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PITCH FEEDBACK
Max Cheshire
18/10/18
As the pitchreportsays,there was confidence withinmydelivery,thisallowsfor abetterconnection
betweenthe personpitchingandthe client.The PowerPointusedverymuchhelpedme indisplaying
my ideas,usingbulletpointsandbrief pointsto allow me todevelopuponmyideas.
Whenit comesto whatdidn’tgowell,Ifeltcontradictorytothe pointsmade inmy references,Ifelt
froma pitchpointof viewIwas veryawkwardand didn’tfeel 100percentconfident,thisismainly
because of the way I hadjust stringedmyPowerPointtogether,itwasverymucha copy and pasted
versionof the treatment.
In addition, it’sverycommonforanideato make sense inthe headof the creator but thenthis
makesitdifficultto transformthisintoPowerPointandthenintospeech.
Again,referringbacktothe report.The panel saidthatmy confidence wasthere aswell asdirecteye
contact. The reportalso statesthatthe panel were impressedbybothideasbutfeltidea1wasthe
betteroutof the two.HoweverIfeel thatidea2 is the ideaI am goingto go with,more due toit
beingthe more logisticallyachievable.Ispoke about,inidea1,aboutusingexternal sourcestohelp
the narrative of my film.Thisaddeddepthintomypitchandhelpedme explainthe ideamore
howeverthiswasnota strong enoughfeelingforme tocarry on and follow-throughwiththe idea.
Idea2 is simpler, howeverithasthe addedelementswhichallowme todiverse the editing
and add excitingvisual elementstothe film.Aswellas thatI am able to take elementsfromidea1
and add thisintoidea2. For example,inidea1I speakabout how I wantedtouse picturesto dive
intopast memoriesof myprotagonistwhoisa drugaddict whohas losteverything,thisideacould
be easilyintegratedintomysecondidea,whenitcomestothe relationshipproblemsof my
characters.I coulduse thisideaasflashbacksforthe secondidea.
Readingmypitchreportback, there’snotmuchI needto change whenitcomesto actual pitching,
althoughIsaid I didn’tfeel confident,howeverthe reportclearlysaysitis. I couldbe more prepared
for future pitches,Iwill take thisonboardforfuture pitches.
Idea2 will be the ideathatI am goingto pursue,forreasonsmentionedalreadybutalsothe ideais
still quite openandupinthe air whichallowsme totweakthe ideas.

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PITCH REPORT AND FEEDBACK

  • 1. PITCH FEEDBACK Max Cheshire 18/10/18 As the pitchreportsays,there was confidence withinmydelivery,thisallowsfor abetterconnection betweenthe personpitchingandthe client.The PowerPointusedverymuchhelpedme indisplaying my ideas,usingbulletpointsandbrief pointsto allow me todevelopuponmyideas. Whenit comesto whatdidn’tgowell,Ifeltcontradictorytothe pointsmade inmy references,Ifelt froma pitchpointof viewIwas veryawkwardand didn’tfeel 100percentconfident,thisismainly because of the way I hadjust stringedmyPowerPointtogether,itwasverymucha copy and pasted versionof the treatment. In addition, it’sverycommonforanideato make sense inthe headof the creator but thenthis makesitdifficultto transformthisintoPowerPointandthenintospeech. Again,referringbacktothe report.The panel saidthatmy confidence wasthere aswell asdirecteye contact. The reportalso statesthatthe panel were impressedbybothideasbutfeltidea1wasthe betteroutof the two.HoweverIfeel thatidea2 is the ideaI am goingto go with,more due toit beingthe more logisticallyachievable.Ispoke about,inidea1,aboutusingexternal sourcestohelp the narrative of my film.Thisaddeddepthintomypitchandhelpedme explainthe ideamore howeverthiswasnota strong enoughfeelingforme tocarry on and follow-throughwiththe idea. Idea2 is simpler, howeverithasthe addedelementswhichallowme todiverse the editing and add excitingvisual elementstothe film.Aswellas thatI am able to take elementsfromidea1 and add thisintoidea2. For example,inidea1I speakabout how I wantedtouse picturesto dive intopast memoriesof myprotagonistwhoisa drugaddict whohas losteverything,thisideacould be easilyintegratedintomysecondidea,whenitcomestothe relationshipproblemsof my characters.I coulduse thisideaasflashbacksforthe secondidea. Readingmypitchreportback, there’snotmuchI needto change whenitcomesto actual pitching, althoughIsaid I didn’tfeel confident,howeverthe reportclearlysaysitis. I couldbe more prepared for future pitches,Iwill take thisonboardforfuture pitches. Idea2 will be the ideathatI am goingto pursue,forreasonsmentionedalreadybutalsothe ideais still quite openandupinthe air whichallowsme totweakthe ideas.