Scene breakdown
We fade into a student
at school going about
his day to day life
Voice over of who he is and
what’s about to happen
Talks about his parents to
let the audience know more
about him
In class, Blank comes across a website
that takes his attention. He reads the
first couple of sentences and gets more
interested.
Flash back of what he
went through when his
mother was killed
Its night and
we are outside
blanks house.
Blank is at his
house and is
scrolling through
the pages of the
website and comes
across the rules
“Whoevers name
is written in this
demise letter
will die”
Blank writes his
first name down.
The person who
killed his mother
Later that night
blank is watching
TV and sees that
the demise letter
has worked
Smiles
A few weeks later blank has
carried on typing names
down which he thinks
deserves retribution.
Graphic showing
time laps
A friend has seen
blank on this
website a couple
of times and gets
curious.
Male
FemaleCrush
She joins in but
going to the next
level.
She’s
addicted
Fearing being
caught and fearing
that they are going
overboard male
decides to stop
Female not
liking the idea
over reacts
They split
away from
each other
Wanting to change
his wrong doings
blank plans on
stopping her.
However she
had the same
idea wanted to
use the demise
letter to kill him
instead
Meeting at
his house
Meet at
close
Threw
They both decide
to meet at the
park
Little did she know,
he already had a
plan to counter
hers
This would kill
her in the end
instead of him
dying
During they meet up he
was having second
thoughts about going
through with his plan
At the end of the
meet up he has a
change of mind
and tires to save
her
Cuts to black,
leaving the
audience to
speculate
whether he saves
her or she dies.
The
audience
gets to see
what he
writes
Hit by trick at
the end of the
meet

Scene breakdown

  • 1.
    Scene breakdown We fadeinto a student at school going about his day to day life Voice over of who he is and what’s about to happen Talks about his parents to let the audience know more about him In class, Blank comes across a website that takes his attention. He reads the first couple of sentences and gets more interested. Flash back of what he went through when his mother was killed Its night and we are outside blanks house. Blank is at his house and is scrolling through the pages of the website and comes across the rules “Whoevers name is written in this demise letter will die” Blank writes his first name down. The person who killed his mother Later that night blank is watching TV and sees that the demise letter has worked Smiles A few weeks later blank has carried on typing names down which he thinks deserves retribution. Graphic showing time laps A friend has seen blank on this website a couple of times and gets curious. Male FemaleCrush She joins in but going to the next level. She’s addicted Fearing being caught and fearing that they are going overboard male decides to stop Female not liking the idea over reacts They split away from each other Wanting to change his wrong doings blank plans on stopping her. However she had the same idea wanted to use the demise letter to kill him instead Meeting at his house Meet at close
  • 2.
    Threw They both decide tomeet at the park Little did she know, he already had a plan to counter hers This would kill her in the end instead of him dying During they meet up he was having second thoughts about going through with his plan At the end of the meet up he has a change of mind and tires to save her Cuts to black, leaving the audience to speculate whether he saves her or she dies. The audience gets to see what he writes Hit by trick at the end of the meet