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Sentence Variety – Part 2 Carla M. Jefferson ED 095 Sandhills Community College
Sentence Variety The use of different lengths and kinds of sentences. You can become skilled in sentence variety by: Revising your writing for a balance of short and long sentences and a mix of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) Being aware of the kinds of sentences you can use
Using Different Ways to Join Ideas Using an –ing modifier Using an –ed modifier Using an appositive Using a who, which, or
Use an –ing Modifier You can avoid short, choppy sentences by using an –ing modifier. Ex.  Sarah was talking on her cell phone.  She drove into a tree. Talking on her cell phone, Sarah drove into a tree. Mr. Martinez loves to read travel books.  He plans his next vacation. Mr. Martinez loves to read travel books, planning his next vacation.
Use an –ed Modifier You can avoid short, choppy sentences by using an –ed modifier. Ex.  The fish was broiled with lemon and butter.  The fish was delicious. Broiled with lemon and butter, the fish was delicious. Ex.  Sam gave me a jewelry box.  It was painted with silver and blue flowers. Sam gave me a jewelry box painted with silver and blue flowers.
Use an Appositive An appositive is a phrase that renames  or describes  a noun. Appositive’s can go in the beginning, middle, or end of a sentence. Use commas to set off the appositive.
Use an Appositive Chocolate milk contains calcium and vitamins.  It is a favorite of children. Chocolate milk, a favorite of children, contains calcium and vitamins. Richard is my best friend.  He has been a wrestler for several years. Richard, my best friend, has been a wrester for several years. I am looking forward to Thanksgiving.  It is my favorite holiday. I am looking forward to Thanksgiving, my favorite holiday.
Classroom Assignment Exercise 6 (pg. 592) - #’s 6, 8, 10 Exercise 7 (pg. 593) - #’s 1, 3, 5 Exercise 9 (pg. 595 - #’s 7, 8, 9
Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. Jacob is my favorite cousin.  He won the golf tournament. Jacob, who is my favorite cousin, won the golf tournament.
Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. Good running shoes can be expensive.  They make running easier. Good running shoes, which can be expensive, make running easier.
Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. The cinnamon buns were delicious.  I tasted them. The cinnamon buns that I tasted were delicious.
Punctuating Who, What or That Clause Essential clause vs. Nonessential clause Decide whether the information in the clause is essential or nonessential. Ask yourself:  Is the sentence the same without the clause? Students who like history will love the movie. Essential – The sentence would hold the same meaning. Mel, who has been singing for years, deserves to win. Nonessential – The sentence would hold the same meaning.
Punctuating Who, What or That Clause Using which? Usually begins a nonessential clause The car that he was driving is expensive. Using that? Usually begins an essential clause The car, which I’ve had for years, needs a new muffler.
Classroom Assignment Exercise 10 (pg. 597) - #’s 2, 4, 6 Exercise 11 (pg 598)

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Sentence variety2 (chapter 33)

  • 1. Sentence Variety – Part 2 Carla M. Jefferson ED 095 Sandhills Community College
  • 2. Sentence Variety The use of different lengths and kinds of sentences. You can become skilled in sentence variety by: Revising your writing for a balance of short and long sentences and a mix of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) Being aware of the kinds of sentences you can use
  • 3. Using Different Ways to Join Ideas Using an –ing modifier Using an –ed modifier Using an appositive Using a who, which, or
  • 4. Use an –ing Modifier You can avoid short, choppy sentences by using an –ing modifier. Ex. Sarah was talking on her cell phone. She drove into a tree. Talking on her cell phone, Sarah drove into a tree. Mr. Martinez loves to read travel books. He plans his next vacation. Mr. Martinez loves to read travel books, planning his next vacation.
  • 5. Use an –ed Modifier You can avoid short, choppy sentences by using an –ed modifier. Ex. The fish was broiled with lemon and butter. The fish was delicious. Broiled with lemon and butter, the fish was delicious. Ex. Sam gave me a jewelry box. It was painted with silver and blue flowers. Sam gave me a jewelry box painted with silver and blue flowers.
  • 6. Use an Appositive An appositive is a phrase that renames or describes a noun. Appositive’s can go in the beginning, middle, or end of a sentence. Use commas to set off the appositive.
  • 7. Use an Appositive Chocolate milk contains calcium and vitamins. It is a favorite of children. Chocolate milk, a favorite of children, contains calcium and vitamins. Richard is my best friend. He has been a wrestler for several years. Richard, my best friend, has been a wrester for several years. I am looking forward to Thanksgiving. It is my favorite holiday. I am looking forward to Thanksgiving, my favorite holiday.
  • 8. Classroom Assignment Exercise 6 (pg. 592) - #’s 6, 8, 10 Exercise 7 (pg. 593) - #’s 1, 3, 5 Exercise 9 (pg. 595 - #’s 7, 8, 9
  • 9. Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. Jacob is my favorite cousin. He won the golf tournament. Jacob, who is my favorite cousin, won the golf tournament.
  • 10. Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. Good running shoes can be expensive. They make running easier. Good running shoes, which can be expensive, make running easier.
  • 11. Using Who, Which, or That Clauses Clauses beginning with who, which, or that can combine short sentences. The cinnamon buns were delicious. I tasted them. The cinnamon buns that I tasted were delicious.
  • 12. Punctuating Who, What or That Clause Essential clause vs. Nonessential clause Decide whether the information in the clause is essential or nonessential. Ask yourself: Is the sentence the same without the clause? Students who like history will love the movie. Essential – The sentence would hold the same meaning. Mel, who has been singing for years, deserves to win. Nonessential – The sentence would hold the same meaning.
  • 13. Punctuating Who, What or That Clause Using which? Usually begins a nonessential clause The car that he was driving is expensive. Using that? Usually begins an essential clause The car, which I’ve had for years, needs a new muffler.
  • 14. Classroom Assignment Exercise 10 (pg. 597) - #’s 2, 4, 6 Exercise 11 (pg 598)