Domestic populist policies are the current Hungarian response to Europe’s refugee crisis. In the past two years, anti-immigrant movements and hatred of Islam have been important subjects in society. Certain voters in Europe feel unsupported by current governments and policies, so they seek solutions to change things.

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Domestic populist politics is the
current Hungarian response to the
Europe’s refugee crisis
Domestic populist policies are the
current Hungarian response to
Europe’s refugee crisis
In the past two years the
movements anti-immigrants and
the hatred of Islam are two
subjects really important in our
society
In the past two years anti-
immigrant movements and the
hatred of Islam have been two
really important subjects in our
society

2. The problem is that the different
voters in Europe are not
certificated by the actual
governments and their politics, so
they try to find a solution for
change something
The problem is that certain voters
in Europe are not allowed to vote
by the current governments and
their policies, so they try to find a
solution to change something
The currency of the US, the dollar,
is the most used in international
trade.
The currency of the US, the dollar,
is the most widely used in
international trade.
He knows one of the brightest
economic periods based on the
consume of products

3. It experienced one of the brightest
economic periods based on the
consumption of goods.
Therefore, the radical political
party NSDAP, where Hitler was the
leader, became the most powerful
political party in Germany.
Therefore, the radical political
party NSDAP, of which Hitler was
the leader, / whose leader was
Hitler, became the most powerful
political party in Germany…
Then in 1929, the Nazi party, the
NSDAP, appeared, leaded by
Hitler, and they came with a total
revolutionary economic plan.
Then in 1929, the Nazi party, the
NSDAP, appeared, lead/led by

4. Hitler, and they came with a
totally revolutionary economic
plan.
Added to this, there was a very
strong propaganda action which
had as objective to incite the
Germans to think that Nazis were
the solution…
In addition, there was a very
strong propaganda program whose
objective (it) was to incite the
Germans to think that the Nazis
were the solution…
The far-right took office because a
major national identity crisis in
1940.

5. The far-right took office because
of a major national identity crisis
in 1940.
Fitch rating agency estimates
French’s long-term growth to
1.5% only.
The Fitch rating agency estimates
France’s long-term growth at
1.5% only.
Bloodshed was closely avoided in a
train from Amsterdam to Paris,
where the US military command of
a heavily armed man opened fire
at the height of Oignies.
Bloodshed was narrowly avoided
on/in a train from Amsterdam to
Paris, when 3 US military stopped
a heavily armed man from opening
fire around Oignies

6. She praised to lead the country to
get back its triple A and great
economy. She is telling everyone
what afraid people’s want to hear.
She promised/vowed to lead the
country to get back its triple A and
great economy. She is telling
everyone what frightened people
want to hear.
In consequence, people think that
if UK is independent, they can be
in charge of their country and not
being dependent of decisions of EU
for example.
In consequence, people think that
if the UK is independent, they can
be in charge of their country again
and not be dependent on/upon
decisions by EU for example.
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