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Writing for the Web
Dr. Gerald R. Lucas
This is not your standard
college writing.
Web Users
Lean forward
Are on a specific mission
Are busy and impatient
Don’t read, but scan
Are more specialized
Are selfish and self-centered
Expect “actionable content”
Usability Strategies
Write for a minimum — cut text in half
Use headings and subheadings
Use bulleted lists
Develop one idea per paragraph
Highlight keywords — bold is nice
Use English, not “marketese” or “academicese”
Do your homework — link out
Focus on Two Question	s
What? (what’s the page’s function?)
Why? (what’s in it for them?)
Writing Should Be
Brief
Precise
Active
Imaginative
Direct
Consistent
Aware
Concise
Example 1
Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized
attractions that draw large crowds of people every year,
without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places
were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts
Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State
Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598),
Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and
Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
Example 2
In 1996, six of the best-attended attractions in Nebraska
were Fort Robinson State Park, Scotts Bluff National
Monument, Arbor Lodge State Historical Park &
Museum, Carhenge, Stuhr Museum of the Prairie
Pioneer, and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park.
Example 3
Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions
that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In
1996, some of the most popular places were:
Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors)
Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166)
Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000)
Carhenge (86,598)
Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002)
Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
Example 4
Nebraska has several attractions. In 1996, some of the
most-visited places were Fort Robinson State Park
(355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument
(132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum
(100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the
Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State
Historical Park (28,446).
Example 5
In 1996, six of the most-visited places in Nebraska were:
Fort Robinson State Park
Scotts Bluff National Monument
Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum
Carhenge
Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer
Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park
Avoid blah-blah text.
WordPress
Make it actionable — take advantage of the Web
Do your homework — show credibility
Use an original, specific title — think keywords
Have a specific point and get to it — summary
Preview your entries — know what it will look like
Use appropriate category and tags
Proofread and revise
Example
Jakob Neilson “Low-Literacy Users: Writing for a
Broad Consumer Audience.”
“Link unto others’ good stuff
as you would have them link
unto your good stuff.” —Jeff
Jarvis
Links
Are “actionable content”
Attract the reader’s eye
Show credibility
Must be relevant
Break down the linearity of the text
Must work — check them for accuracy
In Summary
Know your users
Practice usability — “actionable content”
Avoid “academic” writing
Avoid blah-blah words
Cut your prose in half
Know what and why
References
Carroll, Brian. Writing for Digital Media. Routledge,
2010.
Nielson, Jakob. Use It. http://www.useit.com/

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Writing for the web ’13

  • 1. Writing for the Web Dr. Gerald R. Lucas
  • 2. This is not your standard college writing.
  • 3. Web Users Lean forward Are on a specific mission Are busy and impatient Don’t read, but scan Are more specialized Are selfish and self-centered Expect “actionable content”
  • 4. Usability Strategies Write for a minimum — cut text in half Use headings and subheadings Use bulleted lists Develop one idea per paragraph Highlight keywords — bold is nice Use English, not “marketese” or “academicese” Do your homework — link out
  • 5. Focus on Two Question s What? (what’s the page’s function?) Why? (what’s in it for them?)
  • 7. Example 1 Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
  • 8. Example 2 In 1996, six of the best-attended attractions in Nebraska were Fort Robinson State Park, Scotts Bluff National Monument, Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum, Carhenge, Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer, and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park.
  • 9. Example 3 Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places were: Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors) Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166) Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000) Carhenge (86,598) Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002) Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
  • 10. Example 4 Nebraska has several attractions. In 1996, some of the most-visited places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
  • 11. Example 5 In 1996, six of the most-visited places in Nebraska were: Fort Robinson State Park Scotts Bluff National Monument Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum Carhenge Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park
  • 13. WordPress Make it actionable — take advantage of the Web Do your homework — show credibility Use an original, specific title — think keywords Have a specific point and get to it — summary Preview your entries — know what it will look like Use appropriate category and tags Proofread and revise
  • 14. Example Jakob Neilson “Low-Literacy Users: Writing for a Broad Consumer Audience.”
  • 15. “Link unto others’ good stuff as you would have them link unto your good stuff.” —Jeff Jarvis
  • 16. Links Are “actionable content” Attract the reader’s eye Show credibility Must be relevant Break down the linearity of the text Must work — check them for accuracy
  • 17. In Summary Know your users Practice usability — “actionable content” Avoid “academic” writing Avoid blah-blah words Cut your prose in half Know what and why
  • 18. References Carroll, Brian. Writing for Digital Media. Routledge, 2010. Nielson, Jakob. Use It. http://www.useit.com/