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Unit 2 merit letter correction exercise
1. ++BTEC Creative Media Production
Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production
Merit grade task:
On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a
website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal
9*letter to clients.
For whatever reason, it is very badly written.
You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think
need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.
Task 2C2
2. Sample Advertising Proposal ………….
To Date: 6th
June 2011
Ryan Andrews
PRO,
Centric Advertisement Co.
Subject: Advertising proposal for the yet-to-release cosmetic product for
men “X-men”
Dear Andrews,
We would like to present before you an advertisement proposal related to
the yet-to-release cosmetic product “X-men” exclusively for men. We have
always contributed significantly in world’s cosmetic industry and developed
various effective products for women till date.
We are currently in top market for perfume and aftershaves, we have sold
many products in different countries, we have strong female support
because of our recent perfume but we haven’t got a fragrance for men yet
so we don't have there support but this is what were trying to bring out
next.
We believe that these products build with high technology and effective
ingredients, would satisfy customer’s need. Therefore, we want to regulate
the advertisement procedure through various beauty magazines, channels
and newspapers for reaching out to our intended customer’s base effectively.
Budget and cost are negotiable on proposal acceptance. Looking forward to
your early intimation regarding the proposal within 5 days from receiving it.
Yours Faithfully
George Madrew
Feline Cosmetics Ltd.
Task 2C2