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Feedback
 Emma’s feedback:
 We used good match on action and had good editing, where we cut the
clips together so it looked like it continued throughout the video.
 However, she said the plot was slow and could be improved by making it
more interesting and adding more speech and developing the narrative.
 Also there is one place in the 180 degree rule is broken at the opening of
the door on the courtyard so another way we needed to improve would
be making sure the 180 degree rule isn’t broken.
 So overall, we need to work on planning in pre-production so that we have
a better, more creative storyline and to give someone the specific role of
making sure we stick to the 180 degree rule.
Feedback
 Abby’s feedback:
 The continuity is good throughout and also match on action.
 Another strength, was the title as it looked professional.
 However, a weakness would be that the storyline is simple and that we
spent too long of Jordan walking around the school.
 Also, we could’ve added music which suited the mood to the video which
could make the video more interesting.
 So overall, from this feedback I know we need to improve on the storyline
and improving editing and adding to the mood and overall atmosphere of
the video by adding music.

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Question 5 - Feedback

  • 2. Feedback  Emma’s feedback:  We used good match on action and had good editing, where we cut the clips together so it looked like it continued throughout the video.  However, she said the plot was slow and could be improved by making it more interesting and adding more speech and developing the narrative.  Also there is one place in the 180 degree rule is broken at the opening of the door on the courtyard so another way we needed to improve would be making sure the 180 degree rule isn’t broken.  So overall, we need to work on planning in pre-production so that we have a better, more creative storyline and to give someone the specific role of making sure we stick to the 180 degree rule.
  • 3. Feedback  Abby’s feedback:  The continuity is good throughout and also match on action.  Another strength, was the title as it looked professional.  However, a weakness would be that the storyline is simple and that we spent too long of Jordan walking around the school.  Also, we could’ve added music which suited the mood to the video which could make the video more interesting.  So overall, from this feedback I know we need to improve on the storyline and improving editing and adding to the mood and overall atmosphere of the video by adding music.