The document discusses feedback received on a parody TV show trailer from its intended audience. After creating mood boards to define the target viewers, early feedback noted issues with the music editing and lack of title cards. The creators then re-edited the music and added ending title cards. Later feedback praised the improvements, calling the revised trailer more professional and better branded.

2. We made audience mood boards out of
images to help up create the target
audience for our show, these are all
similar products related to out parody
and they are also all things people who
would like our trailer would like.

3. This was some of the feedback from our parody We asked the same people to watch our trailer and give us
rough cut some feedback and these are some of the quotes from the
final trailer.
The Sound needs editing
We need to re-order the shots to flow better "The final trailer was much better than the rough cut, I
We need to make the cuts flow better thought it looked more professional and the music fitted a
lot better than before" - Luke Wainhouse
>"I think the trailer was really funny and really
entertaining, the song suited the trailer but it "With the title card placed at the end it makes the whole
could have been edited better to fit the cuts so it trailer seem more realistic and gives the programme brand
didn't give the right connotations" - Luke identity" - Jack Kane
Wainhouse
We took this feedback and edited the music on
'Garage Band' so that it would fit in with our
trailer and also ducked the sound so you can hear
the actors speaking, it also fades out at the
end.
The feedback helped us to tailor our trailer to the
intended audience. After gaining feedback we went back
>"The trailer is funny but it doesn't have any title
and edited the trailer where the audience suggested, the
cards so i didn't know what was going on or which
comments after we had finished were a lot more positive
channel the show would be shown on." - Jack
than the rough cut.
Kane
We added que cards at the end to establish what
TV programme we were showing it on and
what time, date etc. We also re-arranged the
scenes to flow better.

4. The audience feedback helped us to make our trailer a lot more professional and
also after creating our audience profile we knew what sort of people we should be
asking for feedback. After receiving some constructive criticism we worked on it
and changed what we had to, to make the trailer more appealing to the target
audience.
“could have been edited better to fit the cuts so it
didn't give the right connotations"
“doesn't have any title cards”
We then changed all the things the audience mentioned and asked for more
feedback from the same people
"The final trailer was much better than the rough cut, i
thought it looked more proffesional and the music fitted a
lot better than before"
"With the title card placed at the end it makes the whole
trailer seem more realistic and gives the programme brand
identity"

5. I learnt that audience feedback is important to create any product that is advertised toward a certain audience.
Without asking for audience feedback from our target audience we wouldn’t have been able to tailor our trailer to
them.
We had analysed the trailer ourselves and changed what we could that seemed wrong or out of place but after
asking for feedback it really opened our eyes to what we had to change to make the trailer more believable as a
genuine soap.
We had to choose a popular song that everybody would know so that it gave the audience some familiarity to the
show and it was something totally new or alien to them.
We made 3 different drafts of the trailer before we felt it was finally finished.
We even got comments from other people on YouTube.