1. Question
Children over 15 should be allowed to make decisions about their lives
without the inference of their parents. Society should accept that
children mature at younger age these days and should adjust the law
accordingly. What do you think are the causes and effects of this
condition? Plan your response and then write a cause or effect essay.
Pre-writing (Listing)
Early maturation
Introduction
-Causes
-Physically & mentally
-Real life experience (wisdom & clever)
-Disagree
Substance Abuse
-Easy misleading by the others
-Cigarette and drugs
Sexual activity
-Pregnancy
-Responsibilities
2. Poorer Academic Outcomes
-Drop out rate increase
-Failure rate increase
-Did not know how to manage time
Conclusion
-Ways to prevent
-Enhance bonding of family & education (vital role)
-Instilling correct moral and ethical values
3. Early maturation
Teenagers mature more early in this globalization era. What cause
them early maturation? Nowadays, children facing many homework and
stress for compete with each other in many fields such as sports, academic,
social intercourse and other talent. Parents also busy in their work, they have
no time for listen to their children to say everything that’s in their mind. Hence,
they need to become independent they do many task without inference of
their parents. Although being mature is a good thing but the children at young
age are only physically mature, not mentally. They might be clever, but not
wisdom. Clever is the gift while we were born, we cannot choose to learn it;
wisdom is the real life experience. So, I disagree the society should accept
children mature at young age and adjust the law. There are several effects
such as substance abuse, sexual activity and poorer academic outcomes.
Firstly, teenagers are easy misleading by the others, especially peers.
The most easy teenagers will fell into is substance abuse such as cigarette
and drugs. Media always use cigarette to present that the character is mature
or rebel. Teenager likes to watch movie and drama, they will learn to imitate
those characters in the movie. Other than that, some peers would lead them
to smoke, and after they started get into habit, those peers will put something
in the cigarette such as drugs. Teenager was easy to fell into substance
abuse and misleading by others, this impact already can let me disagree to
adjust the law and accept children mature at young age.
4. After that, teenager always thought they are mature enough to do
anything they want for example sexual activity. Teenager didn’t think about
the impact before they do anything, wise person will consider the outcome
before do anything. This is because teenager is too rush for everything. What
is the impact if conduct sexual activity? Pregnancy. Who is suppose to
responsible for the child? Mostly on this situation, they will choose to induce
abortion or if their family wants the child, their parents will take it over.
Teenager was not able to take responsibility to raise a family yet. Hence, I
think teenager still cannot make their decision without inference of their
parents.
Moreover, teenager mature early will also influence their academic
outcomes. They will neglect their studies due to dating or hanging out with
friends all the time. Teenagers did not know how to manage time properly.
Mostly of them will get a poorer academic result, failure rate also increase.
After a few months with poor academic outcomes, they might drop out too,
because they will feel that they can’t catch up with the class and waste time
for attending to class. Mature at young age already affect the whole life of a
teenager. Teenagers needs adult’s real life experience and advice. Although
we cannot say that adult is always better than teenager, but normally adult
has more experience than teenager because they pass through the same
thing by themselves too.
Lastly, there are many effects for teenage maturate early, but the
problem is how we overcome it? Parent plays a vital role in this incident,
5. parent should enhance the bonding of family and they also should give a
proper education. Education was not the job for teachers in school only,
parents are their children first teacher. Parents should instilling correct moral
and ethical values to their child since they are young and small. During young
was like an sponge, what you teach, they will absorb it all. Conclusion is
children still needs inference of parents in their lives.
References and citation
Fraser, R. (2010). The consequences of early puberty, Retrieve 27
September 2014, from
tweenparenting.about.com/od/physicalemotionalgrowth/a/Early-Puberty.htm
