The document discusses a student's attempts to create a magazine cover and article for a class project. In her second attempt, she improved the cover image by cropping it to fit the magazine size. She notes that she could add more text indicating it is a music magazine and consider changing the image since it depicts smoking. In further revisions, she added more music links to clarify the magazine type, and also added color and a slogan to attract readers and make the cover more appealing.

1. My magazine drafts
(cover/article)
Georgia Hudson

2. My Secord attempted at my
magazine, I’ve improved the
image on the cover also
cropped the image to make it
fit the size of the magazine. To
improve I should add more to
tell the audience that it’s a
music magazine and think
about changing the image as
someone is smoking on it.
This is my new and improved
magazine cover
I’ve added more music links to
shows the readers
what type of magazine it is
To further improve my magazine I added colour as it
draws the audience in to buy the magazine it also
makes it better to look at, I also added a slogan.
My Magazine cover
04/04/2017 By Georgia Hudson/ media Mr Skinner
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3. My magazine
article
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