Hira invites her friend Savannah to stay the night since her parents are away. That evening, they hear knocking at the door but no one is there. Later that night, they are awakened by loud knocking and Savannah goes to check but finds nothing. Hira then sees a ghostly woman and convinces Savannah. They then encounter the woman and a boy ghost together before both ghosts charge at them. The next morning, Savannah finds a picture of the woman and boy but cannot wake Hira.
2. Scene 1
School setting
Hira: Oh yeah! That reminds me, d’you wanna stay the night tonight?
My parents are going away for the weekend and you know I get a
little scared at night on my own.
Savannah: yeah yeah sounds like a plan.
Scene 2
Hira’s house, 6.00pm
Hira and savannah: natural speech in regards to cooking and setting
table up, general talk.
Lights/electricity
Savannah: You got any candles ?
Hira lights candle, firelight in face
Hira: duhh
-cut( 7.00pm, candles on table, eating)
front door knocks
Hira: I’ll get it
Savannah: I didn’t expect you not to
-Answers door no one’s thereSavannah: Who is it?
Hira: No one
-Closes doorSavannah: Its probably those dead people you’re always talking
laughs
3. Hira: That’s not funny, I tell you these things cuz im genuinely scared
so don’t mock me.
Savannah: Not my fault you’re a Pussy.
Hira: fuuuConversation cut by something being thrown in the kitchen
Hira: Did you not just hear that?
Savannah: Oh my gosh Hira, you’re so paranoid, (0.2) lets just go
upstairs.
Scene 3
Bedroom, getting ready for bed
-Hira gets in bed –
Hira: can you switch the light off?
Savannah: I swear Hira rolls eyes
-Sleeping, Loud aggressive knocking on the main door wakes the two
friends up (3.00am)Hira: What the hell was that?
Savannah: It’s the main door, ill go check cuz I know how you go on.
-Savannah goes downstairs, hesitant to open the door but opens it
anyway to find nobody at door, gets scared cuz suddenly Hira
screams, so she runs upstairs the room to find a traumatised HiraHira: omg no, I just seen her, she was there, savannah, im not lying
right there , she was there, she was there.
Hira: OH MY GOD savannah behind you!
- Savannah turns around and see the woman disappear and drops
on the floor –
Savannah: Alright I believe you now, I felt someone breathing on my
neck
4. - light flickering in spare bedroom, savannah and hira get up to see
whats that all about, woman, brushes past into spare bedroom,
hira infront of savannahHira: turns around she’s not in here.
- Hira turns around to face Savannah , points directly over her
shoulder to tell her that a boy is behind her, Savannah turns, boy
disappears and appears behind Hira in the spare room
accompanied by the woman, Hira meets savannah in the centre of
the room (POV shot looking at boy and woman), the two charge at
Savannah and Hira, they fall on their backs, the two appear on
the landing holding hands and quietly walk downstairsHeart beat decreases and calm down as the shot fades into
next morning
Scene 4
Morning in Hira’s bedroom
-Savannah wakes up first to find a picture of the woman and boy
on the floor, Savannah realises the story tries to wake Hira up but
doesn’t wake upSavannah: Hira? (0.5) Hira!
The end.
