1. Audience Feedback
Group 021

2. 1st Feedback
 One of the feedback sheets they said that Mise en
Scene and Camera Work were ‘excellent’ and Editing
and sound were ‘good’.
 They stated that the strengths of the sequence were
that it looked professional, had good Mise en Scene
and a lot of tension was created.
 The weaknesses were said to be that more could have
been done to the music to make it a little more
effective.

3. 2nd Feedback
 The next sheet we viewed said that it was clear that it was
an opening sequence and that the conventions were met.
 The ticked Editing as excellent and Mise en Scene, Camera
Work and Sound as good.
 They said that the Production Company intro was very
good, they said the flashback effect was good and that it
was clear what was happening.
 They said that the weaknesses were that the voiceover was
not very clear and the ending could have had an effect on it
to make it look better.

4. 3rd Feedback
 This group said that Camera Work was excellent and
Editing, Sound and Mise en Scene were good.
 They stated that the strengths were: Editing
Continuity, effective use of dialogue and sound, built
the tension, Camera work was effective and showed
what was happening.
 They said that the weaknesses were that the voiceover
was muffled a bit and hard to hear at times.

5. 4th Feedback
 This group said that Camera work was excellent and
Mise en Scene and Editing were good, with Sound
being OK.
 They said the strengths were: Editing and Camera
work, the acting was good as were the title font and
placements
 They said that the weaknesses were that the voiceover
was difficult to hear

6. Conclusion
 Overall, I think that our feedback was relatively fair in
terms of sound, editing and camera work but I felt the
we should have got more recognition for our mise en
scene.
 I felt that we had good props, with the gun and the
blood, that our costumes were appropriate for
detectives, our setting and location were realistic and
the body language of our actors was good to show
what was happening. I felt that our mise en scene was
the key to making it look professional.