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1. VeeraSerebrova
Task 5 – Evaluation
At the beginningof ourassignmentIhave analysedtwotypesof pressproductswhichisajournalism
piece. One of the journalismpiecesthatIhave analyse isa blogby SunHye Mi, she’saKorean
beautybloggerwhoreviewsandwrites aboutKoreanbeautyproducts.Andanotherpiece of
journalismwasaBBC newsarticle.Thistaskhave helpedtodevelopmyideasformyproductand
helpedme tounderstandthe differentformatsthatisusedindifferentjournalismpieces. From
doingthisI have decidedthatIwant to do a blogformatpiece of journalismaboutKoreanSkincare.
WhenI pickedMy ideawhichis‘Everygirl shouldknow this!10 stepKoreanskincare routine ‘The
feedbackthatI have receivedfromthe feedbackersshowedthatthe Koreanskincare journalism
productwill be the bestchoice forthe successof my product.I had noneedinresearchingaboutthe
topicbecause I have usedall the productsbefore andI know the featuresandIcan give a solid
feedbackoneachproduct.
At the start of the assignmentIhave triedtodo byblogvia bloggerbutwhatI didn’tlike isthatI
couldn’thave enoughcontrol overthe layout,my teacherhave suggestedme wix andIhave usedit
because itgivesyoua lotof control on the layoutwhichmakesyourwebsite unique andcatchy. My
journalismpiecestargetaudiencewere youngpeoplebetween16-25 yearsold.I useda casual
language forbothof the pieces.Iexplainedeverythingbrieflyandinthe waywhere the audience
will understandwhatI’m talkingabout.WhenIdidmyadaptationsIdidwhere forthe adults,the
wayI adaptedthe journalismpiece where bychangingthe language toformal,be precise withthe
informationI’mgivingandchange the beneficial aspectof eachproductthat adultswill be
interestedtoknow.WhenIfinishedall the journalismpiecesIputteditall togetheronalayoutthat I
made before ona wix.
My strengthswere thatIhave usedwix website before andIknew how towork withit.Thisgave me
quickstart to layingoutthe website.Itwasreallyfunbecause Ienjoytodothis.Alsobecause Iknow
the topicsthat I talkedaboutI didn’tneedtodoany researchfor myjournalismpiece.
One of the weaknessesthatIhad to face is thatI couldn’tuse my ownphotosforall the productsas
I didn’thadthem.Buyingthemwouldcosta lotof moneyandit wasn’ta choice forme.Therefore
the way I dealtwithisbytakingthe picturesof the productsI had andfindotherproductimageson
google.Imade it clearthat thispictureswhere takingfromgoogle andclearlyshowedwheremy
photosare. I struggledwithRecce as I didn’tknow if itwill be appropriate becausethe setting
locationwasmy room,I didas much as I could.
Throughoutthe whole assignmentIhave made a documentthatshowsthe progressionof the blog
and It showsthatall the workismine or if I have usedimagesfromgoogle Iclearlystatedthatthat’s
the case. FinallyIfeel reallyconfidentandhappywithmyproductand it will getalot of attention
fromthe targetedaudience.