Script firstdraft
Non-diegetic music begins
BIRDS EYE VIEW craneto ESTABLISHING SHOT
Extreme Long shot girl
Cut to
Flashback 1 –all in red wash- 1 (Long angle on girl with knife, high angle on
opposite side, straight on mid shot)
Cut to
Long shotgirl
Cut to
Flashback 2 (high angle, hand going down smashing on edge of table- over the
shoulder feel)
Cut to
Mid shot girl
Cut to
Flashback 3 (4 nooses tided up, girl walking under them, camera quick pan)
Cut to
Close up girl
Cut to
Flashback 4 (inhumane wroteon wall, long shotto see writing hold to read
then crash zoomto a black area of the blood/blood splatter)
Cut to
Extreme close up girl
Zoom out to extreme close up on TV screen
Fuzz static on TV screen
Cut to black
Flash back ideas
1- Knife = Jagger
2- Smash = wine bottle- on table High angle
3- Noose = swoosh
4- Blood = inhumane wrotein blood crash zoom

Script first draft

  • 1.
    Script firstdraft Non-diegetic musicbegins BIRDS EYE VIEW craneto ESTABLISHING SHOT Extreme Long shot girl Cut to Flashback 1 –all in red wash- 1 (Long angle on girl with knife, high angle on opposite side, straight on mid shot) Cut to Long shotgirl Cut to Flashback 2 (high angle, hand going down smashing on edge of table- over the shoulder feel) Cut to Mid shot girl Cut to Flashback 3 (4 nooses tided up, girl walking under them, camera quick pan) Cut to Close up girl Cut to Flashback 4 (inhumane wroteon wall, long shotto see writing hold to read then crash zoomto a black area of the blood/blood splatter) Cut to Extreme close up girl Zoom out to extreme close up on TV screen Fuzz static on TV screen Cut to black
  • 2.
    Flash back ideas 1-Knife = Jagger 2- Smash = wine bottle- on table High angle 3- Noose = swoosh 4- Blood = inhumane wrotein blood crash zoom