The document contains notes on improvements needed for a draft magazine cover and contents pages. The front cover needs more sell lines and a changed font and colors to have a "rock vibe." The contents pages should have texts in columns with more images and consistent, clear fonts. The double page spreads require a 50/50 text-image ratio, clearer text in a different font, enlarged images, and straightened articles.

1. Draft improvements

2. Front Cover drafts
I need to change the font, and add more sell
lines because the front cover looks plain.
I probably need to also change the colours
because it doesn’t have that rock vibe
I need to remove the extra image off of the
front cover.
I need to add a date and the price of the
magazine

3. Contents
The texts need to be in columns,
and I need more images,.
I have to make sure that the
fonts are the same and clear
to read.

4. DPS
I need to make my DPS 50/50 because it doesn't look equal;
The texts needs to be more clear and I have to use fonts from a
different software, I need a DPS headline.

5. DPS
I need to enlarge the image, and make the
article straight as it looks wonky and fake.