lost, if its misses its owner. But then a soft voice speaks, asking her does she
truely desire change.
Text
Page 25 Alicia's Unspoken Desire
Panel 1 Alicia jumps a bit clutching the sides of the
stall as she gazes down at the creature. In
Alicia's thought ballon have the mascot hovering
over small Alicia's chili's body, hungrily.
Downward or sky angle of Alicia.
Caption *munzu/grab* Alicia clutching to the stall
shivering.
ALICIA
It's that mutant creature again! Here to
finish the job.

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Panel 2 Alicia reconsiders the creature when she sees it
tweet and she realizes. That she has done the
something that she dislikes society doing to her.
And for once finds the small little creature cute.
Upward angle from mascot point of view. Show soft
images of the Carina's and Alicia's face in the
corner.
Caption *piyo piyo/tweet/peep* Carina chirps at
Alicia.
ALICIA
Wait... It doesn't want to hurt me. The
only thing I have done to it was avoid it.
Like how the world does to me, like what
it does to it's problems.
Panel 3 Alicia's hands reaches towards the creature.
Caption *hesitant* reaching out to mascot.
ALICIA
Have you been following me?
(Spoken)
It has never wanted to hurt me. The only
thing it seemed to want was me.
(Inner monologue.)
Panel 4 Show Alicia's hand reaching towards Carina, but
this time the voice comes out again.
Caption *Buooooo/roar/whoosh* rush of wind that
radiates from Carina. *Zawa/shine/wrap*
Carina glowing this time.
CARINA
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Before she could answer she is enveloped in light. Floating in the ball of
light, she panics as her feet lift off the ground. Turning around in the ball
uncontrollably unable to stir herself. Banging against the shield she tries to
get out. But seeing that the field was like hard glass. Looking to the mascot,
she begins to wonder what this thing is. The mascot does a smile.
Text
Page 26 Alicia and Carina enters a pact
Panel 1 A ball of light consumes Alicia and her Mascot as
Alicia gazes upon the mascot. And she is now
floating in the ball of light.
Caption *jijijiji/shhhhhh/woooo* energy ball forming
around Alicia, *bachi bachi/buzz/zzzzz*
electricity around the base of energy ball.
*Fuwa fuwa* Alicia floating.
ALICIA
Huh?
(Spoken)
Panel 2 Alicia flinches as she turns around in the ball to
see the stall breaking and toilet water spilling
on the ball. But nothings hitting her.
Caption *Gogaaa/krakkkk/smash/crash* things breaking
around her.
ALICIA
Ahhh!
(Screaming)
Wait what's going on? This is real, this
is really happening?!

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Panel 3 Alicia bangs against the walls of the ball and
yells to get out. Show legs swimming like in the
ball trying to keep her balance.
Caption *gon gon/slam/bang* Alicia hitting the glass
of the energy ball.
ALICIA
Get me out of here! What is this! What's
happening! Someone help me! Help me!
(Shouting)
Panel 4 Smaller Panel of us seeing her hands and the
redness of them, and throbbing from her banging
her hands upon the glass.
Caption *zukin zukin/throb throb/sting sting*
throbbing pain from hands.
ALICIA
It's as Hard as glass, its not budging one
bit.
Panel 5 Larger panel of Alicia looking over her shoulder
at Carina who is floating. But this time Carina is
smiling away.
Caption *kiran/twinkle/shine* Carina's metal coat is
showing now and her real form is revealed.
*Kuoon/whoosh/fwoosh* great force of energy
or wind blowing around.
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Takes off as it crashes through the door the field not bending as it gets into
the open of the store. The people scream as they look at the ball. Her
manager comes out from hiding and sees Alicia in the ball, "Alicia". Alicia
screams for him to help before the mascot takes off again.
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Page 27 Going for a little ride
Panel 1 Small panel of effect, like explosion.
Caption *dodooo/smash/boom/crash* Sudden explosion,
dust everywhere. And pieces of rubble blown
out of proportion.
CUSTOMERS
Ahhhhh!!!!
Panel 2 We see the manager coughing and asking if people
is okay. He is behind the counter.
Caption *googaa/crumble/rumble* rubble around and
dust clouds. *Ririri/loud buzz/alarm/beeep
beep/clang clang* alarms going off.
MANAGER
*Cough,cough* Is everyone okay? What
happened? Did the gas go off somewhere?!
(Calling out)
CUSTOMERS
Oh my god!!!
Panel 3 Manager looks up and sees Alicia in the ball,
Alicia gazing from the inside of the ball gazing
at him. She screams out for help.
Caption *gon gon/slam/bang* Alicia's hands against
the glass. *Ji-ko ji-ko/hmmmmm* faint hmm of
the forcefield.
ALICIA

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Manager! Robin help me! Help me Robin
please!
MANAGER
Al...Alicia?
Panel 4 The wind disperses and we see Carina in her real
form as a mechanical being. Shining in the light.
Alicia in the background.
Caption *pashuu/fwwsshh/sst* Make Carina cute but
cool looking (pokemon should come in handy
here).
Panel 5 Carina takes off again and Alicia lands hard
against the back of the ball. As Carina leaps or
jumps ahead.
Caption *kata kata/click click* of Carina's paws
running through the wall.
*Dan/smash/crash/bam* slamming into the back
wall of the ball.
ALICIA
Ugh!
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Crashing into the street they almost cause a accident, people scream, some
people takes phots others run. Alicia asks the mascot where is it taking her.
But the mascot does not respond. In the distance sirens is heard and the
mascot takes off again, running down the street, it jumps upon the cars
slightly denting the top from the ball.

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Page 28 On the Run
Panel 1 The ball of energy bursts forth from the wall and
drawn into the middle of traffic show pieces of
rubble and cars dodging the scene.
Caption *dan* Slamming through wall and pieces of
rubble clatter about on the ground.
*Tick/smash/goa* of
rocks.*kikii/kikiki/screech/kee/squeal* tires
screeching over the pavement.
*Gya/aggggh/ahhh* screaming.
Panel 2 The ball of energy stills itself as people either
run from it or stands and watches the scene.
Distant squeal of of sirens can be heard. In the
distance. Alicia begins to stand to her feet.
(Make into slightly smaller panel.
Caption *re------whooo- re whooo-----/fan fan fan*
Sirens in distance. *Bara
bara/scattered/disperse* crowd noises.
ALICIA
Ouch...
Panel 3 Thinner panel Alicia asks Carina where she is
going. Carina doesn't respond she only hears the
sirens
Caption *re-------whoo-re whoo-----/fan fan fan* cop
sirens a little bigger than before and harsher.
ALICIA
Where are you taking me?! Hey! Can you
hear me? Hey?!
Panel 4 Carina takes off again but this time she leaps and
dents a car's hood. Show jumping lines of Carina
taking off again. And Alicia bouncing about in the
ball of energy.

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Caption *Goa/dan/Smash/crush* Weight of Carina as she
lands upon the hood of the car.
ALICIA
Aghhhh!!!
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As the mascot runs into a open street the cars dodging the ball, the police
catch up and it tells them to stop. Alicia begins to panic trying to tell the
mascot to stop, the cops. She screams to them to help her. But the mascot
doesn't stop, after coming some distance to an open field, after Alicia
screams, "STOP!" the mascot looks back at her. Suddenly another soft voice
echoes in her head, "Do you want to change?"
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Panel 1 We get to an intersection where we see the ball of
energy taking a hard tun and hear the screech of
metal upon pavement. Now behind her are cop cars
also sliding across the pavement.
Caption *Kiii/screech/kyeeeeee* sound of Carina's
paws screaming over the pavement as she
slides into intersections.
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Panel 2 Carina is running the length of a street and stop
cars now on either side of the ball as Carina runs
telling them to "Stop" Alicia is screaming for
help the whole time trying to get the cops to help
her.
Caption *buun/vrrm/rumble* cop cars speeding
alongside them, as some cars quickly get out
of the way as they take to the sides of the
road. *Kata kata/ click click/kch kch* sound
of Carina's paws upon the ground.
COPS
We order you to stop right now! Stop
running away! Or both of you will be
severely punished.
ALICIA
Help me! Please!
Panel 3 We see their destination a open field in the
middle of a park just in the distance.
Caption *Kata/click* Carina's paws. *Re----whooo-re-
whoo* alarms.
ALICIA
Stop....
(Inner Thought)
Panel 4 They enter through the gate entrance.
ALICIA
Stop....please just stop.
(Inner thought.)
Panel 5 As they travel through the brushes, Alicia her
arms covering her face and its dark around her.
Caption *Kasa kasa/rustle rustle* going through
bushes.
ALICIA
I said stop!!
Panel 6 Big picture of the open field and Carina looking
back at Alicia and Alicia unfolding her arms.

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Carina ask her once more. Do you truly wish to
change?
Caption *gobaaa/whooosh* Wind blowing around them,
and Alicia still floating before Carina.
CARINA
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Alicia hesitates before she answers and suddenly a light bursts from the
mascot forming a beam up into the heavens, the blast pushes some of the
cops back as it become blinding. Slowly they are lifted into the sky. Alicia
looks around seeing the ground disappear beneath her. As she lifted into the
sky.
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Page 30 The Bond is forged
Panel 1 Carina and Alicia stands there still. In the
corners of the panels show their faces. And Alicia
unable to answer.
Caption *za za/rustling* breeze blowing.
Panel 2 Suddenly a light appears in the sky and hits
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Caption *Buo/whoosh* wind and power of blast.
*Pa/bika* Light striking Carina.
Panel 3 Small panel of Alicia seeing Carina in utter
shock.
Caption *voo/shooom/whoom/whoosh* wind blowing past
her as she gazes upon Carina.
ALICIA
What....what...is that?
(Inner Thought)
Panel 4 The force is strong enough to blind the cops as
well, who appear in the distance of the blast. And
we see four wings appear upon the light image of
Carina. They are huge and spread over most of the
field. As Carina seems to take on the form of a
huge griffin. The ball slowly begins to lift off
the ground.
Caption *Kue-/kweh/caw* Carina's call. Same wind
sounds from before.
Panel 5 Small panel of seeing the ball of light travel up
the pole, people seeing it from rooftops and the
sky opening up to see the ship.
Caption *whoosh* powerful wind even from far away.
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As they get higher, they come to a point where a helicopter rushes past them.
She is now more afraid of the bubble popping than banging on it. But they
continue onward upward into the sky. Till the point of flying further up till
they barely miss a plane.
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Panel 1 Alicia looks over the town as she presses her
hands into the glass. Seeing the world she once
called home starting to get smaller. And two
helicopter watching the scene. Radio chatter from
the one closest to us.
Caption Wind sounds being heard from before. *Bara
bara/spin spin/shoom shoom/fwoom fwoom* of
helicopter.
COPTER CHATTER
Take the shot! Take the beast down!
COPTER CHATTER #2
We can't there's a little girl in there.
ALICIA
The ground.... Is becoming less visible.
I'm really floating. I'm flying away.
Panel 2 As they go higher they break through the clouds
this time they are high enough for a plane and she
watches as a plane nearly hits them.
Caption *bu-n/zoom* a plane whiting by them.
*Kyuiin/keek/kreean* plane engines.
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Alicia remembers her mother brief moments of her father and her promise to
him. Carina asking her if she's willing to change. Protect.Change.
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Page 32 A forgotten promise. Change.
Panel 1 As they get higher, Alicia begins to see darkness
as they begin to enter space and her field of
vision begins to freeze over.
Caption *bori bori/crunch/krick* ice forming over ball.
ALICIA
Home.... Mom.... Cold. I'm so cold. So far
away from home... Mom... Mommy.
Panel 2 A smaller Alicia standing before a man and his
hand upon her head. Telling her to protect.
Caption *nade nade/stroke stroke* stroking Alicia's
head.
ALICIA'S DAD
Promise to protect.
Panel 3 Carina looking at her before when she asked her if
she truly wanted to change.
Caption No sound.
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Panel 3 Small panel of her saying mommy lips only and
tears cradling face.
Caption *Shin/silence/shock*
ALICIA
Mommy....
(Whisper)
Protect.Change.
(Inner Thought)
Panel 4 Black Panels... Leading into next page.
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Alicia has a dream of her mother dressed in black silently screaming. Alicia
clinging to the wall as fear and sadness takes her face. But then her mother
turns her head and her eyes are black. Alicia wakes up.
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Page 33 A Bad Dream
Panel 1 Nothing. Black Panel but soft cries is written in
white.
Caption *mi-/cry/wail* soft cry.
Panel 2 Alicia speaking mommy as her hands clutch to the
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Caption *gashin/clutch/grab* Alicia's grip.
ALICIA
Mommy...
Panel 3 Her mother's body twitch roughly. And Silence
falls.
Caption *bikun/hard flinch/sudden twitch* Alicia's
mother twitches.
Panel 4 Alicia's mother turns around and her eyes are
black, skin pale and lips are gone leading to a
plain open mouth with sharp teeth. Deep red
pupils.
Caption *gokin gokin/crack/disjoint* Alicia's
mother's head at a weird angle as she calls
her.
MARY
Alicia.
Panel 5 Alicia's eyes open as she wakes up. Just her eyes
opening frightened.
Caption *pachin/snap open* Eyelids opening.
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She wonders what she just saw, trying to calm herself that it was just a
dream it was all just a dream. She lays back down, rolling into a pillow she
believes to be hers, when the mascot appears before her.

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Panel 1 Alicia is sitting up in bed, and she seems to be a
hospital room. Rubbing her head some. Side angle.
Caption *soyo soyo/breeze breeze* a light breeze
blowing the curtains.
ALICIA
A dream...
Panel 2 Show a small panel of her pulling the shade back
some chibi mood.
Caption *sharan/rattle/slide* Curtains being pulled
back.
Panel 3 Still in Chibi mood she is still looking outside.
Caption *Ho/phew* relieved sigh.
ALICIA
I'm home.... It was all a dream. A highly
intricate nightmare at that.
Panel 4 Falling back upon the bed, she sighs as she curls
into the comfortable pillow. Hugging the covers to
her face. And closing her eyes. Not seeing that
beside her is her mascot sleeping away on the
pillow.
Caption *bofun/fall/fwump/dosa/thump* falling onto
the bed. *Gururu gururu/purr purr* sleeping
Carina.
ALICIA
Great! It was all a dream. I'm probably at
mountainside hospital and the only thing
to do now is to wait till my mom picks me.
I wonder what happened before. Maybe I hit
my head during work or something.
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Shocked she jolts up in the bed. She doesn't quite remember what happened
before but for some reason she keeps thinking of alien reports, images,
messages. The mascot purrs and rubs against her before curling into her
hands. She stares down at this creature wondering what it is, how it was able
to do what it did. Was this the alien they was speaking about. This small
creature. But her thoughts is interuppted. Till a voice speaks.
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Panel 1 Alicia acts as if she's about to go to sleep.
Small chibi panel.
Caption *gururu* purring and *su/sigh* Alicia's soft
sigh.
Panel 2 Suddenly Alicia's eyes burst open and her eyes
balls sticking out of her head in utter shock sees
Carina next to her. Chibi mood.
Caption *pisha/crack/shock* Alicia is extremely
shocked.
Panel 3 Alicia plastered against the wall trembling
watches as Carina wakes up slowly. Chibi mood
Caption *chi chi chi* soft chi as Carina stretches.
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ALICIA
Y-y-y-y-y-y yo-yo-yo-your your your re-re-
real?!
Panel 4 Carina approaches her as she curls into Alicia
purring loudly. But Alicia is utterly terrified of
the creature.
Caption *gurururu/purring* Carina. *Gaku
gaku/shiver/tremble* Alicia
ALICIA
But that's impossible. You was all a
dream. It was all a dream. This isn't
real. Your not real. None of this is real.
Panel 5 A faint shadow appears in the corner of the panel,
as Alicia looks up at the figure.
Caption *kero/croak/ribbit* Kerushuu.
KERUSHUU
I woun't sa dat. ( Translated: I wouldn't
say that).
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One of the council members (look at pictures of elk legs and draw tall lanky
legged and yet round belly fellow. Older creature) smiles upon her. Alicia
eyes widen as she looks upon this creature and backs into the wall. And the
little creature that once purred in her hands now growled and hissed at the
creature glowing. Though it looked terrifying a look rested in its eyes. The
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this common gesture shows one is vunerable or wishing for peace, surrender
possibly in this matter". Alicia doesn't calm herself, as she studies this being.
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Panel 1 We see Kerushuu for the first time and he's
sitting in a chair, one legged crossed, in one
hand he's smoking a water pipe and in his other
hand is a cane made of wood.
Caption *buku buku/bubbles* Water pipe.
KERUSHUU
Wal awl et seems ya awake now? Yah?
(Translated: Well Well it seems your awake
now? Yes?)
Panel 2 Smaller Panel of Alicia clutching the curtain and
her heart pounding in her chest. Do close up on
wrist to see something shimmering on wrist.
Caption *dokun/heartbeat/da-dump/heartache* Alicia's
heartbeat. *Gugu/clench* hand clenching
drapes. *Zawa/bo/shine/ignite* wrist band.
ALICIA
A monster....
(Inner thoughts)
Who-who who who are you?! What do you want
from me?!
Panel 3 Carina's eyes flares up and a soft growl starts to
emits from its throat. Show viciousness of
Carina's cute looks.
Caption *garuru/growwl/snarl/ragghhh* Carina's snarl.
Panel 4 Kerushuu puts his hands up as he smiles at Alicia.
Caption *sara/rustle* Kerushuu's clothes.
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I believe on your planet this is a common
gesture for vulnerability or wishing for
peace, surrender possibly in this matter.
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Who are you? What are you?" she asks him. But he doesn't answer her
question, "You shold calm down you wield a very powerful weapon. That
creature is now connected to you, whatever you feel, whatever you fear it
fears. If you are not careful, you'll do something you'll regret" he mentioned.
Alicia looked to the mascot, as she noticed the mascot was looking upon her
with a look of plea, though it also seemed to bare its fangs.
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Panel 1 Alicia doesn't calm down her heart rate only
increasing. As Carina's growls become more verbal.
We see her bracelet is lighting up even more as
Carina's eyes shine.
Caption *ranran/intense* Eyes of Carina's and
Alicia's.
ALICIA
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you?! Your one of those aliens, I've been
hearing about. Aren't you! Aren't you?!
Panel 2 Kerushuu doesn't say but he points out how Alicia
is the real threat in this room due to Carina who
is on the offensive.
Caption *bishi/point* kerushuu pointing out Carina.
KERUSHUU
The only threat in this room, is you my
dear. The guardian beast you have bonded
with is connected to your feelings.
Whatever you fear it fears and whatever
you hate it shall hate. Such a beast with
immersive power should be dealt with care.
If you are not careful you'll end up doing
something you'll regret.
Panel 3 Alicia looks upon Carina for the first time and
sees the fear in its body. How it's body trembles
before Kerushuu.
Caption *wana wana/tremble tremble* Carina trembling.
ALICIA
It's scared. For me?
Panel 4 Alicia reaches out and touches Carina and
instantly the fear disappears. As she pets her
relief sets in and Carina purrs against her hand.
Show only Carina responding to her hand being
placed upon her. Though in the corner do a shot of
Alicia reaching out to Carina.
Caption *gururu/purr purr* Carina purring. *Nade
nade/pet pet* petting Carina.
Panel 5 Small panel of Alicia smiling at the sound of
Carina purring. And Kerushuu smiling. In the other
corner.
Caption *gururu* Carina purring.
ALICIA
Your actually pretty cute.
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"I won't hurt you, you don't have to fear me. Plus even if I did what use
would it be when I could've taken one of your leaders instead" he smiled as
he reached over and poured something like warm milk. Smelling the
soothing scent of milk and honey. "I believe on your planet warm milk is
soothing to you" he placed the cup looking container before her. It was
strange looking she could see it resembled something of a cup but it was
rounder and transperant. The liquid inside seemed to float inside.
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Panel 1 Kerushuu reaches from his chair to a end table as
he rolls it over. And speaks of how he doesn't
wish to hurt her.
Caption *goro/rolling over* End table rolling over.
KERUSHUU
I won't hurt you, so you don't have to
fear me. Plus even if I did seek for
blood, I would have taken one of your
leaders instead. Or I would've done by
now.
Panel 2 Kerushuu placing cup upon end table, of a round
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gazing upon it with a faint blush at the smell of
it.
Caption *hoka hoka/warm/sweet smell* Heated milk.
KERUSHUU
I believe on your planet warm milk is
soothing to your kind? Yah?
ALICIA
Sweet milk?
(Inner Thought)
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"That's for babies, warm soothe children" she muttered softly. "Are you not
a child yourself?" he asked her. Thinking this through she finally relaxed
some, as she reached out and looked upon the cup. She mentions how warm
it feels in her hands, how the container fills her hands. Cupping it she smells
the sweet scent of honey and milk as she tips it back. A faint blush spreads
across her cheeks. The council member smiles. "See no harm" he responds
back.
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Panel 1 Alicia hesitates as she goes into chibi mood and
gazes upon Kerushuu almost upset at the motion he
made. Seeing this was childlike. But blushing
slightly.
Caption *pita/pause*
ALICIA
But... It's for children....
Panel 2 Kerushuu smiles as he leans back and goes back to
blowing his pipe. (Side view) His eyes are closed.
Caption *buku buku/bubble* water pipe
KERUSHUU
Are you not a child yourself?
Panel 3 Alicia blushes at the thought of him saying. She
reaches for the cup anyway. Chibi mood.
Caption *pashi/grasp/grab* her grasping the cup.
Panel 4 Another Chibi panel she tips it back.
Caption *kokkun/gulp*
Panel 5 Alicia blushes as she has a ring of milk around
the top of her lip. She looks away shy and soft
looking as she normally does.
Caption *nuku nuku/ nice and warm/soft*
ALICIA
Than... Thank you.
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A little dazed asks him what happened, he smiles sighing as he pulls back
the curitan beside her bed a bit more. And as the curitan is pulled back, the
whole room like a cloth shed away to show earth, sun and space. Alicia gasp
and arrises and yet she sits amazed at it all. He tells her she's on the alienship
above earth. She doesn't believe him till the room begins to reform around
them to a show they was in some simulation ward.
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Panel 1 Panel of Kerushuu smiling.
Panel 2 Alicia stares out of the window as she holds the
cup in her hands.
Caption Nothing.
ALICIA
What happened? I mean... Why am I here?
Why are you here? Where am I?
Panel 3 Kerushuu stands alongside the bed as he gazes out
at the world as well.
Caption *saku saku/squish*
KERUSHUU
Well my dear as for where you are...
Panel 4 Pulling back the shade of the curtain till it
rips. And we see the first evidence of space.
Caption *buchi buchi/ripping* curtain ripping.
Panel 5 The room begins to peel away till all of space is
around them. Earth is below them.
Caption *Shin/silience* Space. *Hmmmm*
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Your in space my dear, aboard a alienship
that's currently hovering over your dear
earth.
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Alicia gasp and arrises and yet she sits amazed at it all. He tells her she's on
the alienship above earth. She doesn't believe him till the room begins to
reform around them to a show they was in some simulation ward. "What are
you?" she asks him again as she touches where the glass was, feeling her
finger tips touch the last bit of space before it disappears. He smiles, "I am a
Kerushu, I am what you call an alien."
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Panel 1 Alicia stares out at space as if she's floating
away, and loses herself in the vastness of it.
Caption *fuwa fuwa/floating* sensation.
ALICIA
Space....
(Inner Thought)
Earth... Its below me, was earth always
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Panel 2 Alicia turns to see Kerushuu and he is bowing
before her, his long limb bent to show he is
bowing. He looks like a servant.
Caption *buka/fuka/bow* Kerushuu
KERUSHUU
And I. I am Kerushuu. And yes I am one of
those aliens. Nice to meet you.

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