Please know that the score is just a ball-park and doesn't represent a grade that would be equivalent to a final paper. I suggest reviewing this as well as the prompt / student samples again. Hi, this has potential -- the evidence is apparent. Remember this is Summary, not….lists, and it must be clear where the evidence is from via source attribution. company name / job -- title? source? I have not idea where this evidence is from oh, boy - -this is way off. making a list is not part of the assignment / summary is with source attribution I don't mind a table or chart but where is it from and what is the purpose of it. I'm not seeing a government source Field Research Project ORIGINALITY REPORT 12% SIMILARITY INDEX 5% INTERNET SOURCES 0% PUBLICATIONS 9% STUDENT PAPERS PRIMARY SOURCES ( 1 ) ( 3 )Submitted to Florida International University Student Paper % www.l3harris.com ( 2 ) ( 3 ) ( 3 ) ( 2 % )Internet Source % Submitted to Embry Riddle Aeronautical University ( 1 )Student Paper Submitted to Florida Institute of Technology ( 4 )Student Paper % www.electricalengineer.com ( 5 ) ( 1 )Internet Source % www.wsj.com ( 6 ) ( 7 ) ( 1 ) ( 1 % )Internet Source % Submitted to Southern State Community College Student Paper Exclude quotes On Exclude bibliography On Exclude matches < 5 words Field Research Project GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE 8/10 GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor PAGE 1 Text Comment. Please know that the score is just a ball-park and doesn't represent a grade that would be equivalent to a final paper. I suggest reviewing this as well as the prompt / student examples again. Text Comment. Eisa, this has potential -- the evidence is apparent. Remember this is summary, not...lists, and it must be clear where the evidence is from via source attribution. PAGE 2 Text Comment. company name / job -- title? Text Comment. source? Text Comment. I have not idea where this evidence is from Text Comment. oh, boy - -this is way off. making a list is not part of the assignment / summary is with source attribution PAGE 3 Text Comment. I don't mind a table or chart but where is it from and what is the purpose of it. PAGE 4 PAGE 5 PAGE 6 Text Comment. I'm not seeing a government source PAGE 7 RUBRIC: 305 REVISED RESEARCH RESEARCH (30%) 0 / 100 0 / 100 Level of sources' quality, relevance & usefulness in helping to target future resume, and cover letter or graduate school statement. AMAZING (100) EXCELLENT (95) PRETTY GOOD (90) GOOD (85) BETTER THAN ADEQUATE (80) ADEQUATE (75) MUCH REVISION NEEDED (70) INADEQUATE (65) NO PASSION (60) DOCUMENTATION (30%) 0 / 100 Level of proficiency in providing accurate & consistent quote and reference attribution, both within written text and in source listing at end. AMAZING (100) EXCELLENT (95) PRETTY GOOD (90) GOOD (85) BETTER THAN ADEQUATE (80) ADEQUATE (75) MUCH REV ...