The document discusses the causes and effects of young people having little leisure time and feeling pressure to work hard at their studies. The main causes identified are high competitiveness among students, over-attendance at tuition classes, and high expectations from teachers and parents. This leads young people to spend most of their time studying with little left for relaxation. As a result, they experience stress and tension from the heavy workload and lack of free time.
1. ENGLISH ASSIGNMENT 01
QUESTION 1 : -
In some countries young people have
little leisure time and are under a lot of
pressure to work hard in their studies.
What do you think are the causes and
effects of this condition? Plan your
response, and then write a cause and
effect essay.
2. Less Leisure Time and Pressure Attacking Young Generation
As the technology development , there is more challenges and requirement
that young people need to deal with . This situation will also bring us who
lives on this planet has become more difficult to survive . All people have
become rivals and seek for every opportunities to ensure their living . To
compete their rivals , young generation need to work hard especially on
their study as the key to success lies under hard work . So , it is very
common that they find themselves having very little leisure time which
also lend to tensions . From my personal perspective , there are three
main courses which are high competitive among students , tuition classes
and high requirement from elder .
High competitive among students in class is a phenomena nowadays . All
students have the same objective which is study hard to achieves their
goal – excellent academic to success in their future . Long terms of
involving in high competitive environment will lend to cruelness and
egoism of the person . To achieves their goal , not only focus on study ,
25% of students in class will try evil tricks towards their classmates due to
personal profit . Meanwhile , 75% of students will be stress for facing the
competitive in class . This is because , failure of achieve their goal by
gaining good result will lead to prejudice from the excellence students . By
avoiding to become a loser , weak students need work hard by spending
more time on study that lead in decreasing leisure time which cause
pressure to them . One of the ways to overcome this situation is ,
students can express their feeling to person who can be trusted .
Unfortunately , in this competitive surrounding , only 10 out of 100 percent
probability to have a trust person and this made the condition worse .
Besides high competitive among students in class , over attending tuition
classes will also cause less leisure time and lead to pressure . To catch
up the global changing with the rapid progression towards the high
technology development . As parents , they will sent their children to extra
tuition classes by hoping their children will gain more knowledge so that
they will not be suffer in future . Meanwhile , different teachers will have
different way of teaching and opinions based on the same topic .From
this situation , students may get confuse on the topics which will cause
them feel stress . Besides that , due to wealth financial in family , parents
3. will also sent their children to co- curricular classes such as piano classes ,
dancing classes and so on . Too much of extra classes for the children
will grab all their free time which cause leisure time to them . The children
have no free time to relax themselves by doing their favorite things , in
this condition , stress begin to attack them .
In addition to that , high requirement from the elder will also cause
stress to young people . In school , teachers will expect their students to
have excellence result in their exam . To achieve their wish , students
need to do a lot of assignment given by the teachers . Self revision add
up with addition of assignments really burns a lot of time . Students need
to face the pressure of high expectation on exam by the teachers , the
worse part is , they did’t really have free time to relax themselves because
most of their time are used for assignments . Moreover , every parents
wants their kids to do well in school and go on to have successful
career . To achieve parent’s wish , sometimes , children are forced to
study for hours and hours at home . Some parent will minimize their
children ‘ s entertaining time and replace it by studying because according
to their opinion , entertainment for children is a waste of time . Honestly to
say that , they totally wrong . Entertaining is the best way of releasing
stress for the young people . Sadly , their leisure time is extremely limited and
the pressure on them is considerable.
In a nutshell , high competitive among students , tuition classes and high
requirement from elder really will grab them a lot of time causes them to
have little leisure time and pressure will be increasing . From my personal
opinions , all individual need to pay more concern on this issue . Young
people are the future hope so please treat them as gold but not a robot .
Everyone will be tired and need extra time for rest , same as the young
people . Please give them some childhood . “ A rest , is to run a longer
path “