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Organizing a Reaction Essay
• Like other essays, a reaction essay requires an introductory paragraph
with a thesis, one or more body paragraphs that develop the thesis, and
a conclusion that summarizes the response. There are several ways to
organize a reaction essay, but one simple pattern includes four
paragraphs: an introduction, two body paragraphs that describe your
reactions, and a conclusion.
The Introduction
The introduction to a reaction essay includes an overview or summary of the
prompt and a thesis statement with your response to the prompt. The overview of
the prompt should include citation information. For example, in a reaction essay
about an article listing the 10 happiest countries in the world, you should include a
sentence that introduces the prompt by name with proper in-text citation:
In her article “These Are the Top 10 Happiest Countries in the World,” Mejia (2018)
uses data from the United Nations Sustainable Development Solutions Network to
introduce the happiest countries and offer reasons these countries have made this
enviable list.
At the end of the essay, you should include a bibliographic entry for this prompt.
Supporting Details
• One way to organize a reaction essay is for one of the body paragraphs
to discuss parts of the prompt that were as you expected and explain
why, while the next body paragraph discusses parts of the prompt that
were surprising and explains why. You might consider other emotional
reactions to the prompt, such as pleasure, sadness, fear, hope,
disappointment, or even anger.
• Of course, a reaction essay may be longer than four paragraphs. For some
assignments, you can introduce other reactions in additional body paragraphs.
These paragraphs could focus on different aspects of the prompt such as:
• a second emotional response that you have • a different aspect of the prompt
(e.g., the reasons the artist painted a painting) • the style of presentation (e.g.,
the writing style or the writer’s tone) • the visual impact (e.g., the camera’s
framing of a movie, the design of a website)
• As you plan your essay, consider your personal experiences, your knowledge of
the topic, and the reasons behind your response to the prompt. Is your response
based on logic and facts, on emotion and feelings, or on both logic and emotion?
Brainstorming details for a reaction essay
What are your reactions to Figure 6.1?
• Write two things about the graphic and content that are as you would
expect and two things that surprise you
Discuss these questions with a partner. Then
read the essay and answer the questions that
follow.
• 1. How much food do you waste each week? Examples include not
eating everything on your plate at a meal or throwing away food that is
spoiled.
• 2. Is there one food item or food category that you think you waste more
than others?
Vocabulary
Reading
Complete the essay
outline
Thesis statement
• A thesis statement for a reaction essay indicates your primary response to the
prompt. Whether that reaction is surprise, like, dislike, outrage, or any other
response, you should clearly indicate the reason for your response.
• If the primary reaction to the prompt is negative, it is common to include a positive
statement before introducing the main response. In this case, connectors like but,
yet, however, and although contrast the positive and negative reactions.
• The new dietary guidelines contain some clearer suggestions but not enough advice about
the optimal amount of carbohydrates in a healthy diet.
• Thesis statements—and other sentences in a reaction essay—
often include adverbs of emphasis and similar phrases to indicate
the depth of your response.
• The new dietary guidelines are significantly better because they offer
clearer suggestions about sugar intake
Here are some common adverbs
of emphasis:
Write a thesis statement that best
captures your response to each
prompt. Use an adverb of emphasis in
each
Transitions in Reaction Essays
• Precise use of transitions helps you properly introduce and explain your
reactions to a prompt.
Identifying transitions
Reread the essay. Underline four sentences that include transition words
and phrases from the chart above. Discuss with a partner how these
sentences help support the writer’s ideas
Grammar: Adverb Clauses
• Adverb clauses are used to show relationships between ideas. Adverb
clauses answer the questions when, how, why, and under what condition.
An adverb clause is linked to a main clause by a subordinating
conjunction (e.g., because).
• Adverb clauses can appear before or after the main clause, though they
often begin sentences in academic writing. Varying the order of adverb
clauses enhances the readability of one’s writing. Note that a comma is
required when the adverb clause begins the sentence.
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Organizing a reaction essay

  • 2. Organizing a Reaction Essay • Like other essays, a reaction essay requires an introductory paragraph with a thesis, one or more body paragraphs that develop the thesis, and a conclusion that summarizes the response. There are several ways to organize a reaction essay, but one simple pattern includes four paragraphs: an introduction, two body paragraphs that describe your reactions, and a conclusion.
  • 3. The Introduction The introduction to a reaction essay includes an overview or summary of the prompt and a thesis statement with your response to the prompt. The overview of the prompt should include citation information. For example, in a reaction essay about an article listing the 10 happiest countries in the world, you should include a sentence that introduces the prompt by name with proper in-text citation: In her article “These Are the Top 10 Happiest Countries in the World,” Mejia (2018) uses data from the United Nations Sustainable Development Solutions Network to introduce the happiest countries and offer reasons these countries have made this enviable list. At the end of the essay, you should include a bibliographic entry for this prompt.
  • 4. Supporting Details • One way to organize a reaction essay is for one of the body paragraphs to discuss parts of the prompt that were as you expected and explain why, while the next body paragraph discusses parts of the prompt that were surprising and explains why. You might consider other emotional reactions to the prompt, such as pleasure, sadness, fear, hope, disappointment, or even anger.
  • 5. • Of course, a reaction essay may be longer than four paragraphs. For some assignments, you can introduce other reactions in additional body paragraphs. These paragraphs could focus on different aspects of the prompt such as: • a second emotional response that you have • a different aspect of the prompt (e.g., the reasons the artist painted a painting) • the style of presentation (e.g., the writing style or the writer’s tone) • the visual impact (e.g., the camera’s framing of a movie, the design of a website) • As you plan your essay, consider your personal experiences, your knowledge of the topic, and the reasons behind your response to the prompt. Is your response based on logic and facts, on emotion and feelings, or on both logic and emotion?
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8. Brainstorming details for a reaction essay What are your reactions to Figure 6.1? • Write two things about the graphic and content that are as you would expect and two things that surprise you
  • 9. Discuss these questions with a partner. Then read the essay and answer the questions that follow. • 1. How much food do you waste each week? Examples include not eating everything on your plate at a meal or throwing away food that is spoiled. • 2. Is there one food item or food category that you think you waste more than others?
  • 13. Thesis statement • A thesis statement for a reaction essay indicates your primary response to the prompt. Whether that reaction is surprise, like, dislike, outrage, or any other response, you should clearly indicate the reason for your response. • If the primary reaction to the prompt is negative, it is common to include a positive statement before introducing the main response. In this case, connectors like but, yet, however, and although contrast the positive and negative reactions. • The new dietary guidelines contain some clearer suggestions but not enough advice about the optimal amount of carbohydrates in a healthy diet.
  • 14. • Thesis statements—and other sentences in a reaction essay— often include adverbs of emphasis and similar phrases to indicate the depth of your response. • The new dietary guidelines are significantly better because they offer clearer suggestions about sugar intake
  • 15. Here are some common adverbs of emphasis:
  • 16. Write a thesis statement that best captures your response to each prompt. Use an adverb of emphasis in each
  • 17. Transitions in Reaction Essays • Precise use of transitions helps you properly introduce and explain your reactions to a prompt.
  • 18. Identifying transitions Reread the essay. Underline four sentences that include transition words and phrases from the chart above. Discuss with a partner how these sentences help support the writer’s ideas
  • 19. Grammar: Adverb Clauses • Adverb clauses are used to show relationships between ideas. Adverb clauses answer the questions when, how, why, and under what condition. An adverb clause is linked to a main clause by a subordinating conjunction (e.g., because). • Adverb clauses can appear before or after the main clause, though they often begin sentences in academic writing. Varying the order of adverb clauses enhances the readability of one’s writing. Note that a comma is required when the adverb clause begins the sentence.

Editor's Notes

  1. 1. The purpose of this essay is to describe a reaction to an infographic. 2. The National Geographic graphic “Lost and Tossed” (2016) depicts in a clear and comprehensible way the staggering amount of edible food that is wasted each year. 3. Reaction to the quality of the graphic: clear, comprehensible 4. Reaction to the topic of the graphic: alarming 5. Thesis statement: Given that, globally, so many people suffer from serious hunger, the information presented in this visual is especially alarming. 6. Answers will vary. 7. Possible answer: The writer could have included information about how much food is wasted at restaurants and supermarkets
  2. Title: The Shocking Truth about Food Waste I. Introduction A. Briefly mention how precious food is for humanity. B. Cite National Geographic’s visual of food loss. C. Thesis statement: Given that, globally, so many people suffer from serious hunger, the information presented in this visual is especially alarming. II. Body Paragraph 1 A. Most distressing revelation in the graphic: more fruits and vegetables are lost or wasted than actually eaten B. State that this graphic shows that all of us need to reduce food waste. III. Body Paragraph 2 A. Another disturbing statistic about food loss: 20 percent of food loss happens during picking and sorting. B. Rhetorical question: With modern agricultural equipment and technology readily available, how is it possible to waste that much food? IV. Body Paragraph 3 A. Discuss how consumers contribute to food loss—20%. B. This waste is unacceptable: it is insulting to the millions of people who are suffering from hunger around the globe. V. Conclusion A. Prediction: We will be more motivated to do our part toward reducing food waste.