1. PRE PRODUCTION
26/01/2020
PROPOSAL
Film Synopsis
My filmis about two mates who try to transport a package, during their journey they both
mix up both packages and end up taking the wrong thing. The filmis about their journey and
what they experience throughout it.
Screenplay Structure
Act 1: The two friendsmeetandexchangepackages
Act 2: The Conflict:the journeyhappenswithoutthe knowledgepf the packagesnotbeingthe
correct one
Act 3: The Resolution:thisiswhere theyrealise thatthe package isthe wrongone and that the other
one isgone,leavingona cliff hanger
Characters
My characterswill be Me,and my twomates,possiblyincludingmore extras.
K – A youngcollege studentlookingtomake money onthe side of hisdailylife
T- isa college studentandgoodfriendswithK he joinshiminto makingmoneyandgivesKa handin
the job
Target Audience/USP
My targetaudience will be action/crime/adventure fansandalsowill be formostages.
Film Treatment
Two friends are in need in money and are willing to risk their freedom to earn it quick, one
of the friends has a link to someone who can do that quickly. So the two friends both get
two packages that why end up getting mixed up, one of the packages is to be thrown away
far and the other to be transported to someone, not realizing that they swapped the
packages they both experience a difficult journey to both do their jobs. Eventually after both
2. completing the jobs, once the friend delivers the package and the receiver realizes that it’s
the wrong thing, ends up calling the boss and that gets the 2 friends in big trouble
28/01/2020
GENRE
My genre wouldbe classedas Short,Crime,Drama,I feel like thiswouldbe agoodshort filmto
make and wouldgeta lotof the audience’sattention,myinfluencesare Rapman’sShiroStory, Salah
Eddine Elourdy andmanyotherpopularfilmmakers.
Here is a mood board :
Shiro Story
Salah Eddine Elourdy
COSTUME/PROPS
The clothesthat will be worninthe filmare mainly tracksuitsandnotactive wear,as it fitswhatthe
filmisaboutand will be easytocomplete activities(e.g.running,jumping) ,these
Clothesare alreadyfundedforastheyare the actors ownclothes.
3. 31/01/2020
NARRATIVE
A working title - The Drop Off
A short log line - a drop off and a transfer get mixed leading to a big problem.
Introduction of main characters
K - A Young college student try to make some money to fund his family, he cannot
find work and is desperate for money to survive. With a mate they try and eat quick
money and get them self’s in some trouble.
T - He is also a college student that wants to earn quick money and teams up with K
to a task that they have been directed to do, it’s to transport a package and another
to throw away and destroy it.
The boss - This is the man that has set up everything, the guy with the money. He
has direct these teens to do this work for him.
Two teens, they are participating in illegal activity to earn money to fund for their
families. In the north east, they are doing this to earn money to fund for their
families.
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