SENTENCE VITALITY
1. Pets, cars, teachers.
2. Rover, my english professor.


EXAMPLES:
 An old blue car.
 A rusted baby-blue ´59 buick.
 WORDS AND PHRASES THAT DESCRIBE NOUNS
 AND VERBS

Laura was a pretty girl with nice brown eyes.
Laura was a fair-skinned girl with laughing brown eyes.
 The city housing manager pointed out a row of old
 wooden houses.




 The city housing manager pointed out a row of peeling
 and crumbling houses.
 REPLACE STATIC VERBS WITH ACTION VERBS.


 This problem will soon become evident.
 This problem will soon erupt.
Sentence vitality

Sentence vitality

  • 1.
  • 2.
    1. Pets, cars,teachers. 2. Rover, my english professor. EXAMPLES:  An old blue car.  A rusted baby-blue ´59 buick.
  • 3.
     WORDS ANDPHRASES THAT DESCRIBE NOUNS AND VERBS Laura was a pretty girl with nice brown eyes. Laura was a fair-skinned girl with laughing brown eyes.
  • 4.
     The cityhousing manager pointed out a row of old wooden houses.  The city housing manager pointed out a row of peeling and crumbling houses.
  • 5.
     REPLACE STATICVERBS WITH ACTION VERBS.  This problem will soon become evident.  This problem will soon erupt.