My Evaluation of the presentation

1. Friday, 11 May 2018
Evaluation - WWW / EBI
What went well?
What hasbeen great about our presentation is that we havehad great visual examples of
our work anddid a great job atbringing both scripts to life. Everybody in the group hada
part in the presentation so it wasn’t just one person reading out everything.
Even Better if?
We were weak in terms of introducing Pure Productions to the audience, we could have
improved our presentation by including more information about our production company.
Another part we could improve our presentation is by including an email address atthe
end of scripts. We haveincluded a phone number but the new generation are now using
internet andsearch engines more than ever asa link to a website would be so much easier
than calling on a mobile phone.
Personal Opinion
I believe overall the presentation was alright. We have been great atpresenting our radio
advert although there are certainly bits we can improve for the best of Ringwood School and
its new students.