1) The document provides feedback on a pitch for two film ideas. It summarizes that while the presenter felt awkward, the report said they displayed confidence and made eye contact. 2) The presenter felt idea 2 was more achievable than idea 1, and elements of idea 1 could be incorporated into idea 2, such as using pictures for flashbacks. 3) Overall the feedback was positive on the delivery, and the presenter decided to pursue idea 2 as it allowed more flexibility while still including aspects of idea 1.