This document provides guidance on writing effective introductions for sociology essays. It emphasizes that introductions should demonstrate an understanding of the question and key concepts, indicate the intended structure of the answer, and use accurate sociological language. The document offers sample phrases and a model introduction to illustrate how to set up an answer in a clear, compelling way that addresses what the question is asking. It stresses the importance of making a bold, clear start to capture the examiner's attention and show that the question will be answered thoroughly.

1. Literacy in Sociology Guidance Notes #7
WRITING INTRODUCTIONS
Issues to consider
An introduction is vital for setting the scene in an answer. It helps your examiner to see how well you
have interpreted the question set (AO2a skills). It also gives them a sense of how you have planned your
answer, and with that how well you will approach the answer.
Strategies for displaying this skill
1. Ingredients of a good introduction
Show an understanding of the concepts/theories referred to in the set question. (Including key definitions,
setting out your stall, key points to be explored in the essay).
Show that you understand what the question is asking you to do.
Give some indication of the intended structure of the essay.
Be accurate in terms of grammar, spelling and sociological material
“MAKE A BOLD CLEAR START. ACKNOWLEDGE THAT YOU HAVE READ, UNDERSTOOD AND ARE
GOING TO RESPOND TO THE QUESTION SET AND HIGHLIGHT A KEY DEBATE IF THERE IS ONE!”
2. Useful phrases for introductions
“A popular debate in sociology concerns…….ie) the idea that ……… Whilst……claims……This viewpoint is
hotly disputed by a range of writers who instead suggest that……….”
“ Sociologists have long been divided on the issue of ….By …..we mean that …… Forexample….claimed to
have found evidence to support …., but this evidence is questionable because…”
“ Sociologists would support the view of …….to a certain extent, but evidence is far from conclusive because….”
3. Example introduction
For the question ‘assess the claim that the nuclear family has ceased to be the norm’.
“The nuclear family is defined as a cohabiting, heterosexual couple with one or more children. This
family structure is seen by many to be the norm in society, being the healthiest family form offering
stability for individuals and society. This ‘cereal packet image’ of the family however may well be seen
as out-dated, as over the last 40 years there has been a rise in a wide variety of family forms that do
not match this model. For some, this is a healthy development in society and is evidence that the
nuclear family is no longer the norm and to some extent is dying out. This essay will consider evidence
and arguments to assess the claim that the nuclear family is being replaced by alternatives in modern
society.”