The document provides feedback on a magazine project. It notes that while the main image and conventions were presented well according to one reviewer, the main image was not well edited as lines around the head could be seen. To improve, the document recommends smoothing out lines in the main image to make it look more professional. It also suggests ensuring text positioning on the double page spread looks as polished as possible. Overall, the conventions of the music magazine were done well besides these noted areas for improvement.

2. MY OPINION
- With the feedback I got from ‘Nathan Carr’… I can safely say that I have
done quite well in presenting my magazine. Nathan has stated that the main
image along with the other conventions have been presented well, however
what he forgot to say is that the main image has not been edited well. If you
look closely you can see the lines around the main images head. What I should
be aiming to do is to smooth the lines out and make the picture better looking
as it is. For my double page spread I need to sort out the positioning of my
text so that it looks as professional as possible, besides this I think that I have
done well in the conventions of my music magazine.