The document is a letter from Silver Inning Foundation, a non-profit organization working for senior citizens, to the Deputy Secretary of the Ministry of Social Justice and Empowerment in India. The letter thanks the ministry for drafting the National Commission for Senior Citizens Bill and provides several suggestions to strengthen the bill, including adding representatives from senior citizens, NGOs working with seniors, and the NHRC to the commission. The letter also recommends expanding the commission's functions to include oversight of senior care facilities, addressing elder abuse, and coordinating with other government departments on issues concerning senior citizens. The foundation offers its full support to the government's efforts to promote welfare of elders through the bill.