2. 16 of November 2016
Scene 1
EXT. The weather is cloudy with dull colours such as the shops and
the clothing the two people are wearing, Lela Luxman and Eric
James are walking down the High Street, the clouds are covering
the sun so the sky is dark and the streets don't have a lot of
people walking around showing that the streets are empty,they are
both saying goodbye to each other by hugging whilst showing that
they are going to miss each other. While Eric James is walking
home he gets a call from Angelica Smith who asks if they could
meet up at Valentines Park.
(LS, MS,OTSS) There are people walking around in the park showing
the audience that people are enjoying themself and it's a public
place. Emphasises body language and how the main characters are
feeling.
CUT TO
Eric James
(OTSS)
Today was good, see you soon.
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Lela Luxman
(CU)
Yeah, it was fun, I’ll call you later.
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Eric James
(OTSS), zoom in Walks away towards his house and goes on phone.
Gets text from Angelica Smith of meeting up so he changes his
direction.
(2 hours have passed) Fade in from Black:
EXT. The sky is bright and colourful making the mood joyful. Eric
James meets Angelica Smith at the park and then they both sit on a
bench, but Eric James feels nervous and cautious of his
surroundings. Maria Johnson walks past and sees Eric James and
Violet Green sitting next to each other like they are on a date.
Eric James doesn't see Lela Luxman, but she sees them and finds
out that she is getting cheated on. Lela Luxman is at the park
because she is jogging and working out.
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(Tracking LS, MS) Eric James and Angelica Smith are walking
together in the park towards a bench, the trees in the park are
going to have yellow/orange leaves representing autumn.
Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down? (8 Seconds)
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EXT:People are walking past, Lela Luxman also walks past and sees
both Eric James and Angelica Smith on the bench flirting.
(MS)Eric James and Angelica Smith sitting together on the bench.
(MS)Lela Luxman jogs past with an awkward face as she sees them,
she then turns back and goes home.
Lyrics: My foolish heart turns at the stars, All that I am is all
that you see(8 seconds)
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Lela Luxman
(CU) close expression of her face as she has found out that her
boyfriend is cheating on her. She looks sad and feels like she is
no good.
Lyrics:You don't need nobody else, (4 seconds)
CUT TO:
Lela Luxman
(MS) Showing Lela Luxman angry and mad texting Eric James talking
about what she saw.
Lyrics:and you're putting this all on me, (3 seconds)
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4. Eric James
(OTSS) Eric James is texting to Lela Luxman saying forgive me for
what he has done, but Lela Luxman says what has been done can't be
fixed.
Lyrics:forgive me (2 seconds)
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 2
INT. Eric James is in his room drinking and is feeling guilty and
jealous as he ruined his relationships, the room should look like
a mess to show his state of mind.
Eric James
(HAS, MS) Eric is going to be on his bed laying down sad thinking
about what he has done and what we wants to take back.
Lyrics: There's a time and a place for all this, This is not the
place for all this (4 seconds)
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(MS,CU) Eric Texts Lela to come round.
Lyrics: Is there a reason why you're saying all this, And can we
talk about it later? (4 seconds)
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 3
EXT: The weather is still cloudy emphasising a bad mood as Lela
Luxman is going to Eric’s house to argue about what she saw. As
she is walking her face looks both sad and angry, Useing CU shot.
(MS, Tracking) Lela Luxman is walking down the street, the sky is
dull giving off a bad feeling, Lela Luxman is wearing blue to show
5. loyalty and that she wants him back but she knows she can't undo
what has been done.
Lyrics: I've gotta right my wrongs (3 seconds)
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(OTSS) Lela Luxman is at Eric James’s Door and she knocks the
door, Eric James opens it, cuts to a OTSS of Eric James’s view.
Lyrics: With you is where I belong, You've been down from the go
(2 seconds)
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(SRS, OTSS, LS) Both are sitting on the bed as Lela Luxman, they
both feel sad and can't hide it. suddenly LEla Luxman takes off a
bracelet that Eric James Bought for her when they were together,
Lela Luxman then hands him over the bracelet and leaves the room.
Eric is in shock and is breaking down.
Lyrics: recognition is what you want, And it's something that I
should know (3 seconds)
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Eric James
EXT.Eric is walking down the street the mood it bark and the sky
is cloudy showing how Eric is feeling Close Up Eric tries calling
Lela because he wants to try and make up with her and apologize
Lyrics: Something that I should know (3 seconds)
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6. Lela Luxman
(MS,CU,LS) Lela looks at her phone and hangs up and walks away and
you can see eric in the back.
Lyrics: All the things that you went through (2 seconds), girl I
never meant to (2 seconds) put you through it twice (3 seconds)
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EXT: Eric James goes out to buy Lela Luxman’s favorite flowers and
chocolate to give her for forgiveness.
(LS, CU) Eric James is buying gifts to give Lela Luxman. (MS)
Purchases flowers and chocolates and goes to lela’s house and
leaves the gifts with a note saying ‘i'm sorry’ on the front so
she knows who its from Eric James. Eric James is wearing white to
represent he is sorry.
Lyrics: Tell me how can I right my wrongs(3 seconds), That's
something that I should know (4 seconds), All the things that we
been through (2 seconds), girl I never meant to ( 2 seconds) put
you through it twice, no. (4 seconds)
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Scene 4
INT: Lela Luxman is at home and when she is about to go out she
sees the gifts and throws them away.
(CU, MS, Tracking with OTSS)Lela Luxman walks towards the door and
opens it to see the gifts and as she reads the note she goes
towards the bin to throw away the gifts.
7. Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down? ( 8 seconds) My foolish
heart turns at the stars ( 8 seconds), All that I am is all that
you see (5 seconds), You don't need nobody else (4 seconds) ,
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EXT: Lela is laughing on the phone and is in a good mood but Eric
is still down, the atmosphere is bright and sunny but still had a
bad and sad feel to it.
LS, MS)Eric sees Lela from across the street at long shot angle,
it then moves to a mid shot of Eric facial expressions of being
sad
Lyrics: and you're putting this all on me (3 seconds), forgive me
(2 seconds)
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Scene 5
(MS, OTSS) Sitting on his bed with his hands on his face
remembering all the good times he shared with lela and regretting
what he has done to her, He’s looking through his phone of
pictures of them two together.
Lyrics: I say you don't need nobody else ( 2 seconds), Feels like
you don't got me (2 seconds) so you feel like you've been by
yourself (2 seconds)
FADE TO BLACK:
(ECU, MS)Eric James goes to Lela Luxman’s house and knocks on the
door to figure things out but as she opens the door, Eric James
sees Lela Luxman’s new boyfriend then leaves.
8. Lyrics:I've been feeling kinda down myself (3 seconds),I've been
going through it as well (2 seconds)
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT: Eric James sees both Lela and Al together laughing in a
restaurant, eric was out to get some food from a supermarket, at
night it is cold and dark to show the mood.
(LS, MS, CU) Eric James waits outside the Restaurant for Lela and
Al, then the come out Eric goes to punch Al because how broken
inside he is, but fails and ends up getting pushed away into a
wall.
Lyrics: Girl i guess time will tell (3 seconds), that's the
problem, I ain't got any left (4 seconds), There's somethings I
can't help (3 seconds), But you would make the time for me( 3
seconds), Oh isn't that something that I should know? (2 seconds)
(LS, MS) Al and Lela are walking away but Lela looks back at Eric
on the floor broken
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(MS)back to Lela turning back and walking away with Al.
Lyrics: Something that I should know £ seconds), All the things
that you went through (2 seconds),girl I never meant to (2
seconds) put you through it twice, no. (4 seconds)
(A Day Has Passed) FADE TO BLACK:
9. Scene 6
INT: eric is drinking out on the street, depressed not knowing
what to do with himself. And he feels that he isn't wanted anymore
by anyone. Lela feels that she needs to forgive him or do
something to make things right but it's too late.
(Tracking MS zoom out to long shot,MS) walking then sit on the
floor with a drink depressed and sad, not knowing how to feel and
what to do, Eric feels lost.
Lyrics: Tell me how can I right my wrongs( 3 seconds)there’s
something that i should know(4 seconds), all the things that we
went through,(2 seconds)
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Lela Luxman
(MS,CU)Lela and Al are together and Lela feels sad but doesn't
know why, they are on the couch together watching TV.
Lyrics: all the things that we went through,(2 seconds) girl I
never meant to (2 seconds)
Eric James
(CU,MS,Tracking)Eric gets up from the ground then starts the walk
faster and throws a bottle against the wall in anger and smashes
Lyrics: girl I never meant to (2 seconds) put you through it twice
(4 seconds),That's something that I should know ( 4 seconds),
FADE TO BLACK:
(CU,LAS,MS)Eric is walking out his house, POV of eric reaching for
the handle, CU of feet leaving the door. It's sunny and eric is
wearing a black hoodie with his head down. Cuts to the camera on
10. the floor with Eric walking towards a drop. Eric then jumps off
committing suicide from depression.
Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down?(8 seconds) My foolish
heart turns at the stars (8 seconds). All that I am is all that
you see,(5 seconds)
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(Zoom Out,CU) Lela Tries to call Eric then cuts and zooms out of
eric on the floor with blood and his phone next to him ringing.
Lyrics: You don't need nobody else(4 seconds) and you're putting
this all on me (3 seconds), forgive me(2 seconds).
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