Genre: 
Realistic 
Fiction 
Lesson 11 Day 2 
Author: 
Patricia C. 
McKissack
Question of the Day 
If you were going to put on a show 
or play, what would it be about? 
If I were going to put on a _________. 
It would be about___________. 
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Oral Language
Today you are going to listen to 
the poem “A Good Play,” by 
Robert Louis Stevenson. 
What do you think the purpose might 
be for reading a poem about children 
playing? 
The purpose for reading a poem about children 
playing would be for enjoyment. 
T39 Read Aloud
A Good Play 
We built a ship upon the stairs 
All made of the back-bedroom chairs. 
And filled it full of soft pillows 
To go a-sailing on the billows. 
We took a saw and several nails, 
And water in the nursery pails; 
And Tom said, ”Let us also take 
An apple and a slice of cake,”--- 
Which was enough for Tom and me 
To go a-sailing on, till tea. 
We sailed along for days and days, 
And had the very best of plays; 
But Tom fell out and hurt his knee, 
So there was no one left but me. 
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How did the children build their ship? 
The children built their ship on the stairs and 
T39 Discuss the poem. 
they used pillows and chairs. 
Which words in the poem rhyme? 
The words in the poem that rhyme are stairs/chairs, 
pillows/billows, nails/pails, take/cake …
C-le Syllable 
Part A 
1.ripple 4. idle 
2.bundle 5. cable 
3.kettle 6. staple 
Who can tell me what is similar about these words? 
They all end with –le, and they all have one or two 
consonants before the –le. 
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Part A 
1.ripple rip/ple 
4. idle 
2.bundle bun/dle 
5. cable 
3.kettle ket/tle 
6. staple 
Remember the –le ad the consonant that comes 
before it form a syllable. 
Look at words 1-3 and tell me where each 
word is divided. 
They are divided between the consonants. 
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When a word has two consonants before the –le, 
the vowel sound in the first syllable is short. 
Now look at words 4-6 and tell me where these words are 
divided into syllables. 
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Part A 
1.ripple 4. idle 
2.bundle 5. cable 
3.kettle 6. staple 
i/dle 
ca/ble 
sta/ple 
They are divided after the first vowel. When a word has one 
consonant before –le, the vowel sound in the first syllable is 
long.
Can someone read these 
sentences for me? 
Dan’s uncle sat at the 
table. He cut the apple 
down the middle with 
no trouble. 
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Part B 
Which spelling is right? 
1. Another word for small is ________. little litle 
2. The name of the book is its _____. tile title 
3. A ______ is a baby’s toy. rattle ratle 
4. A light rain is a ______. drizle drizzle 
5. _____ syrup is made from treesap. Maple Male 
6. A small bite is a ______. nible nibble 
Remember that a consonant and –le form the final syllable, 
and the presence of two consonants before –le usually 
means the vowel sound in the first syllable is short. 
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1. How do you think the writer felt when 
his brother was encouraging him? 
Explain. 
2. Why was the writer’s success at free 
shots so brief? 
3. How did Vince’s chuckling make the 
writer feel? 
4. Why did the writer say that Gary’s 
voice was soothing? 
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5. How did Gary keep the writer from 
sobbing? 
6. What did Gary say to praise the 
writer? 
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Robust Vocabulary 
• Encouraging- Something 
that is encouraging gives 
someone hope or 
confidence. 
• What’s the word? 
• encouraging 
• Would you want to hear 
encouraging words? 
Explain.
Robust Vocabulary 
• brief- If something is brief, 
it does not take much time. 
• What is the word? 
• brief 
• If you ran for a brief time, 
would you be tired?
Robust Vocabulary 
• chuckling – If you are 
chuckling, you are laughing 
quietly to yourself. 
• What is the word? 
• chuckling 
• Would you hear chuckling 
at a funny movie or a sad 
movie?
Robust Vocabulary 
• soothing- Something that is 
soothing makes you feel calm 
• What is the word? 
• soothing 
• Would the sound of a loud 
motor or the sound of a 
fountain be soothing?
Robust Vocabulary 
• sobbed- Someone who 
sobbed cried very hard. 
• What is the word? 
• sobbed 
• Why might someone have 
sobbed at the end of a day? 
Explain.
Robust Vocabulary 
• praised- If you have 
praised someone, you have 
told that person that he or 
she did something well. 
• What is the word? 
• praised 
• When have you been 
praised?
Comprehension Strategy 
Use Story Structure to help you understand 
the problem, and the solution of the problem. 
Good readers pay attention at the 
beginning of a story to find out about the 
characters, the setting, and the problem 
faced by the characters. In the middle of the 
story, good readers look for important 
events that lead to the problem being solved 
at the end. 
T44 Comprehension Strategy Student Book page 306
Characters Setting 
Dana, Mrs .Lasiter, Carolyn, Mama, daddy, 
Granddaddy, Josh Greg, Steward, Debra Miller, 
Grandmama 
Problem or Plot 
Important Events 
Solution 
T 44 Practice Book page 93 
Pages 305-308 
Page 312 
Pages 302-319 
Pages 319 
Community center 
Carolyn worries that her parents love her siblings more. 
Dana and Josh perform successfully. Carolyn is too nervous to perform. 
Carolyn runs from the stage. Carolyn talks to her mother in the parking 
lot. 
Carolyn’s mother convinces her that she is loved as much as her brothers and 
sisters.
CHECK COMPREHENSION 
RETELL Remember that the plot is made up of the event, or 
things that happen, in a story. Keeping track of what is 
happening and when it happens can help a reader 
understand the story better. The plot includes the main 
character’s problem and the solution. Can someone tell me 
Carolyn’s main problem? 
Carolyn’s main problem is that she believes her 
parents love her siblings more than her. 
Now look at the graphic organizer you have been completing and 
use it to write a short summary of the story, including all the 
important events. 
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Focus Skill: Plot /Story Elements 
• Story Elements : Promethean Planet
FLUENCY 
Expression 
Reading With Expression Good readers show feeling and mood, or 
expression, as they read, matching what the writer has the 
characters say or think. For example, when a character is 
scared, a good reader will make his or her voice go higher. 
Readers can make their voices fierce for anger or squeaky and 
fast to show excitement. 
Now listen and follow along as I read page 311 . 
Reading with expression makes the story more interesting. 
Now we are going to get with our reading partners and 
practice reading with expression page 311. One will read 
one paragraph and then the other will read the next 
paragraph and so on till you finish that page. If you finish 
before I call time then read it again but this time you read 
your partners paragraph and let them read the paragraphs 
you just read. 
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BUILD ROBUST VOCABULARY 
swooned You might do this if you have a terrible shock or surprise that makes you 
faint or fall 
astonished To be amazed and surprised by something. 
envious When you want something that someone else has 
rivalry When two people compete against each other for something 
1. Carolyn felt envious of the way her parents 
treated her brother and sister. 
4.Would you be envious of a friend’s toy that you also had or a toy that 
you didn’t have? 
1. Carolyn feels a rivalry with her brother and sister 
because she thinks she is competing against them 
for her parents’ love. 
4. Would there be a rivalry between players on the same team or on 
two different teams? 
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Now list things that might make you envious of 
someone else and tell how the things on the list 
are alike and how are they different? 
Work with a partner to think of 
examples of rivalry. Then brainstorm 
words, such as competitive, to 
describe a rivalry. 
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Apply
DOL 
dogs’ are 
4. The dogs leashes is lost. 
M . 
5. my friends comforted me
GRAMMAR 
PLURAL POSSESSIVE NOUNS 
TEACH/MODEL Remember that plural means “more 
than one” and that a plural noun names more 
than one person, place, or thing. Most plural 
nouns end in s. If I want to show that one of 
these plural nouns owns or has something, I just 
add an apostrophe (‘) after the final s. 
The students desks are in a row. 
The word students is a plural noun and the 
students have the desks. We add an apostrophe to 
show that the desk belong to the students. 
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‘
Guided Practice 
The boys poems were good ones. 
The girls performances were wonderful. 
As I read the first sentence I see that the 
word boys should be made possessive 
because the poems belong to the boys. 
Can someone tell me where the 
T56 Guided Practice 
apostrophe should be. 
‘ 
Now look at this sentence and see if you can tell me what word should 
have an apostrophe and where it should go. 
‘
‘ 
‘ 
tigers 
T56 Practice/Apply 
PRACTICE /APPLY 
mothers friends 
‘ 
‘ 
teachers 
On a separate sheet of paper, write 
each word and then make it possessive. 
Now write a sentence using each word. 
Then share your sentence with your 
neighbor and check to make sure their 
plural possessive forms are correct.
WRITING 
PARAGRAPH THAT COMPARES 
Paragraph That Compares 
 Has a topic sentence that tells 
what is being compared. 
Tells how two or more things 
are alike. 
Uses signal words such as 
both, alike, and same. 
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Model Prewriting 
Now we are going to compare Fruits 
grow on plants 
T404 Practice/Apply 
and Vegetables. 
FRUITS VEGETABLES 
good to eat 
grow on trees and plants 
good for you 
colorful 
good to eat 
good for you 
colorful 
Is this trait also true of vegetables?
PRACTICE /APPLY 
Now you are going to write the names 
of two items you would like to compare 
as column headings like I did Fruit and 
T567Practice/Apply 
Vegetables. 
Now you will write the traits or 
qualities of each. You will need to keep 
this list for and an activity we are going 
to do on Wednesday.

Lesson 11 day 2

  • 1.
    Genre: Realistic Fiction Lesson 11 Day 2 Author: Patricia C. McKissack
  • 2.
    Question of theDay If you were going to put on a show or play, what would it be about? If I were going to put on a _________. It would be about___________. T38 Oral Language
  • 3.
    Today you aregoing to listen to the poem “A Good Play,” by Robert Louis Stevenson. What do you think the purpose might be for reading a poem about children playing? The purpose for reading a poem about children playing would be for enjoyment. T39 Read Aloud
  • 4.
    A Good Play We built a ship upon the stairs All made of the back-bedroom chairs. And filled it full of soft pillows To go a-sailing on the billows. We took a saw and several nails, And water in the nursery pails; And Tom said, ”Let us also take An apple and a slice of cake,”--- Which was enough for Tom and me To go a-sailing on, till tea. We sailed along for days and days, And had the very best of plays; But Tom fell out and hurt his knee, So there was no one left but me. T39 Transparency R71
  • 5.
    How did thechildren build their ship? The children built their ship on the stairs and T39 Discuss the poem. they used pillows and chairs. Which words in the poem rhyme? The words in the poem that rhyme are stairs/chairs, pillows/billows, nails/pails, take/cake …
  • 6.
    C-le Syllable PartA 1.ripple 4. idle 2.bundle 5. cable 3.kettle 6. staple Who can tell me what is similar about these words? They all end with –le, and they all have one or two consonants before the –le. T40 Transparency R72 Short Vowels + Final -el
  • 7.
    Part A 1.ripplerip/ple 4. idle 2.bundle bun/dle 5. cable 3.kettle ket/tle 6. staple Remember the –le ad the consonant that comes before it form a syllable. Look at words 1-3 and tell me where each word is divided. They are divided between the consonants. T40 Transparency R72 Short Vowels + Final -el
  • 8.
    When a wordhas two consonants before the –le, the vowel sound in the first syllable is short. Now look at words 4-6 and tell me where these words are divided into syllables. T40 Transparency R72 Part A 1.ripple 4. idle 2.bundle 5. cable 3.kettle 6. staple i/dle ca/ble sta/ple They are divided after the first vowel. When a word has one consonant before –le, the vowel sound in the first syllable is long.
  • 9.
    Can someone readthese sentences for me? Dan’s uncle sat at the table. He cut the apple down the middle with no trouble. T40 Transparency R72
  • 10.
    Part B Whichspelling is right? 1. Another word for small is ________. little litle 2. The name of the book is its _____. tile title 3. A ______ is a baby’s toy. rattle ratle 4. A light rain is a ______. drizle drizzle 5. _____ syrup is made from treesap. Maple Male 6. A small bite is a ______. nible nibble Remember that a consonant and –le form the final syllable, and the presence of two consonants before –le usually means the vowel sound in the first syllable is short. T41 Transparency R72 Use the Generalization
  • 12.
    1. How doyou think the writer felt when his brother was encouraging him? Explain. 2. Why was the writer’s success at free shots so brief? 3. How did Vince’s chuckling make the writer feel? 4. Why did the writer say that Gary’s voice was soothing? T 42 Develop Deeper Meaning
  • 13.
    5. How didGary keep the writer from sobbing? 6. What did Gary say to praise the writer? T 42 Develop Deeper Meaning
  • 14.
    Robust Vocabulary •Encouraging- Something that is encouraging gives someone hope or confidence. • What’s the word? • encouraging • Would you want to hear encouraging words? Explain.
  • 15.
    Robust Vocabulary •brief- If something is brief, it does not take much time. • What is the word? • brief • If you ran for a brief time, would you be tired?
  • 16.
    Robust Vocabulary •chuckling – If you are chuckling, you are laughing quietly to yourself. • What is the word? • chuckling • Would you hear chuckling at a funny movie or a sad movie?
  • 17.
    Robust Vocabulary •soothing- Something that is soothing makes you feel calm • What is the word? • soothing • Would the sound of a loud motor or the sound of a fountain be soothing?
  • 18.
    Robust Vocabulary •sobbed- Someone who sobbed cried very hard. • What is the word? • sobbed • Why might someone have sobbed at the end of a day? Explain.
  • 19.
    Robust Vocabulary •praised- If you have praised someone, you have told that person that he or she did something well. • What is the word? • praised • When have you been praised?
  • 20.
    Comprehension Strategy UseStory Structure to help you understand the problem, and the solution of the problem. Good readers pay attention at the beginning of a story to find out about the characters, the setting, and the problem faced by the characters. In the middle of the story, good readers look for important events that lead to the problem being solved at the end. T44 Comprehension Strategy Student Book page 306
  • 22.
    Characters Setting Dana,Mrs .Lasiter, Carolyn, Mama, daddy, Granddaddy, Josh Greg, Steward, Debra Miller, Grandmama Problem or Plot Important Events Solution T 44 Practice Book page 93 Pages 305-308 Page 312 Pages 302-319 Pages 319 Community center Carolyn worries that her parents love her siblings more. Dana and Josh perform successfully. Carolyn is too nervous to perform. Carolyn runs from the stage. Carolyn talks to her mother in the parking lot. Carolyn’s mother convinces her that she is loved as much as her brothers and sisters.
  • 23.
    CHECK COMPREHENSION RETELLRemember that the plot is made up of the event, or things that happen, in a story. Keeping track of what is happening and when it happens can help a reader understand the story better. The plot includes the main character’s problem and the solution. Can someone tell me Carolyn’s main problem? Carolyn’s main problem is that she believes her parents love her siblings more than her. Now look at the graphic organizer you have been completing and use it to write a short summary of the story, including all the important events. T 54
  • 24.
    Focus Skill: Plot/Story Elements • Story Elements : Promethean Planet
  • 25.
    FLUENCY Expression ReadingWith Expression Good readers show feeling and mood, or expression, as they read, matching what the writer has the characters say or think. For example, when a character is scared, a good reader will make his or her voice go higher. Readers can make their voices fierce for anger or squeaky and fast to show excitement. Now listen and follow along as I read page 311 . Reading with expression makes the story more interesting. Now we are going to get with our reading partners and practice reading with expression page 311. One will read one paragraph and then the other will read the next paragraph and so on till you finish that page. If you finish before I call time then read it again but this time you read your partners paragraph and let them read the paragraphs you just read. T54
  • 26.
    BUILD ROBUST VOCABULARY swooned You might do this if you have a terrible shock or surprise that makes you faint or fall astonished To be amazed and surprised by something. envious When you want something that someone else has rivalry When two people compete against each other for something 1. Carolyn felt envious of the way her parents treated her brother and sister. 4.Would you be envious of a friend’s toy that you also had or a toy that you didn’t have? 1. Carolyn feels a rivalry with her brother and sister because she thinks she is competing against them for her parents’ love. 4. Would there be a rivalry between players on the same team or on two different teams? T55 Transparency R70
  • 27.
    Now list thingsthat might make you envious of someone else and tell how the things on the list are alike and how are they different? Work with a partner to think of examples of rivalry. Then brainstorm words, such as competitive, to describe a rivalry. T 55 Practice / Apply
  • 28.
    DOL dogs’ are 4. The dogs leashes is lost. M . 5. my friends comforted me
  • 29.
    GRAMMAR PLURAL POSSESSIVENOUNS TEACH/MODEL Remember that plural means “more than one” and that a plural noun names more than one person, place, or thing. Most plural nouns end in s. If I want to show that one of these plural nouns owns or has something, I just add an apostrophe (‘) after the final s. The students desks are in a row. The word students is a plural noun and the students have the desks. We add an apostrophe to show that the desk belong to the students. T 56 ‘
  • 30.
    Guided Practice Theboys poems were good ones. The girls performances were wonderful. As I read the first sentence I see that the word boys should be made possessive because the poems belong to the boys. Can someone tell me where the T56 Guided Practice apostrophe should be. ‘ Now look at this sentence and see if you can tell me what word should have an apostrophe and where it should go. ‘
  • 31.
    ‘ ‘ tigers T56 Practice/Apply PRACTICE /APPLY mothers friends ‘ ‘ teachers On a separate sheet of paper, write each word and then make it possessive. Now write a sentence using each word. Then share your sentence with your neighbor and check to make sure their plural possessive forms are correct.
  • 32.
    WRITING PARAGRAPH THATCOMPARES Paragraph That Compares  Has a topic sentence that tells what is being compared. Tells how two or more things are alike. Uses signal words such as both, alike, and same. T57 Prewrite Transparency LA22
  • 33.
    Model Prewriting Nowwe are going to compare Fruits grow on plants T404 Practice/Apply and Vegetables. FRUITS VEGETABLES good to eat grow on trees and plants good for you colorful good to eat good for you colorful Is this trait also true of vegetables?
  • 34.
    PRACTICE /APPLY Nowyou are going to write the names of two items you would like to compare as column headings like I did Fruit and T567Practice/Apply Vegetables. Now you will write the traits or qualities of each. You will need to keep this list for and an activity we are going to do on Wednesday.