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Rachel Feidelman 
Rachel Cote 
ENGL101, Section 0503 
1 October 2014 
Reflection- Argument of Inquiry Paper 
Overall, this assignment taught me a lot about myself and my writing style. I 
learned that I write best by forming a bulleted list of points I want to cover, and then 
transforming that into a first rough draft. Additionally, I found that the library 
website is extremely helpful as well as the librarians at Mckeldin. Even though 
cyberbullying is a very popular topic of writing, finding appropriate academic 
sources was extremely difficult. This essay is very different than most writing I have 
done in the past because it requires you to reveal the importance of the issue 
without being subjective to a certain side. I found it difficult to refrain from showing 
my personal opinion on the subject, and I also struggled with finding a variety of 
perspectives on the issue since cyberbullying is generally frowned upon. I thought I 
used good sentence structure variety, solid transitions and my introductory 
paragraph was strong. I enjoy the draft workshop but I think it could be more 
beneficial if there were less specific questions on the worksheet, and instead more 
general ones, because that gives the editor a little leeway in their comments if they 
do not exactly reflect an answer to one of the given questions. Based on the 
comments from my academic summary, I worked especially hard on using a strictly 
academic voice and providing a clear thesis statement. I would like for you to focus 
on my exigence and if I kept your attention throughout the whole piece. For the next 
writing assignment, I hope to get more sets of eyes editing my rough drafts before I
Rachel Feidelman 
Rachel Cote 
ENGL101, Section 0503 
1 October 2014 
decide what changes to implement and how to write my final draft. I also want to 
work on taking a side without being ignorant to the alternative perspectives on the 
issue.

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Reflective writing argument of inquiry

  • 1. Rachel Feidelman Rachel Cote ENGL101, Section 0503 1 October 2014 Reflection- Argument of Inquiry Paper Overall, this assignment taught me a lot about myself and my writing style. I learned that I write best by forming a bulleted list of points I want to cover, and then transforming that into a first rough draft. Additionally, I found that the library website is extremely helpful as well as the librarians at Mckeldin. Even though cyberbullying is a very popular topic of writing, finding appropriate academic sources was extremely difficult. This essay is very different than most writing I have done in the past because it requires you to reveal the importance of the issue without being subjective to a certain side. I found it difficult to refrain from showing my personal opinion on the subject, and I also struggled with finding a variety of perspectives on the issue since cyberbullying is generally frowned upon. I thought I used good sentence structure variety, solid transitions and my introductory paragraph was strong. I enjoy the draft workshop but I think it could be more beneficial if there were less specific questions on the worksheet, and instead more general ones, because that gives the editor a little leeway in their comments if they do not exactly reflect an answer to one of the given questions. Based on the comments from my academic summary, I worked especially hard on using a strictly academic voice and providing a clear thesis statement. I would like for you to focus on my exigence and if I kept your attention throughout the whole piece. For the next writing assignment, I hope to get more sets of eyes editing my rough drafts before I
  • 2. Rachel Feidelman Rachel Cote ENGL101, Section 0503 1 October 2014 decide what changes to implement and how to write my final draft. I also want to work on taking a side without being ignorant to the alternative perspectives on the issue.