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These are individuals that have left comments and gave us feedback on our thriller
via YouTube, the comments in general were good but it is clear that we still have
some work to do to improve the thriller. By publishing our thriller on YouTube it
helped us get a wider target audience in regards to responding and enjoying the
thriller. There are five comments that have enabled us to point out and change our
thriller to support our audience, I am now going to analyse each one.
1. This comment suggests that we include more special effects for the
thriller to be more interesting, in response to this I will add in more
effects for example at the beginning I will add a blurred vision over the
male character to suggest that he is confused. Also they had pointed out
that they didn’t quite understand what was going on within the thriller
opening, to improve this I will add in more shots of the male character.
2. This individual is suggesting that our typography is too wide and that it
covers most of the screen. To change this I will make the font smaller
and the width thinner. To change the thriller being repetitive I will add in
a soundtrack that represents our thriller accurately.
3. Again the music is letting the project down by it not relating back to the
shots, so I will add in a soundtrack that is word for word perfect for our
thriller.
4. This individual is praising our thriller with not one bad word to say.
5. There is clearly mixed emotions about the music as some people enjoy
it, however the majority believe it should change.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

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  • 1. These are individuals that have left comments and gave us feedback on our thriller via YouTube, the comments in general were good but it is clear that we still have some work to do to improve the thriller. By publishing our thriller on YouTube it helped us get a wider target audience in regards to responding and enjoying the thriller. There are five comments that have enabled us to point out and change our thriller to support our audience, I am now going to analyse each one. 1. This comment suggests that we include more special effects for the thriller to be more interesting, in response to this I will add in more effects for example at the beginning I will add a blurred vision over the male character to suggest that he is confused. Also they had pointed out that they didn’t quite understand what was going on within the thriller opening, to improve this I will add in more shots of the male character. 2. This individual is suggesting that our typography is too wide and that it covers most of the screen. To change this I will make the font smaller and the width thinner. To change the thriller being repetitive I will add in a soundtrack that represents our thriller accurately. 3. Again the music is letting the project down by it not relating back to the shots, so I will add in a soundtrack that is word for word perfect for our thriller. 4. This individual is praising our thriller with not one bad word to say. 5. There is clearly mixed emotions about the music as some people enjoy it, however the majority believe it should change. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.