Emma provided feedback on the video saying that the editing and match on action was good but the plot was slow and could be improved by making it more interesting with more speech and narrative development. Additionally, the 180 degree rule was broken at one point. Overall, more planning is needed for a better storyline and ensuring the 180 degree rule is followed. Abby also provided feedback, saying the continuity and match on action was good and the title looked professional. However, the storyline was too simple and there was too much time spent on Jordan walking around the school. Adding fitting background music could have improved the mood and interest. Overall, the storyline and editing needs improvement along with adding music to enhance the atmosphere.