This document summarizes feedback from 13 classmates on a media studies coursework opening. Each person provided one thing they liked about the piece, one thing they would change if editing it, and described the opening in one word. Common feedback included praise for the editing, cinematography, music and drama created. Suggested changes focused on adding more sound effects, like punching sounds, and balancing the background music volume. A word cloud created from the one-word descriptions showed terms like "dramatic", "engaging", and "tense" were used.