Poker Trailer

1. Construction Feedback
Strengths
Some artists shots. E.g poker night shots
The music worked.
Titling was suiting
Areas to Develop
1/3 Poker night
The mise-en-scene in some of the shots were weak.
Voice over at the end
Plan of changes:
What Who Details Done
Shot in the mirror needs to
be re filmed
Han
nah
Re-shot Mirror shot. He is
suppose to look like a
sharp cop, not any ol
geezer – 23 Jan
Voice-over at the end of the
trailer
Alec
19th Jan
Colouring of shots. To be
edited postproduction.
Grac
e
Alter colouring to make it
look more noir.
19th Jan
Re film the shot of suspect Alec
+
Grac
e
Delete one and replace
with new one.
18th Jan
Out of focus blind shot –
Delete / re do potentially
Alec
+
Grca
e
18th Jan
Arty shot alleyway scene.
Potentially with Joe
Alec Arty alleyway shot with
Joe. Could potentially also
add voice over as well
with the shots. 25th Jan
More arty shots
Alec 20th Jan