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FADE IN:
EXT. HEATH TOWN BRIDGE - EVENING (6PM)
A short time-lapse of vehicles driving with long exposure
of tail lights is partnered with the movie title slowly
fading in against the backdrop.
EXT. HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM)
We follow a suspicious hooded male with a backpack (Dom)
turn into a block of flats and ascend the stairs leading
to the top level.
CUT TO BLACK
Ambience of a busy high street can be heard slightly
Dom:
You got 10 keys right there?
Shy:
Yeah, once I move this I’ll have enough money for my
brother’s ranso-
Gunshot can be heard shortly followed by a scream and
sirens.
Fade in:
INT. OFFICE - AFTERNOON (11am)
A detective (1) takes a sip of his coffee before placing
it down to start flicking through files regarding a
murder that has taken place. Detective 2 is standing at
Detective 1’s desk.
Detective 2:
The victim was a 29 year old male named Richard Price. He
has previous convictions for GBH as well as possession
with intent to supply Class A and B which he's served 8
years for on two different occasions.
Detective 1:
So the victim was no angel.
.2
Detective 2 (Smirks):
You could say that. He was found shot dead in an elevator
with a single shot to the brain. That’s pretty much the
basics but everything you’ll need to know will be in that
case file.
Detective 1:
Alright, leave it to me.
Slowly fades away as Detective 1 is reading the file.
Sharply cuts to Dom being placed in handcuffs in a park.
Officer: Dom Poole you are wanted for questioning
regarding the murder of Richard Price.
A loud jail cell locking sound can be heard.
FADE OUT
FDE IN, INT - INTERROGATION ROOM AFTERNOON (1PM)
Cuts to Detective 1 walking inside of the interrogation
room. The room is very dark and dimly lit by one light
bulb which dangles over the table which Dom and Detective
1 will sit at opposite ends at. The room is slightly
smokey. Detective 1 sits down and places his file onto
the table as well as his coffee. Dom has a scar on his
right cheek. He pulls a carton of cigarettes out from his
inside left blazer pocket. He opens the packet and offers
one to Dom which he refuses. They are then placed back in
his pocket. The room is very uneasy. Detective 1 presses
record on a tape recorder.
Detective 1:
So, Dom Poole, Richard Price is found dead in an elevator
and you’re seen straight after leaving the building he
was found dead in. Explain what you were doing.
.3
- Scene Switches Back to Heath Town whilst Dom narrates-
EXT - HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM)
Dom is walking up a flight of stairs and meets Richard.
When they get close they fist bump and seem happy to see
each other.
Dom:
I work at a delivery place, I had to deliver a pizza to
someone who lived in the same block of flats. I was just
in the wrong place at the wrong time.
-Scene switches back to the interrogation scene-
Detective 1 takes a piece of paper out of his file and
passes it towards Dom.
Detective 1:
This is your work rota for that week. You wouldn't of
been working on that day.
Dom:
I wish I wasn't working but I had to cover someone else’s
shift.
Detective 1:
So you deliver pizzas dressed in all black with your hood
up?
Detective 1 slides a picture of him leaving the building
onto the table.
Dom:
I didn’t know you had to follow a certain dress-code to
deliver food.
Detective 1:
Fair enough, what was your relationship was like with
Richard?
.4
EXT. HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM)
We return to Dom & Richard talking. They are speaking but
it is muted so Dom can narrate the scene. Subtitles will
be used so people can understand what they are saying.
Richard has a bag with him and passes Dom a carrier bag
with two parcels inside. The mute conversation goes as
follows:
Richard: There’s two kilos inside. Have the money by
Friday.
Dom: Alright cool.
Richard: There’s 10 more I need to move to get my brother
back.
(Narrating) Dom:
I haven’t seen him in ages. He was a good friend. I can’t
believe he got shot. (so i remember how tf does this guy
know he got shot? nnerrr. mf guilty)
.i

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Script mirage

  • 1. (Mirage) by (Darnell Boyle) Name (of company, if applicable) Address Phone Number

  • 2. FADE IN: EXT. HEATH TOWN BRIDGE - EVENING (6PM) A short time-lapse of vehicles driving with long exposure of tail lights is partnered with the movie title slowly fading in against the backdrop. EXT. HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM) We follow a suspicious hooded male with a backpack (Dom) turn into a block of flats and ascend the stairs leading to the top level. CUT TO BLACK Ambience of a busy high street can be heard slightly Dom: You got 10 keys right there? Shy: Yeah, once I move this I’ll have enough money for my brother’s ranso- Gunshot can be heard shortly followed by a scream and sirens. Fade in: INT. OFFICE - AFTERNOON (11am) A detective (1) takes a sip of his coffee before placing it down to start flicking through files regarding a murder that has taken place. Detective 2 is standing at Detective 1’s desk. Detective 2: The victim was a 29 year old male named Richard Price. He has previous convictions for GBH as well as possession with intent to supply Class A and B which he's served 8 years for on two different occasions. Detective 1: So the victim was no angel.
  • 3. .2 Detective 2 (Smirks): You could say that. He was found shot dead in an elevator with a single shot to the brain. That’s pretty much the basics but everything you’ll need to know will be in that case file. Detective 1: Alright, leave it to me. Slowly fades away as Detective 1 is reading the file. Sharply cuts to Dom being placed in handcuffs in a park. Officer: Dom Poole you are wanted for questioning regarding the murder of Richard Price. A loud jail cell locking sound can be heard. FADE OUT FDE IN, INT - INTERROGATION ROOM AFTERNOON (1PM) Cuts to Detective 1 walking inside of the interrogation room. The room is very dark and dimly lit by one light bulb which dangles over the table which Dom and Detective 1 will sit at opposite ends at. The room is slightly smokey. Detective 1 sits down and places his file onto the table as well as his coffee. Dom has a scar on his right cheek. He pulls a carton of cigarettes out from his inside left blazer pocket. He opens the packet and offers one to Dom which he refuses. They are then placed back in his pocket. The room is very uneasy. Detective 1 presses record on a tape recorder. Detective 1: So, Dom Poole, Richard Price is found dead in an elevator and you’re seen straight after leaving the building he was found dead in. Explain what you were doing.
  • 4. .3 - Scene Switches Back to Heath Town whilst Dom narrates- EXT - HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM) Dom is walking up a flight of stairs and meets Richard. When they get close they fist bump and seem happy to see each other. Dom: I work at a delivery place, I had to deliver a pizza to someone who lived in the same block of flats. I was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. -Scene switches back to the interrogation scene- Detective 1 takes a piece of paper out of his file and passes it towards Dom. Detective 1: This is your work rota for that week. You wouldn't of been working on that day. Dom: I wish I wasn't working but I had to cover someone else’s shift. Detective 1: So you deliver pizzas dressed in all black with your hood up? Detective 1 slides a picture of him leaving the building onto the table. Dom: I didn’t know you had to follow a certain dress-code to deliver food. Detective 1: Fair enough, what was your relationship was like with Richard?
  • 5. .4 EXT. HEATH TOWN FLATS - EVENING (6PM) We return to Dom & Richard talking. They are speaking but it is muted so Dom can narrate the scene. Subtitles will be used so people can understand what they are saying. Richard has a bag with him and passes Dom a carrier bag with two parcels inside. The mute conversation goes as follows: Richard: There’s two kilos inside. Have the money by Friday. Dom: Alright cool. Richard: There’s 10 more I need to move to get my brother back. (Narrating) Dom: I haven’t seen him in ages. He was a good friend. I can’t believe he got shot. (so i remember how tf does this guy know he got shot? nnerrr. mf guilty)
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