P1 Component 2
       Mitch Echelberger

  “Darkness cannot drive out
darkness; only light can do that.
Hate cannot drive out hate; only
       love can do that .”
   (Martin Luther King Jr .)
Content Overview
 The Position Shift              Rhetorical Strategy
    Before                          Narrative
    Shift                           Description
    After                           Tone and Diction
                                     Compare and Contrast
 Rhetorical Situation
    Communicator and Audience    Changes
    Purpose and Topic               Differing Audiences
    Medium and Context
Before
 Solid brotherhood.
 I was under my brother’s
  wing, he was a source of
  guidance.
 I idolized him, wanted to
  be just like him when I
  grew older.
 We were inseparable.
Shift
 We grew older and
    developed new friendships.
   We became less connected.
   Influenced by his new
    friends and began to
    experiment with drugs.
   Experimentation led to
    addiction.
   Tension and mutual change
    in feelings.
   I didn’t like him this way, he
    didn’t care.
   Relationship at all time low.
After
 Drew realized all the
    harm he caused.
   Desperately wanted
    reconciliation.
   Unable to immediately
    adjust.
   Patience served as a
    virtue.
   Brotherhood restored
Communicator and Audience

 I am the communicator to the audience .


 Audience would be my classmates/college
 students, as well as my college professor.
Topic and Purpose

 Topic
   Brotherhood is very important to me.



 Purpose
   Allow people to reflect on their own relationships.

   Show the dangers of drugs.

   Don’t be strangers to loved ones.
Medium and Context

 Medium
   Podcast posted to blog.

   Transcript posted to Blackboard.

   No feedback from audience.



 Context
   Tough to stay within the time constraints.

   Left things out due to time limit.

   Mix of telling my story and getting point across.
Narrative

 I used this technique for the majority of my podcast.
 Allowed audience to ease into my shift smoothly.
 Personal accounts from myself provides ability for
  audience to connect.
 Comfortable technique.
Description

 I used description to give the audience a first hand
  view.
 Provided people who don’t know me with a closer
  look at my life.
    Feelings
    Struggles
    Outcome
Tone and Diction

 Tone
   Didn’t go overboard.

   Changed during dialogue.

   Calm tone to get point across easily.



 Diction
   Rather simple so I could relate to everyone.

   I chose way this to keep the audience interested.
Compare and Contrast

 Podcast was used to show the shift.
   Uniformly for clearness.

   Went from good, to bad, and back to good.

   The podcast went from personal stories, enlightenment on the
    subject of drug abuse.
Changes

 I would make a few changes for different audiences.


 Children and elderly
   Leave out explicit fight description.



 Family and Friends
   Focus more on application to society
Summary

 Rhetorical Situation
   Purpose
        Have people reflect on their relationships, as well as be aware.
    Topic
    Audience
    Context
 Rhetorical Strategy
   Compare and Contrast

   Description

   Narrative
Work Cited
 “Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate
  cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.” "Martin Luther King, Jr.."
  BrainyQuote.com. Xplore Inc, 2012. 11 October 2012.
  http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/m/martin_luther_king
  _jr.html

P1 component 2

  • 1.
    P1 Component 2 Mitch Echelberger “Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that .” (Martin Luther King Jr .)
  • 2.
    Content Overview  ThePosition Shift  Rhetorical Strategy  Before  Narrative  Shift  Description  After  Tone and Diction  Compare and Contrast  Rhetorical Situation  Communicator and Audience  Changes  Purpose and Topic  Differing Audiences  Medium and Context
  • 3.
    Before  Solid brotherhood. I was under my brother’s wing, he was a source of guidance.  I idolized him, wanted to be just like him when I grew older.  We were inseparable.
  • 4.
    Shift  We grewolder and developed new friendships.  We became less connected.  Influenced by his new friends and began to experiment with drugs.  Experimentation led to addiction.  Tension and mutual change in feelings.  I didn’t like him this way, he didn’t care.  Relationship at all time low.
  • 5.
    After  Drew realizedall the harm he caused.  Desperately wanted reconciliation.  Unable to immediately adjust.  Patience served as a virtue.  Brotherhood restored
  • 6.
    Communicator and Audience I am the communicator to the audience .  Audience would be my classmates/college students, as well as my college professor.
  • 7.
    Topic and Purpose Topic  Brotherhood is very important to me.  Purpose  Allow people to reflect on their own relationships.  Show the dangers of drugs.  Don’t be strangers to loved ones.
  • 8.
    Medium and Context Medium  Podcast posted to blog.  Transcript posted to Blackboard.  No feedback from audience.  Context  Tough to stay within the time constraints.  Left things out due to time limit.  Mix of telling my story and getting point across.
  • 9.
    Narrative  I usedthis technique for the majority of my podcast.  Allowed audience to ease into my shift smoothly.  Personal accounts from myself provides ability for audience to connect.  Comfortable technique.
  • 10.
    Description  I useddescription to give the audience a first hand view.  Provided people who don’t know me with a closer look at my life.  Feelings  Struggles  Outcome
  • 11.
    Tone and Diction Tone  Didn’t go overboard.  Changed during dialogue.  Calm tone to get point across easily.  Diction  Rather simple so I could relate to everyone.  I chose way this to keep the audience interested.
  • 12.
    Compare and Contrast Podcast was used to show the shift.  Uniformly for clearness.  Went from good, to bad, and back to good.  The podcast went from personal stories, enlightenment on the subject of drug abuse.
  • 13.
    Changes  I wouldmake a few changes for different audiences.  Children and elderly  Leave out explicit fight description.  Family and Friends  Focus more on application to society
  • 14.
    Summary  Rhetorical Situation  Purpose  Have people reflect on their relationships, as well as be aware.  Topic  Audience  Context  Rhetorical Strategy  Compare and Contrast  Description  Narrative
  • 15.
    Work Cited  “Darknesscannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.” "Martin Luther King, Jr.." BrainyQuote.com. Xplore Inc, 2012. 11 October 2012. http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/m/martin_luther_king _jr.html