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By Rachel, Rach and Jamie
Debt of a Mute
TITLE OF OUR FILM:
Why we named it this:
We decided to call our film this as we feel her music is a barrier between her and social
situations, when she does not have her earphones she loses the little confidence that
she had, This affects her as a person and affects her well being I.e why we chose the
first word to be debt.
Proposal
The short film we’re going to create is based around a girl
who cannot handle social situations or is generally anti social.
She always has her earphones in and unlike a music video the
short film is mostly based around her inner monologue and
music in each scene.
Characters,motivations and goals
Characters:
Poppy Bright -portrayed by Evie Henderson
Daniel Bright- portrayed by Alex Henderson
Motivations:
Poppy has no motivations, but to get through life without any social aspect. Apart from one exception, her brother.
Daniels motivation is to keep his sister happy and be her best friend as well as her younger brother.
Goals:
The main goal of Poppy Bright is to graduate college and get over her anxiety.
The goal of Daniel is to motivate his sister to be happy again, which is why he gave her, her device to listen to music on.
Scene 1
At the beginning the girl is in detention ,
as the teacher begins to shout she puts
her earphones in and exits.
At the same point her inner monologue
will start.
Song choice- Hit me with your best shot
Scene 2
She is in her favourite Coffee shop
Reminisces on her first time coming to the shop
with her brother
Girls in corner begin to laugh - she ignores
them
Gets up to leave and exits
While exiting one girl from the group of girls
follows her and runs of with her music device
(DISRUPTION)
Scene 3
Walks to market
When at the market she goes to the
sweet stall
When being served she begins to
stutter and stumble over her words
Song begins to play from a radio
Before the worst - The script
Scene 4
Sat down at the train station
anxious , overly aware because she is not used
to the sounds of the real world only her
music
Sits next to guy hears his music through his
loud earphones
Moves closer to him
He gets up and leaves.
Choice of song for scene - Mad World
Scene 5
Getting on train
She looks out the window as song plays
through train speakers
Song of choice - Don’t stop Believing
Gets off the train
Sits on a bench
Hears a whistle - sees brother with device
Runs over grabs device, puts in earphone and
hugs him
Demographics
The demographics of our short film:
Teenage girl 16-19
Probably students in school, college
E-D socio-economic background
Millennials
Small amount of disposable income
iGeneration
Higher education
Similar Films
Films like ours; One Flew Over The Cuckoo's nest, American Beauty, Fight Club,
Perks of Being a Wallflower, Me, Myself & Irene, American Psycho.
Consider us for funding because..
1. So that we can reach out to people who do not feel like
mental illness is to be considered as an illness. (Raises
awareness of mental health issues)
2. There is nothing too similar to our idea out on the
market
3. Teens will enjoy the film especially if they are
struggling with the same/similar issue can relate

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Debt of a Mute: A Girl's Musical Escape

  • 1. LO2 Pitch By Rachel, Rach and Jamie
  • 2. Debt of a Mute TITLE OF OUR FILM:
  • 3. Why we named it this: We decided to call our film this as we feel her music is a barrier between her and social situations, when she does not have her earphones she loses the little confidence that she had, This affects her as a person and affects her well being I.e why we chose the first word to be debt.
  • 4. Proposal The short film we’re going to create is based around a girl who cannot handle social situations or is generally anti social. She always has her earphones in and unlike a music video the short film is mostly based around her inner monologue and music in each scene.
  • 5. Characters,motivations and goals Characters: Poppy Bright -portrayed by Evie Henderson Daniel Bright- portrayed by Alex Henderson Motivations: Poppy has no motivations, but to get through life without any social aspect. Apart from one exception, her brother. Daniels motivation is to keep his sister happy and be her best friend as well as her younger brother. Goals: The main goal of Poppy Bright is to graduate college and get over her anxiety. The goal of Daniel is to motivate his sister to be happy again, which is why he gave her, her device to listen to music on.
  • 6. Scene 1 At the beginning the girl is in detention , as the teacher begins to shout she puts her earphones in and exits. At the same point her inner monologue will start. Song choice- Hit me with your best shot
  • 7. Scene 2 She is in her favourite Coffee shop Reminisces on her first time coming to the shop with her brother Girls in corner begin to laugh - she ignores them Gets up to leave and exits While exiting one girl from the group of girls follows her and runs of with her music device (DISRUPTION)
  • 8. Scene 3 Walks to market When at the market she goes to the sweet stall When being served she begins to stutter and stumble over her words Song begins to play from a radio Before the worst - The script
  • 9. Scene 4 Sat down at the train station anxious , overly aware because she is not used to the sounds of the real world only her music Sits next to guy hears his music through his loud earphones Moves closer to him He gets up and leaves. Choice of song for scene - Mad World
  • 10. Scene 5 Getting on train She looks out the window as song plays through train speakers Song of choice - Don’t stop Believing Gets off the train Sits on a bench Hears a whistle - sees brother with device Runs over grabs device, puts in earphone and hugs him
  • 11. Demographics The demographics of our short film: Teenage girl 16-19 Probably students in school, college E-D socio-economic background Millennials Small amount of disposable income iGeneration Higher education
  • 12. Similar Films Films like ours; One Flew Over The Cuckoo's nest, American Beauty, Fight Club, Perks of Being a Wallflower, Me, Myself & Irene, American Psycho.
  • 13. Consider us for funding because.. 1. So that we can reach out to people who do not feel like mental illness is to be considered as an illness. (Raises awareness of mental health issues) 2. There is nothing too similar to our idea out on the market 3. Teens will enjoy the film especially if they are struggling with the same/similar issue can relate