1. WRITTEN ARTICLE ANALYSIS
DO WE LIVE IN A SOCIAL MEDIA TECHNOLOGY ADDICTED SOCIETY?
In the article “Do we live in a social media technology addicted society”, is the essay writing
that was posted on www.integralworld.net/benjamin76.html. It is an article from Integral World that
was found in July 2015. The author, Elliot Benjamin discussed issues on whether society especially
young people who have been extreme immersion on social media technology. The author argues that
he worried about society is easy to be addicted to social media technology. Next, the author's tone in
this article is a matter of sadness and fear because the author has a negative attitude towards social
media addiction. The author’s intended audiences to read this article are to society especially young
people that have been addicted to social media technology.
Next, to believe the argument about the article. The author shows the research finding by
himself at Husson University in Maine, USA to support the detail of the topic. In the article,
according to the Husson University Human Growth and Development and Introduction to
Psychology, the number of students regularly reveals about people are no longer known to interact
socially with others and they are enjoyable of using social media rather than communication. He also
assumes that students may not go deep into the text of what replaces regarding mental health and
provided some example supporting from Carl Rogers on 1961, he formulates that full contact about
the interpersonal emphasis of having genuine, caring, authentic dialogue and relationships that us the
essence of human psychology.
Back to the topic, the author viewed that society looks curious when he said it has a large
contrast between social online and facing communication. He also provided an example which is
family interaction and childhood obesity is immersion relates to social media technology addicted. In
the article, family lives together choose to send each other text messages rather than talk and young
children engage in their online social media communications instead of getting physical exercise with
other children. Next, the author also feels that society is using their time more concentrate on
documenting rather than talking. The statistic shows two girlfriends who snapped at least 30 pictures,
in the span of about 30 minutes, all the while discussing their social media lives observe by Benjamin,
the author.
The author’s argument has objectivity where is the support comes out with the relevant fact
about society very addicted to social media technology such as research finding by Benjamin,
examples from Carl Rogers on 1961 in paragraph 2, example by himself in paragraph 3 and statistic
of 30 pictures in 30 minutes by Benjamin. These strong supports show that the author’s arguments are
verifiable and reliable.
2. The author’s argument is valid because it presents a strong argument. The argument is strong
as they are supported by research findings and examples in paragraph 2, examples supporting from
paragraph 3 and statistics in paragraph 7. The author’s writing is credible since he did think social
media obsesses is wrong for society.
The author's argument also has completeness as the author presents strong support to
elaborate on each point stated by her. The author shows a balanced perspective and complete research
of view to support her speech. For instance, the research that she did can be seen from the types of
support in paragraph 2. It stated that people are no longer known to interact socially with others and
they are enjoyable of using social media rather than communication
The author appears to be inductive in his reasoning, as he provides all the specific support on
society is easy to be addicted to social media technology. He claims that people no longer know how
to interact socially with each other, and how they are much more comfortable in their online Facebook
relationships than in actually “talking” to people face-to-face and it can cause mental health to an
individual. He experiences as a community mental health worker where the young people need to
have genuine, caring, authentic dialogue and relationships that are the essence of humanistic
psychology. Paragraph 11 presents an example of inductive reasoning.
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to deliver awareness towards the reader how
negatively addicted to social media technology in society and real life. The author also would like to
inform the benefits that can be learned when more communication without technology.
The inference can be made is starting to have humanistic psychology such as caring and
ensuring that student has communication with each other. The author’s argument is consistent where
he keeps discussing the issues. In conclusion, addicted to technology is humanistic antidotes were put
into place on a widespread scale. Moreover, people should put more effort into controlling using
technology and the author also points given are strong enough to support the arguments since it
experienced by the author itself.
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