1st Version of my script for my Media Foundation Portfolio.

1. CRIMINALS CLUB
SCENE 1
Establishing shot of prison (possibly stock footage).
SCENE 2
Criminals Club dressed in orange jumpsuits sat around in
a small circle in their prison socialisation room.
Disinterested guard standing offside reading a book.
RICHARD
We need to work out a way, a way
that we can take him down one
last time.
SCENE 3
Detective Whittaker's feet walking up towards the disused
warehouse.
SCENE 4
(same as scene 2)
SIMON
Yeah, let's do this.
RICHARD
We need to do it better than last
time too, no more daylight -
we're going in the dark.
FLASHBACK (CROSS BLUR)
SCENE 5
Richard holding knife covered in blood with blood all
over his hands, standing stressing out in a small dark
corner.
SCENE 6
Richard running down train station ramp covered in blood,
sweaty stressed and heavily breathing.
SCENE 7
Close-up of Whittaker's hat as he walks towards the
building.
SCENE 8
(same as scene 2)
RICHARD
He's gonna wish he never messed

2. with us.
SCENE 9
Detective Whittaker walks up to an old disused warehouse,
slowly and steadily as though he is used to the way he is
walking.