1. BTEC Creative Media Production
Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production
Merit grade task:
On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a
website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal
letter to clients.
For whatever reason, it is very badly written.
You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think
need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.
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2. Sample Advertising Proposal Letter
To
Ryan Andrews
PRO,
Date: March 7th
2013
C A C (Centric Advertisement Company).
Subject: Advertising proposal for the yet-to-release cosmetic product for
men “X-men”
Dear Mr Andrews
We would like to present to you are new advertisement proposal related to
the yet-to-release cosmetic product “X-men” for men. We have always
contributed significantly in world’s cosmetic industry and developed various
effective products for women. This is for the first time we are releasing the
new range of cosmetic products for men.
One of the strengths of this product that it will not leave sweats marks.
That’s right a brand new formula comes before you. It is of course an all
man deodorant. It can be used for all kinds of sports activates and it will
show no sweat marks. One of the weakness for are product is that we’ve
been better know because for our female deodorant we have only started
making our male deodorant.
We believe that these products build with high technology and effective
ingredients, would satisfy customer’s need. Therefore, we want to regulate
the advertisement procedure through various beauty magazines, channels
and newspapers for reaching out to our intended customer’s base effectively.
Budget and cost are negotiable on proposal acceptance. We are looking
forward to your early intimation regarding the proposal within five days from
receiving it.
Yours Faithfully
George Madre
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3. Ferine Cosmetics Ltd.
Sourced from sampleproposal.org
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