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1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.


This group explains about the plan that set up company of animation. This company
makes animations and entertains people by the animations. This company is aiming for
entertainig people every generation all over the world. So, this group are planning to
make famous this company in Japan firstly and spread company worldwide.




2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent
the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.


I think this group's document is easy to understand what this group is planning. We
read heading in this document and we can understand this group plan to makes
company of animation. Moreover, role of group members is divided closely and it seems
to be able to set up the company of animation.




3.What details are include in the document?


Making Animations and character's goods.
They are aiming for our animation become famous all over the world.




4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so,what is it?


No,it wasn't.




5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?


This article attracts the concern of the person who reads. Because it catches a modern
feature, I thought that it is a good article.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?


No,there aren't.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?


I think that I should write what approach to do concretely so that the enterpris
e may expand to Japan and the world in fuller detail.




8. Identify three basic differences between how your group authored the document
and how this group authored it?


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?


No,there aren't.




7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?


I think that I should write what approach to do concretely so that the enterpris
e may expand to Japan and the world in fuller detail.




8. Identify three basic differences between how your group authored the document
and how this group authored it?


*Kind of business(animation and mobile phone)
*Business expansion scale(World and Japan)
*Business expansion method

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Peer r ex1

  • 1. 1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. This group explains about the plan that set up company of animation. This company makes animations and entertains people by the animations. This company is aiming for entertainig people every generation all over the world. So, this group are planning to make famous this company in Japan firstly and spread company worldwide. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think this group's document is easy to understand what this group is planning. We read heading in this document and we can understand this group plan to makes company of animation. Moreover, role of group members is divided closely and it seems to be able to set up the company of animation. 3.What details are include in the document? Making Animations and character's goods. They are aiming for our animation become famous all over the world. 4.Was there anything that was confusing? If so,what is it? No,it wasn't. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? This article attracts the concern of the person who reads. Because it catches a modern feature, I thought that it is a good article. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No,there aren't.
  • 2. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? I think that I should write what approach to do concretely so that the enterpris e may expand to Japan and the world in fuller detail. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group authored the document and how this group authored it? 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No,there aren't. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? I think that I should write what approach to do concretely so that the enterpris e may expand to Japan and the world in fuller detail. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group authored the document and how this group authored it? *Kind of business(animation and mobile phone) *Business expansion scale(World and Japan) *Business expansion method