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Varying Sentence
Types & Starters
Why is sentence pattern variation important in writing?
There are 4 basic types of sentences  ranging from simple sentences to sentences
containing multiple types of clauses. Sentence pattern refers to the use of these
different types of sentences and the ways in which they are arranged in a piece of
writing.  It is important to vary the types of sentences used and their arrangements in
writing because doing so can make your writing more appealing to your audience. If
there is little variation to be found in your sentence pattern, your writing may become
boring or repetitive to your reader.    
Main Types of Sentences
1. Simple Sentence
2. Compound Sentence
3. Complex Sentence
4. Compound-Complex Sentence
Simple sentences consist of one independent clause and express one idea.
Ex: The company plans to market the product overseas.
       Kelly attended East Carolina University to study biology.        
Compound sentences contain two or more independent clauses that are conjoined together
by a conjunction or a connecting word (i.e. for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so). There should
be no dependent clauses in a compound sentence.
Ex: The councilman proposed a ordinance, but the city council did not agree with the idea.
       Should we start eating or should we wait for everyone else to arrive first?  .
Complex sentences contain one independent clause with one or more dependent clauses.
The dependent clause should follow a connecting word similar to those use in compound
sentences.
Ex: Since she was so good at geometry, no one expected her to fail algebra.
      The actress was happy that she got a part in the play even though it was a small one.
Compound­complex sentences contain two independent clauses with one or more
dependent clauses. The two independent clauses should be conjoined by a conjunction.
Ex: Since it rained so much during the summer that year, the air was very humid and the
grass grew very tall.
                            
How to Vary Sentence Types
in Your Writing
Tip 1
Tip 2
Tip 3
Vary Rhythm by Alternating Short & Long Sentences
Use Connector words
Review Your Paper & Color Code Sentence Types
Using a variety of connector words to create compound, complex and
compound­complex sentences will help with incorporating more sentence
variety throughout your work. Consider using some of the following
connector words:
Connectors with a comma, the FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Connectors with a semicolon and comma: however, moreover,
nevertheless, nonetheless, therefore
Cause/Effect: because, since, so that
Comparison/Contrast: although, even though, though, whereas, while
Place/Manner: where, wherever, how, however
Possibility/Conditions: if, whether, unless
Relation: that, which, who, whom
Time: after, as, before, since, when, whenever, while, until
 
Several sentences of the same length can make for bland writing. To
enliven paragraphs, write sentences of different lengths. This will also allow
for effective emphasis.
Example: I went to the show. I was early. I was the only one there. No one
else was there. I waited for half an hour. I had a lot of time. I thought a lot.
Then more people came. Two more people came. We went in. We went in
together. We took our seats. We sat in the balcony.
Revision: I went to the show, but I was early. I was the only one there. As I
waited for half an hour, I had a lot of time to think. Then two others came
and we went in and took seats in the balcony.
To ensure that you include a variety of sentence types in your writing, first
assign each of the 4 sentence types a different color. Then go back
through your piece of writing (or even just a few paragraphs) and highlight
or underline each sentence according to its type and assigned color. Once
you've done this, take a look at the balance of the 4 colors used. Does one
color stand out or is one entirely missing? If so, consider these tips:
               
­ Combine some of the shorter, simple sentences into compound                
  sentences
­ Break down some of the more complex sentences into simpler, shorter    
  ones.
­ Consider using a different arrangement of the 4 sentence types used
­ Incorporate the use of different connector words
 
How to Vary Sentence Starters
in Your Writing
Tip 1
Tip 2
Vary Sentence Starters
Read Your Writing Aloud
Too many sentences starting with the same word (e.g. "The," "It," "This," or
"I") can grow tedious for your audience. If you notice that many of your
sentences start the same way, try varying the opening words and phrases, so
that your writing is not tasking on your audience. Also, it is important to note
that different beginnings can alter not only the structure, but also the
emphasis of a sentence.
Example: She brushed her teeth meticulously. Then she brushed her hair    
                 quickly. Then she washed her face. Then she washed her hands
Revision:  Meticulously, she brushed her teeth, and then she brushed her    
                  hair. Her hands and face were washed afterwards.
Read your writing aloud.  Reading aloud allows one to easily pick up on dull,
monotonous prose in need of revision. When the flow from sentence to
sentence doesn't seem to be smooth or if you notice that your sentences
start with the same word or structure, try to incorporate more variety of
sentence starters and types. 
Example:
This sentence has five words. This is five words too. Five word sentences
are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is
happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It's like a
stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence
length and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm,
a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium
length. And sometimes when I am certain the reader is rested I will engage
him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with
energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums,
the crash of the cymbals, and sounds that say listen to this, it is important.  
Additional Tips:
Think about how each sentence fits with the one before it. 
Does this sentence add information? If so, then use "moreover,"
"furthermore," or another word that adds to the idea. 
Does this sentence contrast with the previous sentence? If so, then you
might use "however" or "on the other hand." 
Is there a time sequence involved? If so, you may use "next," "then," or
consider using "first," "second," etc. 
Don’t use the same transition/sentence starter too often. 
START
There are four basic sentence types. Using a variety of sentence types
allows writers to vary their voice and tone and it allows writers to represent
relationships between their ideas. Because I am using a variety of sentence
types, the tone of this paragraph is better. When we vary our sentence
structure, we can vary our voice and tone and we can better represent the
complexity of our ideas.
This revised paragraph now has more sentence variety as shown by the
various colors that represent each of the 4 sentence types. This paragraph
has a much better flow and is not monotonous or dull like the first example
paragraph.
Sample Paragraph
Sample Revision
University Writing Center
East Carolina University
Follow Us @ECUWC
Adapted from:
The Writing Center at UNC­Chapel Hill
(http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/sentence­
patterns/) and Purdue Online Writing Lab
(https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/573/01/) Schedule an appointment with
us at ecu.mywconline.com
There are four basic sentence types.  Writers should vary their voice and
tone. Sentence variety allows writers to represent relationships between
their ideas. Paragraphs that contain many sentences of the same type
become boring. Readers lose interest. Sentence variety better represents
the complexity of our ideas.
In the example paragraph above, all of the sentences used are of the same
type (simple sentences). To revise this paragraph, we will use the tips
presented in the above pages like combining short, simple sentences into
compound sentences, rearranging clauses to create complex and
compound­complex sentences and incorporating more connector words.
Created by Brenna Kirk, July 2016
Example Revision

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Varying Sentence Types & Starters

  • 1. Varying Sentence Types & Starters Why is sentence pattern variation important in writing? There are 4 basic types of sentences  ranging from simple sentences to sentences containing multiple types of clauses. Sentence pattern refers to the use of these different types of sentences and the ways in which they are arranged in a piece of writing.  It is important to vary the types of sentences used and their arrangements in writing because doing so can make your writing more appealing to your audience. If there is little variation to be found in your sentence pattern, your writing may become boring or repetitive to your reader.     Main Types of Sentences 1. Simple Sentence 2. Compound Sentence 3. Complex Sentence 4. Compound-Complex Sentence Simple sentences consist of one independent clause and express one idea. Ex: The company plans to market the product overseas.        Kelly attended East Carolina University to study biology.         Compound sentences contain two or more independent clauses that are conjoined together by a conjunction or a connecting word (i.e. for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so). There should be no dependent clauses in a compound sentence. Ex: The councilman proposed a ordinance, but the city council did not agree with the idea.        Should we start eating or should we wait for everyone else to arrive first?  . Complex sentences contain one independent clause with one or more dependent clauses. The dependent clause should follow a connecting word similar to those use in compound sentences. Ex: Since she was so good at geometry, no one expected her to fail algebra.       The actress was happy that she got a part in the play even though it was a small one. Compound­complex sentences contain two independent clauses with one or more dependent clauses. The two independent clauses should be conjoined by a conjunction. Ex: Since it rained so much during the summer that year, the air was very humid and the grass grew very tall.                             
  • 2. How to Vary Sentence Types in Your Writing Tip 1 Tip 2 Tip 3 Vary Rhythm by Alternating Short & Long Sentences Use Connector words Review Your Paper & Color Code Sentence Types Using a variety of connector words to create compound, complex and compound­complex sentences will help with incorporating more sentence variety throughout your work. Consider using some of the following connector words: Connectors with a comma, the FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so Connectors with a semicolon and comma: however, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, therefore Cause/Effect: because, since, so that Comparison/Contrast: although, even though, though, whereas, while Place/Manner: where, wherever, how, however Possibility/Conditions: if, whether, unless Relation: that, which, who, whom Time: after, as, before, since, when, whenever, while, until   Several sentences of the same length can make for bland writing. To enliven paragraphs, write sentences of different lengths. This will also allow for effective emphasis. Example: I went to the show. I was early. I was the only one there. No one else was there. I waited for half an hour. I had a lot of time. I thought a lot. Then more people came. Two more people came. We went in. We went in together. We took our seats. We sat in the balcony. Revision: I went to the show, but I was early. I was the only one there. As I waited for half an hour, I had a lot of time to think. Then two others came and we went in and took seats in the balcony. To ensure that you include a variety of sentence types in your writing, first assign each of the 4 sentence types a different color. Then go back through your piece of writing (or even just a few paragraphs) and highlight or underline each sentence according to its type and assigned color. Once you've done this, take a look at the balance of the 4 colors used. Does one color stand out or is one entirely missing? If so, consider these tips:                 ­ Combine some of the shorter, simple sentences into compound                   sentences ­ Break down some of the more complex sentences into simpler, shorter       ones. ­ Consider using a different arrangement of the 4 sentence types used ­ Incorporate the use of different connector words  
  • 3. How to Vary Sentence Starters in Your Writing Tip 1 Tip 2 Vary Sentence Starters Read Your Writing Aloud Too many sentences starting with the same word (e.g. "The," "It," "This," or "I") can grow tedious for your audience. If you notice that many of your sentences start the same way, try varying the opening words and phrases, so that your writing is not tasking on your audience. Also, it is important to note that different beginnings can alter not only the structure, but also the emphasis of a sentence. Example: She brushed her teeth meticulously. Then she brushed her hair                      quickly. Then she washed her face. Then she washed her hands Revision:  Meticulously, she brushed her teeth, and then she brushed her                       hair. Her hands and face were washed afterwards. Read your writing aloud.  Reading aloud allows one to easily pick up on dull, monotonous prose in need of revision. When the flow from sentence to sentence doesn't seem to be smooth or if you notice that your sentences start with the same word or structure, try to incorporate more variety of sentence starters and types.  Example: This sentence has five words. This is five words too. Five word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It's like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes when I am certain the reader is rested I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals, and sounds that say listen to this, it is important.   Additional Tips: Think about how each sentence fits with the one before it.  Does this sentence add information? If so, then use "moreover," "furthermore," or another word that adds to the idea.  Does this sentence contrast with the previous sentence? If so, then you might use "however" or "on the other hand."  Is there a time sequence involved? If so, you may use "next," "then," or consider using "first," "second," etc.  Don’t use the same transition/sentence starter too often.  START
  • 4. There are four basic sentence types. Using a variety of sentence types allows writers to vary their voice and tone and it allows writers to represent relationships between their ideas. Because I am using a variety of sentence types, the tone of this paragraph is better. When we vary our sentence structure, we can vary our voice and tone and we can better represent the complexity of our ideas. This revised paragraph now has more sentence variety as shown by the various colors that represent each of the 4 sentence types. This paragraph has a much better flow and is not monotonous or dull like the first example paragraph. Sample Paragraph Sample Revision University Writing Center East Carolina University Follow Us @ECUWC Adapted from: The Writing Center at UNC­Chapel Hill (http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/sentence­ patterns/) and Purdue Online Writing Lab (https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/573/01/) Schedule an appointment with us at ecu.mywconline.com There are four basic sentence types.  Writers should vary their voice and tone. Sentence variety allows writers to represent relationships between their ideas. Paragraphs that contain many sentences of the same type become boring. Readers lose interest. Sentence variety better represents the complexity of our ideas. In the example paragraph above, all of the sentences used are of the same type (simple sentences). To revise this paragraph, we will use the tips presented in the above pages like combining short, simple sentences into compound sentences, rearranging clauses to create complex and compound­complex sentences and incorporating more connector words. Created by Brenna Kirk, July 2016 Example Revision