SCRIPTING
VISUALS SOUND
Ext. Shot of house
Where party is taking place
Intro of song, guitar strings
Int. Shot of party guests
Actors talkingandlaughing,acasual social event
“Bones sinking like”
Int. Shot of beer bottle
Beer at Rory’s feet, signifying his alcoholic
tendencies
“Stones/ All that we fall for”
Int. Shot of Rory slumped in chair
He is in the corner of the room, clear divide
betweenhimself,his girlfriend (who is chatting)
and the guests
“Homes, places we’ve/Grown”
Int. Shot of Holly (Rory POV)
She issmilingandtalking to guests, clear that he
wants to talk to her as he watches
“All of us are”
Int. POV Shot
Rory drinking, we see through the neck of the
bottle
“done for” (musical bridge to chorus)
“Int. Shot of Holly (B&W)
She lip syncs the song
“We live in a beautiful world”
Ext. Shot of Rory crossing the room
Through the bi-folding doors outside, Rory gets
up from his chair and crosses to Holly
“Yeah we do/Yeah we do”
Int. Shot of party (Rory POV)
Rory’sperspective ashe crossesthe room, shaky
hand held, unfocused
“We live in a beautiful world”
Int. Shot blood in sink (Musical bridge between verses)
Int. Quick cut from Holly POV
We see Rory approaching her, stumbling angrily
Insert shot of promise ring (B&W)
“Bones sinking like stones/ All”
Int. Rory grabs Holly’s wrist
He is speaking quickly to her under his breath
“that we fall for/Homes places”
Int. Shot Guests reaction
Guests look shocked/uncomfortable
“We’ve grown”
Int. Shot of hallway
Holly leading guests out nervously, Rory behind
her
“All of us are done for”
Ext. Shot of doorway
Guests being hugged goodbye at the door, Rory
can be seen looking miserable
(backing vocals) “Done for”
Int. Shot of hallway
Rory turned to Holly and is angrily conversing
“And we live in a beautiful world”
Int. Shot of Holly
She lip syncs the lyrics of the song
“Yeah we do/Yeah”
Int.Shot (POV) of Rory’s face as he yells at Holly “We do/ We live in a”
Int. Shot of party props
Incremental zoomtoRory’sstack of beer bottles
“beautiful world”
Int. Shot of couple in hallway
Rory shaking Holly’s shoulders roughly,
becoming aggressive/physical
Musical interlude
(B&W) Insert shot of blood
Bloody tissue from Holly’s nose
Int. Shot of couple in hallway
Holly pushes Rory away, and turns to bedroom
door.
(B&W) Insertshotof Hollyremovingmakeupand
crying
Musical interlude (intro piano) – 15 sec
Int. Shot of couple in hallway
He turnsHollyroundand hits her across the face
“And we live in a beautiful world”
Shotof picture frame to reflecta previous, more
happy life they once shared
“Yeah we do/Yeah we do”
Insert shot of roses “We live in a beautiful world”
Int. Blood dripping in sink “Bones sinking like stones”
Int. Bathroom- girl leant over sink “All that we fall for/homes, places we’ve
grown/all of us”
Int. Shot of Girl looking at blood on fingers “are done for”
Int. Close-up of bloody fingers “Oh/all that I’ve know, there’s”
Close-up of ring being thrown away “nothing here to run from”
Int.Close-upof girl lip-syncing lyrics to the song. “’Cause yeah,everybodyhere’sgotsomebodyto
lean on”
FADE TO BLACK. *music interlude*

PLANNING: Scripting

  • 1.
    SCRIPTING VISUALS SOUND Ext. Shotof house Where party is taking place Intro of song, guitar strings Int. Shot of party guests Actors talkingandlaughing,acasual social event “Bones sinking like” Int. Shot of beer bottle Beer at Rory’s feet, signifying his alcoholic tendencies “Stones/ All that we fall for” Int. Shot of Rory slumped in chair He is in the corner of the room, clear divide betweenhimself,his girlfriend (who is chatting) and the guests “Homes, places we’ve/Grown” Int. Shot of Holly (Rory POV) She issmilingandtalking to guests, clear that he wants to talk to her as he watches “All of us are” Int. POV Shot Rory drinking, we see through the neck of the bottle “done for” (musical bridge to chorus) “Int. Shot of Holly (B&W) She lip syncs the song “We live in a beautiful world” Ext. Shot of Rory crossing the room Through the bi-folding doors outside, Rory gets up from his chair and crosses to Holly “Yeah we do/Yeah we do” Int. Shot of party (Rory POV) Rory’sperspective ashe crossesthe room, shaky hand held, unfocused “We live in a beautiful world” Int. Shot blood in sink (Musical bridge between verses) Int. Quick cut from Holly POV We see Rory approaching her, stumbling angrily Insert shot of promise ring (B&W) “Bones sinking like stones/ All” Int. Rory grabs Holly’s wrist He is speaking quickly to her under his breath “that we fall for/Homes places” Int. Shot Guests reaction Guests look shocked/uncomfortable “We’ve grown” Int. Shot of hallway Holly leading guests out nervously, Rory behind her “All of us are done for” Ext. Shot of doorway Guests being hugged goodbye at the door, Rory can be seen looking miserable (backing vocals) “Done for” Int. Shot of hallway Rory turned to Holly and is angrily conversing “And we live in a beautiful world” Int. Shot of Holly She lip syncs the lyrics of the song “Yeah we do/Yeah” Int.Shot (POV) of Rory’s face as he yells at Holly “We do/ We live in a” Int. Shot of party props Incremental zoomtoRory’sstack of beer bottles “beautiful world”
  • 2.
    Int. Shot ofcouple in hallway Rory shaking Holly’s shoulders roughly, becoming aggressive/physical Musical interlude (B&W) Insert shot of blood Bloody tissue from Holly’s nose Int. Shot of couple in hallway Holly pushes Rory away, and turns to bedroom door. (B&W) Insertshotof Hollyremovingmakeupand crying Musical interlude (intro piano) – 15 sec Int. Shot of couple in hallway He turnsHollyroundand hits her across the face “And we live in a beautiful world” Shotof picture frame to reflecta previous, more happy life they once shared “Yeah we do/Yeah we do” Insert shot of roses “We live in a beautiful world” Int. Blood dripping in sink “Bones sinking like stones” Int. Bathroom- girl leant over sink “All that we fall for/homes, places we’ve grown/all of us” Int. Shot of Girl looking at blood on fingers “are done for” Int. Close-up of bloody fingers “Oh/all that I’ve know, there’s” Close-up of ring being thrown away “nothing here to run from” Int.Close-upof girl lip-syncing lyrics to the song. “’Cause yeah,everybodyhere’sgotsomebodyto lean on” FADE TO BLACK. *music interlude*