The feedback received from three groups that viewed the rough cut of the trailer was mostly positive. All three groups understood the genre and story that was being portrayed. The only criticisms were that the trailer needed more text to provide context, could benefit from some visual effects to make it seem darker and more intense, and the soundtrack needed adjustments to flow more smoothly. Based on the feedback, improvements were made to add more text to the trailer, incorporate effects, and refine the soundtrack.

1. Feedback From the Rough
Cut Screening

2. Feedback 1 The feedback from this group
was mainly positive.They
managed to gain a clear
understanding of the genre and
the overall them of the trailer.
The only problem they thought
of was that there wasn’t a lot of
text in the trailer and that the
same image was used for both
the poster and magazine. For
the trailer, I took on board their
feedback and started to include
more text shots to help set the
story and location.The reason
why the same image was used
for the poster and magazine
cover was because the other
photos weren't good enough to
use. However, in Legend, there
is the same image for the poster
and magazine cover too.

3. Feedback 2
Similar to the other groups, they
also had a clear understanding of
the story and genre of our film.
They picked out some skills we
used and the range of camera
shots and movements too.The
only issue they had was that it
was slow paced and needed some
visual effects too. For the poster
they thought that the images at
the back needed improvement so
we worked on that to blend them
in better and filled the space. For
the trailer I started to add in
different effects to make it seem
darker and more intense but also
look dated.

4. Feedback 3
Again, this group also caught on
with the genre of our trailer and
the basic story that is going on.
They liked the music from the
soundtrack but felt it needed to
be adjusted to make it run more
smooth. I started to work on this
to make sure it flows correctly
and doesn’t jump or not fit with
the footage. I also made sure that
it wasn’t too loud and the
dialogue can be heard clearly. For
the poster they said we needed a
billing block. So that was what
we started to work on after we
finished the images and
background.