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1. I have worked all my life in TV first as a director assistant,
then as director...
I have worked all my life in TV, first as an assistant
director, then as a director...
However, it depends not only of the kind of professional
job but also the emotional and professional employee's
profile.
However, it depends not only on the kind of (professional)
job but also on the employee's emotional and professional
profile.
Besides, used to traveling with not too much money and I
could cook to the rest of the group because I worked in a
summer camp as a cooker
Besides, I am used to travelling with not too much money
and I could cook for the rest of the group because I
worked in a summer camp as a cook
I am a self-made person, very sympathetic, but reckless
and decisive
I am a self-made, very sympathetic, but reckless and
decisive person
First and foremost I would like to say that it is absolutely
mind-boggling your advertisement. I am quiet interest in
being chosen
First and foremost I would like to say that your
advertisement is absolutely mind-boggling. I am quite
interested in being chosen

2. I belive that I am this kind of contestant that you are
looking for
I believe that I am the kind of contestant that you are
looking for
I've watched many TV programs similar to the one you are
offering to take part in because I find them extremely
interesting as they show people's strengthness not only in
a physical sense but specially in a mental meaning as
participants have to deal with extreme situations
I've watched many TV programs similar to the one you are
offering me to take part in, because I find them extremely
interesting as they show people's strength, not only in a
physical sense but also in a mental sense/one as
participants have to deal with extreme situations
I hope it meets your expectatives and the article become
published
I hope it meets your expectations and the article is
published
As regards to the aspects of how easy is this web I reckon
that it contains too technicisms what can produce that
students don't be able to understand it well
As regards the aspect of how user-friendly this web is I
reckon that it contains too much technical jargon for
students, which can lead to misunderstandings.

3. But I think the bigges disadvantages for working at home
is the difficult to split work and rest of your life making you
to downgroad your performance at work
But I think the biggest disadvantage of working at home is
the difficulty to juggle work and private life, leading to a
reduced professional performance.
I think I have the perfect athletic body and survives skills
and personality to be choosen for this TV programme. The
camera will love me
I think I have the perfect athletic body and survival skills
and also the right personality to be chosen for this TV
programme. The camera will love me!
On this site you will find all information you need about
any medicine subject
On this website you will find all the information you need
about any medical subject
First and foremost I am very interested in nature and
enviroment. When I was a child I took part in several
summer camps where I discovered how powerful the
nature is
First and foremost I am very interested in nature and the
environment. When I was a child I took part in several
summer camps where I discovered how powerful nature is
Despite the fact that it is believed that working in a team
is easy it is much harder than one thinks, specially under
hunger, thirsty and tired conditions

4. Despite the fact that it is believed working in a team is
easy it is much harder than one might think, especially in
extreme conditions involving hunger, thirst and fatigue.
I am highly interested in taking part in this incredible
program as since my childhood I am strongly keen on
travels, summer camps, risky sports and visiting new
countries (unparallel)
I am highly interested in taking part in this incredible
program as I’ve always been very keen on traveling, going
to summer camps, doing risky sports and visiting new
countries (parallel)
Actually, I am studying several languages at
Complutense's University in Madrid. I would like to express
my interest in this offer as I think I have acquired the
necessary skills and the right personality to work in a
team.
Currently, I am studying several languages at The
Complutense University in Madrid. I would like to express
my interest in this job opportunity as I think I have
acquired the necessary skills and the right personality to
work in a team.
I'm trying to give ideas to resolve the problems and I
suggest that problems can be better solved with clean
minded and this is very good skill to work in a team
I'm trying to give ideas to (re)solve (the) problems and I
suggest that problems might be / are better solved with a
clear mind and this is a very good skill to work in a team

5. Many students use wikipedia.com, that is fine for general
information, periods or famous artists, but you won't find
there uncommon artworks.
Many students use wikipedia.com, which is fine for general
information, periods or famous artists, but you won't find
uncommon artworks there.
But to sum, up, both websites are very interesting and
useful for all history students, so I recomend to use them
rather than wikipedia.com
But to sum up, both websites are very interesting and
useful for all history students, so I recommend using them
/ I recommend they use them rather than wikipedia.com
I am very interested in take part on that amazing
adventure
I am very interested in taking part in that amazing
adventure
I reckon I am perfect for the adventure because as a 33
years old fire Woman, not only I am in a good physical
condition but also I work in a team every day
I reckon I am perfect for the adventure because as a 33
year-old firefighter, not only am I in a good physical
condition but I also work in a team every day.
In resume, I find this an exciting challenge that will bring
new experiences to my life.
In short, I find this an exciting challenge that will bring
new experiences to my life.